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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jessjazz

Just came across your story!!!! how is that possible?

Anyway, will start reading from the beginning... but this update was just yummy, with the cable and roller coaster rides. It sounded like fun, although am not too fond of roller coasters.



lol YUMMY??!!!! 😆😆😆 thnxxx!

and high five. i'm scared of roller coasters


and DO TELL ME how you found the previous parts 😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago


aw! thank you! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chemistry9

wow
awsm
lovd it
aww arnav was also scared
cute n sweet
n that shruti...hate hr
fantastc update
congrats on new thread
thnx fr d pm



hmmm! everybody hates her including me 😉😆


and thnx a lot!

i'm really happy that you liked it so much 😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: binc0802

congracts for thread 3.Nice update.Update soon.

Thanks for PM and please PM me for next.



thank you!

and sure! just buddy me, you''ll automatically get a PM 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rafaheli

Yayyy..Thread 3 !! *HIGH FIVES !!! 😛 👏

Thank you so sooo much for dedicating this to me!🤗 Hahah..*ME gusta..I survived a heart-attack! 😉
Waoww...WHAT AN UPDATE to begin this thread with !!!! Laughed my heart out ! 😆
Haayee..that cable car ride was way too adorable !
Just when I started to think that this cant get any better..You came up with that AWESOMEEE roller-coaster ride! LOL..Nervous ASR , Shocked Khushi and each of their dialogues...Haha..Can well imagine their facial expressions! 🤣

Thanks Mushfika for taking us for a ride to Switzerland on a cool Sunday afternoon !
LOL..Firse TREAT ??! Bahut demanding ho rahi ho aaj kal ! Par iss update ke liye to banta hai boss! 👍🏼
Hmmm. . .Ohk..this time mere taraf se..Arnav-shaped jalebi..! Njoy it along with a cup of coffee! 😉





ok i thought of not giving you a heart attack this time... so... here you go 🤣


ahahah! my dedication is nothing to your SUPER HIT comment rafaheli 😳😳😳

and here you are with ANOTHER FAB COMMENT which got me a HUGEEE smile in my face... when i woke up today, the first thing i did was to check the comments... and i was desperate to see your comment especially for ur extra sweetness 😆😆 and when i saw ur name commenting i was like: THERE YOU GO! FINALLY HER COMMENT>... and my lips curved a little to read the first few line and the roller coaster commentwa made me laugh out loud 🤣 love the gif

lol demanding ho rahi hoon?? 😲😲what the?! 😆😆 ek din mein update kiay is keliye to OFCOURSE TREAT HONI CHAHIYE!

and ANOTHER TREAT FROM YOUUU!!!! KYA TREAT DI HAI BOSS ! love you! 🤗

and sure! WITH A CUP OF COFFEE!

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey everyone! hope you all are doing well...

lol you guys will kill me with your commentwa one day! O MY GOSH! 😆 i'm really happy that you liked the ROLLER COASTER PART SO MUCH! EVERY SINGLE ONE MENTIONED ABOUT THA PART 🤣 thank you!

and my exams are starting from next week. so i might not update next friday. and here's today's update... this is all i could make for today... 😳

WANT PMs????? Buddy me pilij 😳😳


Part: 31

They both finally came back to the hotel still laughing and talking about the day. Shruti was upstairs talking to the manager when she saw Arnav and khushi in that state- laughing, and in each others arms.


Shruti came downstairs.

Shruti: hey guys! Wassup?

Khushi : hi shruti ji!

Arnav: hey shruti! Nothing, just tired. Had a long day with loads of crazy stuffs done with my crazy wife.

Khushi giggled at that making arnav smirk. shruti just fumed

Shruti: oh! I came here to actualy talk to khushi. Would you please excuse us for a second arnav?

Arnav: woah! Important talks without ME?!

Shruti: yap.

Arnav: alright. Go ahead. I need to make some important calls anyways.

They entered their room and both fell on their bed as they were too exhausted.

Arnav: ahhh! It was crazy!

Khushi: hmmm but it was super fun. I enjoyed a lot.

Arnav: o yah? The roller coaster too?

Khushi rolled her eyes.

Arnav: by the way, what was shruti talking about.

Khushi: oh I was about to ask you. She asked me if I could go out with her for shooping'' can I go?

Arnav: just you?

Khushi: yah! She said ladies are only allowed.

Arnav: oh okay! What time though?

Khushi: 1 PM sharp.

Arnav sadly: oh! You will leave me here like this? And enjoy the party?

He made a puppy face.

