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Aishwarya

@EmpressSarayu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Just read all the chapters in one go! Its amazing the depth and the many facets of the characters. I can't wait to read what makes Arnav and how he's going to react to Khushi!

Payal is most intriguing!

He's in the RING! Woah! Can't wait to read more!

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MadAboutBarun

@MadAboutBarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

Hi,

I just stumbled upon your FF. it's awesome. U have a great writing style. Would love to read all your other works. Do you have an index?

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Deepa876

@Deepa876

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

Great update. Loved the father - daughter convo. Hmmm so Payal saved Khushi but why she and K's dad trying to hide that fact from her????? u made Shyam a virgin in this, a virgin writer who writes steamy sex scenes. Interesting. Finally lets see where does Arnav's chivalry lands him, high up in Khushi's eyes or in the hospital. I read ur note in the end. I know I'm a new reader but please can i still get the blog link. I would really really appreciate it.
My email-gr.chhabra@gmail.com

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KKKA

@KKKA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#354

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#355

Veee, for me ?? Thankyooo !

Loved the scene between Shashi and Khushi, beautiful.

Whats with Payal ? Anamika...the nameless one.

The chivalrous man in the ring? Chakravyuh :D Ab kya hoga?

You know my email ID :D More Glitter, please?

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#356

Hi... I found ur FF when i read chapter 14 of Doing this right... lovely update...:) though this is the first time Im reading ur work...

Coming to this FF... brilliant work... I love how ur developing the characters...:)

since I found it so late ill comment chapter wise...

Chapter 1:

Oh how I love Arnav... I must admit im a sucker for the bad boy full of arrogance and who better than Arnav Singh Raizada... As for Khushi , im loving this bad ass Khushi... Love how she wants a challenge...and also how she is aware of the effect she has on people...

Chapter 2:

Payal and Aakash... Payal seems to be a sincere stong minded girl... who just seems to be stuck in a rut... but i feel there is more to her than meets the eye...As for Aakash love how he respects shashi...and is not a huge fan of Khushi... Interesting...

Chapter 3:

Its funny how Aaskash cant make up his mind whether he hates Khushi or he wants to kiss and is attracted to her...

Very interesting conversation between Arnav and Khushi..." im the bas***d who steals his father's women' and "im the klepto who steals his father's man" that was just awesome... I love how they are so aware of who they are and are proud of it... they are both so similar...

Chapter 4:

This was a surprise... Anjali with a totally different character... Im curious about her background... N whether she is related to the lead characters...

As for Khushi like i said earlier there is more to her than meets the eye... like deep down she is a different person with this bad ass image being just a cover...

Chapter 5:

Oh boy... Lavanya is part of the whole thing too... felt bad for her... Anjali stopped herself from consoling Lavanya... wonder whether there bond will grow...

Khushi's accident... why does it seem tht shashi is being secretive about the person who caused the accident... he wants Aakash to stay out of it...

Shyam Jha finally made an entry... cant decide whether he is a positive charcter or not... he seems nice...but i guess will have to wait for more...

Chapter 6: shashi is hiding something from Khushi about Payal... and why did Payal lie to Khushi about her name... and there is something off about Khushi and shyam's friendship... Its not, for the lack of a better word, normal...

Arnav stepped into the ring... Well Khushi wanted a challenge and Arnav doesnt back out of one... cant wait to see what happens...

Okie i have gone on long enough... I didnt wanna club all chapters together and comment... It just didnt seem like I was doing justice...

Oh I read ur note... Ur moving this story to a blog... plz do send me the link... Ill PM u my email address...

Thanks

Cant wait to read more...

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nee

@march2011

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#357

so finally the mysterious woman is payal...

shyam a good character for once i loved itnad a virgin he is

khushi's character is just awesome loved it

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toblerone

@toblerone

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Posted: 12 years ago

#358

very nice update!! i love this cute father-daughter-duo, khushi's botox-comment was really funny 😃so the mysterious woman was payal/anamika!! what is she so nervous about??

arnav in the ring!! can't wait for that!!

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#359

That was awsome..bt didn't gt it why Payal worried??why she worrying about her identity?? Shashi's right Khushi is beautiful...loved the convorsation both had in the hospital... Shyam Manohar Jha is K's best friend?it came as a surprise... Arnav Singh Raizada in the Ring...wait to read the confrontation which will take place eventually bw these two...hoping there will be one... will uplease send me an invitation???here is my mailid shijinaraghavan2@gmail.com...

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ankii543

@ankii543

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#360

It was lovely...

There is something in this payal n shahi stuff...

Too less of arnav but hope for more...

Did he actually step into the ring...OMG OMG OMG...

Koi toh rok lo...

The story is smoothly unfolding..keeping me in suspense which i love...

Thanx for the email...:)

plz add me to ur blog if possible...

Anky

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