Arshi FF: My Beloved Jaan Thread 2 Pg152

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harsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Interesting concept 👏

Do continue soon

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Audiwalia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

This is interesting but don't u think kinjal was totally unfair toward karan... May be the man didn't love her but he did respect her didn't he???? May be not love but they could've became friends ...

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laksh65

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

awesome dear, first i thought i was reading a story which is not about arshi, but when i reached the para that kinjal gave birth to a baby girl, then i knew it has to be khushi which confirmed at the end.

great start cont soon.

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tvserial2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

different concept and an amazing prologue. please continue. thanks for the pm

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Sakina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Amazing, Splendid, Fabulous, Awesumm... Jus dnt hv words... Update Soon... Very Eager to read d story...

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EvrydayIRabbaVe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: nishi22
Awesum prologue..hats off to you..how do u get such ideas..amazing..waiting for story to start

Lolz they just come to my head 😊

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EvrydayIRabbaVe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Audiwalia
This is interesting but don't u think kinjal was totally unfair toward karan... May be the man didn't love her but he did respect her didn't he???? May be not love but they could've became friends ...

Maybe
More emotions and stuff will be revealed throughout the story

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Dynamix215

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

I love it.,.. so emo!!!!!

waitin 4 story to unfold!

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Noni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Omgg such an emotional letter.
Interesting concept...cant w8 4 ure story.

Keep it up!!

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ayushma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

This is really good, I loved the concept... the writing is very formal with very less to none use of slang words, which is what makes the story to be taken seriously. I'm definitely waiting for the next update. :)