Khushi: oh no! if you don't want me to go, I won't. it's totally fine with me. Anyways, i'm not comfortable to go anywhere with anybody else other than you.

She shrugged.

Arnav was touched by that.

Arnav smiled at her: I was just joking khushi. Of course you can go. You don't need to ask me.

Khushi smiled back.


The next morning khushi got up a bit early and ordered their breakfast to their room. She went to have a shower. She came out of the washroom drying her hair when Arnav started twisting and turning in the bed . he kept his hands to khushi side expecting khushi to be there but the side was empty. He slowly opened his eyes to see khushi drying her hair

Arnav : Khushi? What do you think you're doing? Come back here right now!

He stretched his arms asking her to come back but

Khushi: Arnavji, It's eleven. You should get up! I already ordered our breakfast in our room.

Arnav: and where are you going?

Khushi: Arnavji you forgot? I'm going out with shruti for shopping.

Arnav: o yah right!

He got up and went to the washroom. As he came out they had their breakfast together and Khushi got ready.

Arnav: khushi, wear jeans. It's -5 outside. You'll freez if you're thinking to wear anarkalis.

Khushi was actually going to wear her anarkalis as she wants to wear them ONLY when she's with Arnav. But she thought it won't be a good idea considering the weather.

Khushi: Alright.

Khushi got ready and bid bye to Arnav

Arnav: take care of yourself. If it snows unfortunetly, walk carefully as the street gets slippery. And here's my credit card. Buy whatever you want. and come back soon. Bye

He kissed her right cheek making khushi blush

Khushi: bye arnav.

Khushi went to Shruti's room and they left for shopping.

they went some of the shopping malls and shruti already had 6 shopping bags in her hand.

Shruti: you know khushi, Arnav and I were best friends in college.

Khushi: yah! Arnav told me! You guys share a great chemistry.

Shruti: oh not to mention, we have ALWAYS shared a GREAT CHEMISTRY! We always helped each other in work.

Khushi nodded and her mind went to a deep thought.

Shruti continued: we trusted each other so much. We STILL DO! We were so close.

Now khushi was feeling too insecure and weird thoughts came into her mind. Close? Was shruti ji and Arnav that close to each other? What does she mean?

Shruti gave a evil smile . plan is been working!

Shruti: you know, once I got sprained ankle and Arnav took care of me in the college. He's great!

Arnavji took care of her?

They continued shopping for another 3 hours. Khushi got some necessary stuffs for herself and shopped for the family.

At about 6:30 Shruti and Khushi sat in a caf and ordered hot chocolate for them .

Shruti: Khushi, I'll be back from the nearby shop alright?

Khushi: oh, alright. I'll come with you too.

Shruti: oh no no! no need for that. You continue carry on with your hot chocolate. I'll be back within 15 minutes.

Khushi nodded.

Shruti left. Good luck khushi! I'll see how you get home now. Good bye!

15 minutes passed but shruti didn't come back yet

30 minutes.

40 minutes. Now khushi started panicking

Where did shrutiji go?

50 minutes passed

1 hour.

1 hour and 20 minutes

Waiter: mam,we're closing now.

Khushi: please give me 2 minutes

Waiter: sure!

After 5 minutes.

Waiter: mam, we're closing.

Khushi: please 2 minutes?

Waiter: no mam. It's already 9:10 we're supposed to close at 9.

Khushi reluctantly got up and stood outside the cafe.

It was getting darker and The area was getting quitter and quitter and a few people to be seen. Khushi's heart was filling with fear. She didn't know how to go back to the hotel. She didn't have the address. She left her cell phone with her. NOTHING.


that's all for today 😊 hope you liked it

don't forget to press the like button and comment okay? 😉

thank you!

Edited by Mushfika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update... Poor Khushi, I will hope that Khushi will think something of getting home by herself or Arnav will looking for her 😊 Please continues soon 😊
Edited by Prettychocoeye - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh! Shruthi is worst...i hate her more nw...poor khushi...bt why fear wen arnav is there😳... I loved it...awesome update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Prettychocoeye

Awesome update... Poor Khushi, I will hope that Khushi will think something of getting home by herself or Arnav will looking for her 😊 Please continues soon 😊




thank you!

unfortunetly won' update next friday as i mentioned in the note

but i'll try to make that up ASAP 😳

thnx for liking and ocmmenting

and lol keep hoping

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MahimaMV

Oh! Shruthi is worst...i hate her more nw...poor khushi...bt why fear wen arnav is there😳... I loved it...awesome update




aha! she IS! 😈

and you'll have a great time hating and taunting her


hihihihih

and thnx a lot!

glad you liiked it 😳

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