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ziya-farhannish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

I like ur story very much plz pm me when u update

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Shariqa_here

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

The bangles part was gorgeous in Ch 2! And Payal's explanation was hilarious. I wish someone could record that and play it to Arnav ...He would be like "What the!!" 😆

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Nimie207

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

This is really interesting...beautifully portrayed wat we missed on our show...pls pm on nxt update...

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Another nostalgia inducing update 😊!

Brinjal flavored jalebis? Buaji aur unki vichitra soch! 😆

Loved Payal's 'philosophy'! Wonder what Arnav would have thought about that explanation; I guess it would have been the same as that to Anjali's words "Ek ladki tumhare zindagi mein aayegi aur tumhari saanse ruk jaayengi!"

And the dhak dhak was just 😳

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stories.1408

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

good take on actual storyline.waiting for the next part.plz pm me then.

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rdforfun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

very nice ff. love it. well written

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

a very sweet start...continue soon

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pennyg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

ive just discovered ur story and loved it greatly
look forward to the nxt chapter
plz cud u pm

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praj.shrish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Shariqa_here
OMG Prajshrish that was a heavenly prologue followed by a bang on chapter 1.
Loved Khushi's piping hot jalebis😆 and ASR descending down the stairs...wow! It brought the exact scene in the serial in front of my eyes.

And hats off on your humorous and catchy style of writing...makes me want to read more and more😉

Thank you dear!

You know it's funny... this role reversal. This time you have commented on my story and I'm replying you. 😛 But it's a warm feeling to have.

Khushi's piping hot jalebis...hmmm...and don't forget to mention as sweet as her ...as Arnav thinks 😉...poor fellow 🥱her jalebis haunt him... even in dreams...😆

I would like to mention that ' Descending' word was suggested by Madhumi. I am lucky to have a friend like her who is excited more than me for this story and her positive suggestions.

Thank you for complementing my writing. I just try to write in such way so that readers would have a smile on their faces at the end.