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sakhter90 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful update! Started off light with him debating the use of his heart but the atmosphere changed dramatically. I'm sure NK was practising his proposal when he was interrupted and then made a run for it!

I've always hated it even in the show when he used to accuse her of a gold digger continuously and degrade her class and she used to stay mum. And here he again did this. I am so glad that khushi busted at him. HE so deserved it!

Liked how she didn't defend or explain herself. Her reason for saying no was completely justifiable. There's only so much someone can take.

At last Arnav has had an inkling of what is at stake now that she said no. He has come to appreciate her presence in his life and thinking about not having that has made him go on all fours trying to find solace from his deceased mum. At least he is showing these emotions. So hes on the right path now.

Hopefully the misunderstanding will be cleared and he will fight for her properly without getting profits involved as that's something which really irked her. All women derserved to be wooed . Im glad that she told him about it. Hope he will treat her like a human being, a women and not another one of his project. But his got a long way to go to impress her.

Ps the poem was amazing. Very emotional.

Do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update... Arnav is aankein khol dii Khuhsiii ne
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Posted: 12 years ago
man this man
what do i say now
except you blooming dhakkan man
what to do with this man
he shall be the death of himself
why does he do this man
urggghhh he is really the most silliest man i have come across
why cant he get it that she left him because of what he said
how dare he do this to her and himself too
why does he do this
dude you have just gone and ruined things for yourself
and then he wonders why she isnt with him
duh if you say things like this why would she stay
she loves ya not for your riches and not for anything else
and today you just broke her that illusion
and then he wonders why this happens with him
poori baat jaane bigar hi yeh shuru ho jaate hain
man this dude shall be death of himself
why does he jump to conclusions so quickly
now suffer you silly one
so what now
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Posted: 12 years ago
Disha recommended this story to me.
Just read all thirteen chapters. It was hilarious and had fun reading it.
Arnav doesn't know how to express his love for Khushi and it was fun seeing him trying his est but ending up bungling it.
Shyam tried to help but, it was no use as Arnav doesn't know the R of romance.
Khushi getting upset with him and refusing to marry him in the thirteenth chapter might bring out the romantic in him.
It will be fun to see him on his knees in front of her trying to win her over.
Looking forward to reading the next part.
I am sending you a buddy request. Please PM me when you update next.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello, I'm extremely sorry for the late comment..

Haire Nandikishore, what just happened in the chapter??? Everything was going so well and this had to happen? 😲
Ramanchi Ramanchi Ramanchi!!! :'(
*Sighs* Dil toota mera.. 🥺
Will Arnav ever be able to redeem himself and will Khushi forgive him?

Thank you for the pm.. :)

Edited by -Shalu- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
so happy to be in the first page ...😊
beautiul update .simply superb...
waiting eagerly for next
Edited by ragvir.fan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey drear will u accept my apology to be so late at un-resing my comment if i say i was busy with studies since holidays got over and in holidays i was out of town ?
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coming two the updates chapter 13 and 14 together
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chapter 13 -

wow...it starts with dhak dhak's ...
arnav babua apka dil apke pyaar ko pehechan leta hai isliye gana bajane lagta hai 😆
He even thought once to send a memo to 'who may it concern' for creating such useless thing in human body. -- wrong arnav babua it is really useful thing 😆😉

...😲 jealousy coming...khushi and NK ..NK with a ring ?

Hinglish hahaa...


😲 😲 😲 OMG OMG ab yeh kya arnav ne gusse me ake usse hurt kara 😭
he should have heard what she wants to say

but ya i understand he was feeling vulnerable and like he would loose her ... :(
par in sab main usne sab kuch garbar kaar diya

" Do not..! Don't you dare Khushi Kumari Gupta..Now it's of no use. Your plan has brutally failed, though you did a commendable job. I was almost fallen for your traps."

arrggghh...what is he saying ? 😡 middle class gold digger girl like you? 😡



Edited by ..Gunjan.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kaise din aaye hai...I'm not even first 😒
But my name at the end of the chapter, brightened me up😃

If anyone else hasn't taken dibs on the same, please handover NK's phone to me...provided it has Arnav's number of course😳

Di gave the perfect advice...stop following your brain and follow your heart👏

I hope this is the last dard bharaa update...mujhse aur dukh sahaa nahi jaata

P.S. I loved the way Arnav kept on saying 'My Khushi!'😳

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