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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey!
That was quite something. Emotional. Felt tears in my eyes. I was glued to the screen throughout reading the prologue. 😭
When I first started to read this, I was thinking that it was Khushi reading this. Later I found out obviously that it was her mother, Kinjal. Wow. A brave and courageous woman her mother was.
A beautiful story about her life. Her getting almost everything that she wanted ... but not her love. Not her life partner. Not being able to have the happiness she so deserves and that too, because of her father. How dare he call himself her father after making her sign her life away for the sake of money. Never mind the money part. Signing your childs life away for anything as such is horrible. Such people deserve to not have children. Other people in the world who aren't able to have children go through so much turmoil, wanting to have even one child ... to love and care for with all that they are and have ... and here was Kinjal's father who didn't fuking give a damn about his daughter! bas***d!!! 😡😡😡
Such a cheap and low blow by threatening Kinjal that he'll kill Adi. On top of that stating that she doesn't meet Adi ever as well as never divorcing him! W*F?!!! What a guy?! To call yourself a father and do something like this is f**king horrid!!!
I'm glad that Kinjal decided to have a baby. To love and care for. This must've helped her a hell of a lot and God knows that she needed this. I'm glad that Karan didn't force her to consummate their marriage in any way after reading this. Also, his nature doesn't seem to hurt Kinjal which is a good thing. The last thing she would've needed was a horrible and abusive husband on top of all the events that had occurred in her life quite recently. He was caring after they had sex. Sex which abled her to get pregnant with a child. The same child which Kinjal would love with all her heart.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its an awesome and fabulous prologue. Sounds very intresting. Plz continue soon. Liked the concept a lot.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
really interesting and intriguing 😊
please update soon... can't wait for khushi's reaction... is her mother still alive? what about her dad?
this is really good.. update for this one and LSAD SOOON!!!!!!!!!! THANKS AND CONGRATS ON THE NEW FF

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ASRandKKGSRFan

Hey!

That was quite something. Emotional. Felt tears in my eyes. I was glued to the screen throughout reading the prologue. 😭 it really was. i couldn't help but feel bad while i wrote it
When I first started to read this, I was thinking that it was Khushi reading this. Later I found out obviously that it was her mother, Kinjal. Wow. A brave and courageous woman her mother was. she really is
A beautiful story about her life. Her getting almost everything that she wanted ... but not her love. Not her life partner. Not being able to have the happiness she so deserves and that too, because of her father. How dare he call himself her father after making her sign her life away for the sake of money. Never mind the money part. Signing your childs life away for anything as such is horrible. Such people deserve to not have children. Other people in the world who aren't able to have children go through so much turmoil, wanting to have even one child ... to love and care for with all that they are and have ... and here was Kinjal's father who didn't fuking give a damn about his daughter! bas***d!!! 😡😡😡 he really truly is a b*st*rd
Such a cheap and low blow by threatening Kinjal that he'll kill Adi. On top of that stating that she doesn't meet Adi ever as well as never divorcing him! W*F?!!! What a guy?! To call yourself a father and do something like this is f**king horrid!!!
I'm glad that Kinjal decided to have a baby. To love and care for. This must've helped her a hell of a lot and God knows that she needed this. I'm glad that Karan didn't force her to consummate their marriage in any way after reading this. Also, his nature doesn't seem to hurt Kinjal which is a good thing. The last thing she would've needed was a horrible and abusive husband on top of all the events that had occurred in her life quite recently. He was caring after they had sex. Sex which abled her to get pregnant with a child. The same child which Kinjal would love with all her heart. Karan really is nice for that. He will pop around in the FF

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Posted: 12 years ago
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An emotional start
Arnav would be Aditya's son...taking a wild guess
Thx for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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U made me cry lol!:(
Loved the prologue:)
Cont. Soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bookaholic1988

this is so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanks!!

really interesting and intriguing 😊
please update soon... can't wait for khushi's reaction... is her mother still alive? you'll find out soon enough 😊 what about her dad? as for her dad , you'll also find out soon enough.
this is really good.. update for this one and LSAD SOOON!!!!!!!!!! I will try to soon, since i have exams this week THANKS AND CONGRATS ON THE NEW FF

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhadraprasad

An emotional start

Arnav would be Aditya's son...taking a wild guess
Thx for the PM


hmm? we'll see 😉 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: iamursforever

U made me cry lol!:(
Loved the prologue:)
Cont. Soon:)


aww! don't cry!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sound interesting...
Waiting for nxt...
Thnxxx for PM...

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