Arshi FF: My Beloved Jaan Thread 2 Pg152

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Deepa

@deepa.e

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Posted: 12 years ago

#431

Aweswome back to back updates!!!!

Continue soon!!

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farha623

@farha623

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#432

awesome! !!! thx for the double update!!

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Mahnoor

@rockprincess123

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#433

OH... MY... UPDATEEE!!!!!! TALK ABOUT INTENSITYY!!!

Your prologue had me feeling a SPCTRUMMM OF EMOSHUNSSS... 😆 😆 😆

1) CURIOSITY:

You have no idea what was reeling in my head as soon the first couple of lines... "oh ma god! whats this?!? hus this person thts telling thier lifestory?? whats goin on?!?" (looolll)

2) ADMIRATION:

Your writing style was perfect!! Perfect, perfect and PERFECT!! It was probably one of the main reasons why your storyline was soo captivating and intersting to read.. you have inspired my writing dearie and I hope you dont mind if I aspire to try and adapt them in my writing in the future!!!

3) REMORSE... (BIGGG TYMM)

This prologue had me in tearsss.. 🥺 💔. It was like a moviee, and not to mention the heart breaking scenario of not being able to live life with one you lovee...

*sniffle snuffle* (excuse me, need to blow my nose)

Gosh, it ws just awesomeee!!

Overall, the whole thing was FAB! 👏 Luurved it :P

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RICHA

@ar_sajan4evr

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#434

lovely updates
arnv,,i sooo wshed he was able to introduce himself...;)
bdw hez already in a daze to c her...:P
nyccc
loved khushi's confidence
thnx 4 d pm
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cont soon :))