First things first , This is a fantastic piece of writing !!!!! The 1st time I came across this story , I almost started reading it ,then I realized that you were planning to shift the last half parts to your blog . I thought there was no point in reading this as I was a groupbie at that time and I did not want to ask you for blog link coz I was a new reader of your work and it is not at all fair on my part to ask you also . So I just left it like that . Then I came this story once again and saw to my delight that you are planning to continue this in IF only . And boy I one for am so glad that you made that decision . I fell hook , line and sinker for this story . Fabulously penned !!!!!
You will just love to hate Arnav in this . He is ruthless B^*%^+*D . He has his own demons to fight and he takes it out on Khushi just because she shares an almost similar background as him and yet she is happy go lucky and does not crib or resent life . Man that was pathetic The way he exacted the revenge . But I feel he has various shades to his character just waiting to be explored . Your heart goes for Khushi for all the heart ache she has gone through . And man your pays is fabulous . This is the Payal I wanted to see on the show . She is a tigress looking out or her sister .
The way you have written down from Arnav's point of view the reason for such a strong hate was brilliant in the last chapter . But such hate is so uncalled for and undeserved . This marriage must be a real shocker to him . I am sooo looking forward for the confrontation between payal and Arnav and the future updates !!!!
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