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Originally posted by: Eccentrica
RES...will be late to unres 😭
Here I am!Praja...you did it!I so thoroughly enjoyed the chapter...me in dreamworld again...you beautifully described the emotions of both of them and created a masterpiece of an update!And the award for the best sentence goes to:As they unknowingly led astray into each other's eyes, Devi Maiyya must have laughed in heaven, somewhere at the foolishness of the event manager to waste so much of money on buying lots of crackers for proposed firework. They could have just arranged these two pairs of eyes to set in motion instead.Praja...I never would have thought of this dialogue and the mention of Devi Maiya just made the whole scene holy..mastach!Damn that Mami...why did she have to come so soon? Give these lovebirds a chance to be a part of an extended Rabba ve! 😳the end was also superb, truly ASR style. How is he going to proceed with this? And what about Shyam...you mentioned ke he's going to help...tyala kamaala lav! 😆Now for the criticism...I think I shouldn't say it for it remains the same...can we have longer updates...pretty please? 😊Edited again..I'm not changing the above matter since you've already read it.Praja, I committed a blunder...I read 6B without knowing that there was part 6A...so I take back my statement...the update was long and totally lovable.Now for comments on 6A:Anjali is finally doing something good; the way she held her chin was so awe inspiring..a cute moment indeed. Add to it the subsequent conversation between Anjali and Nani...ekdum zhakaas!Khushi's coy behaviour upon Anjali's admittance of having found a girl for her Chottey was justJaldi update kariye ji! 😉 Ab humse wait nahi hota!😳
I was laughing with my heart out after reading how you missed the first part initially ...Lol chaitu...🤣. But then I understand your eagerness to relive "Rabb Vey ' moments as being ARSHI fan myself. So the mistake you committed was reasonable. 😆 But I am glad you read first part later as it holds a hint for future chapters.😛
Hussh...You took back your words about longer update...! It's actually a longer one and I am already in short of my appointments with my editor Madhumi. My next update is still in a doubtful scenario as she has not edited it yet and you talk of longer updates...
How appropriately you mentioned about the scene 'Anjali holding Khushi's chin'. I wrote it down as it perfectly goes with loving and understanding character of Anjali. I feel such small gestures make story more descriptive. I added the Anjali- Nani convo as I really liked it when the duo were playing cupid in the show.
Now about the second part...I specifically parted the chapter into two to give 'Rabba Vey' undivided attention.
I am thoroughly revealed to read that the romance did fulfill all your expectations. 😃Truly your expectations were turning me into a pressure cooker kept on a burning flame...Husss...Now I can blow whistles 😉
Bingo!!!! Even me too liked the sentence so much and I could not have thought of it ever if Devi maiyya herself had not blessed me. After all whatever I write is because of Her blessings only.😊
[Manorama ispeaking: Hello..Hi..Bye..Bye...Kahe complainiya rahat ho hamare againstz? ha??Hum ka ab our housewa me wander bhi nahi sakat hai ka? Tellz your lovebirdswa ...jo bhi cricket khelana hai apane room mein ja ke play kare...😆]
Rule of Rabba Vey : Any Rabba Vey is incomplete without interference of family members and Aman's call of course
So I had to follow the rule you know...Never mind.😃
And Shyam is coming into actions soon...don't worry. .
P.S: For early updates , Please contact Madhumi.
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