Arhi FF: CheckMate! T3- Epilogue updated

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

'If there was one thing that Shyam's death propelled them towards a positive turn of tables- it was the general feeling to stop defending in the game and start avenging for his death.'

This line naturally takes the cake for the current chapter.

Happy to see the noose tightening around Rana's neck.

Now that Ashok knows about Shyam's reality...what will be the repercussions of this new found info. on the rest of the Raizada family?

Rana's downfall is bound to happen...but I get a feeling as though you have another ace up your sleeve...my intuitions are rarely wrong 😉 So am I right?

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joe_arhi

@joe_arhi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Amazing update. Poor Shyam 😭. Think anjali should knw abt shyam but it wld be hurting a lot for her. Update soon. Plz include me in ur PM list.

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

I really like the way you're moving this story. Its gripping and so clear in its approach. Really commendable!

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Weddings kicked in full swing.. I'm glad Rana is busy saving his own ass for sometime..
But now Ashok getting near to know about Shyam and the chance that Anjali may hear them. I'm wondering if she will listen or not and when she'll listen how she is going to behave...
Awesome update..
Btw Arush is really naughty..

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lusciouslucky

@lusciouslucky

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

omg...awesome update yaar...our littlt arush is such a cutie...n one thing no more rona dhona...bahut ho gaya
thanQ so much for PMing

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kaira101

@kaira101

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

awesome update

yay the preps have kick started

continue soon

thanx for the pm

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Feeling sad for shyamu - hope anji doesn't come to know about Shyam
Nice update abavi - happy to know that arnav is civil with gayathri
Will wait for ur next one along with DG

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

little naughty arush...tasting his mumma's mehandi...

well planed team arnav...single blow me hi udd gye rana baba...ab tumhara kya hoga...

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

I felt really bad to see Shyam die... I mean I have been bashing him for ages now, and you brought new perspective to Shyam. You made me almost love him and now that he's gone... I feel terrible... he did so much for them, and he could've done so much for this fight...

This mehendi scene was definitely to the point.. You had Khushi and the women enjoying the ceremony, oblivious to what's happening outside... and then on the other side, you have Ashok getting new info about Shyam, and Anjali entered right at the moment... it was like a scene pulled out from a movie... :) lovely update!!!