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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

OMG the dart scene was perfect,arjun hitting bull's eye looking into riya's eyes made me faint

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pravallika

@prava55663

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Awesome..

loved the dart scene...

Arjun was flirting with that girl...humesha aisa hi hota...arjun will get chance to be around girls..inta attractive jo hai😉

awesome dear...

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neeraja

@life93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

hi dear...is one shot ne to one shot mein hi gahaayal kar diya mujhe...just loved it...riya shooting parctice ki jagah dart board practice kar rai thi😆...n arjun supported riya even he was drugged...so sweet ariya

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Shru di...!!!!!!!!
awesum os...
grt wrk done by u...
loved it...
riya crimson haye...!!!!!
arjun drug oops...
riya jealous wow...
keep writing dis yay..
nice title di..
Dart scene cool hehe..
p.s. who is abb ??

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573339

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

awesome OS :) loved it

i was literally smiling the whole time while reading :)

that pub scene was awesome... arjun flirting with IKR's girlfriend and riya jealous 😆

looking forward to read more OS's like this from you

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

superb os...!!!👏⭐️

lvd it...!!!

the endng ws vry swt n cute...!!!!😳

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Aukview

@Aukview

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Sorry for the late one!

Love the OS!!

Looking forward to reading more stories written by you!! :)

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Shru

@funkylicious

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Love_Arnie
*edited*
I am like this >>
You wrote it for me... I freaking love you SKB
You're the limit of being a wonderful writer
I am speechless... It was amazing.
OMG! I can't express how much I loved this one.
'Voh nahi ayega toh tum nahi chalogi kya'... This small small punch lines(well, for me atleast... I find Arjun's taunting hillarious) this one cracked me up. 😆
And it was too romantic at the end... I blushed like hell...
Their nok-jhok portion was super good.
Specially, when Arjun was enjoying Rhea's jealousy.
You're too good at writing... Kitni baar bulawagi mujhse!!
Keep writing like this...
Love you sistah!🤗

Abb I love you too dear 😳
Haha kitni tareef kiya hai yaar marvane ka plan h kya tareefo se 😆
Too romantic 😳
mai kaha bolne laga rahi hu tu khud hi bol rahi hai 🤣
I am so happy that u liked it...thank u so much for requesting something like this 😳