SwaRon OS/FF : I Never Told you - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: nature2

usay chodo bas update soon 😃


Lol.. Ohkay
ya will update as soon as possible 😊
Edited by Swaron79 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Amazing piece...u r a lovely writer dear..keep up the good work..waiting for the next part😃

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
confused sharon is treat to watch .please update next one .dis one was amazing dear .thanx for pm .please update ASAP PLEASE😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Chotu update but it was really good.
Changed swayam is really needed for sometime to realise sharon that she too loves him.Their convo was kinda heart breaking.Hope this Missunderstanding clear soon.
Loved it
Waiting for next part eagerly.
Update it soon N Thanks for pm...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
nice update...
sharon confused n irritated wit swayam's cold behavior was well written
swayam didnt turn up even after her innumerable calls was a very new swayam.. it was nice to c him like this instead of hidin his pain for sharon's sake...
now sharon s rushin to get answers to her ques...
waitin for the next part...
thanks 4 d pm n pm me d next part😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
beautiful work yaar, plz continue fast
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Awesome...Thankq so much for the pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Plez pm me when u update next. ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
It was very small

But it was awesome and touching

Hope everything will be sorted out as Sharon is going to his place.

I really hope he comes to know what exactly happened

Next time please give a big update, please😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
hey that was really superb...very nicely penned part though it was short but it was meaningful thoroughly.

swayam was right in trying to go away from Sharon because he knew or rather trying to accept that they are not meant to be. nicely justified everything.

and then sharon's view were also nicely penned down...she wanted to know why he was like that and moreover why she was the reason for that.

the story is nicely shapped up what will irritated Sharon do now? eagerly waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...

Pratik...

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