Arhi FF: Rules - Superhit Love Formulas- ch 7 updt - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
ROFL Loving this new concept , kHUSHI IS Such a Jhalli 😆😆 Loved the update sent u buddy request plz accept it 😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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read all parts in a go..awesome hilarious lovely amusing ...words are short 😃
i was about to choke due to laughing...😆
i loved it..
please pm me the next updates...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sanka Devi and her Antics...lol i loved it
on top of that TH EVER CRAZY RAIZADA FAMILY🤣🤣🤣
BECHARA ASR..KITNO KO SAMBHAALE GA😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONI26

ROFL Loving this new concept , kHUSHI IS Such a Jhalli 😆😆 Loved the update sent u buddy request plz accept it 😳😳


Thank you, glad you liked it, you in my buddy list😃.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mbbsrocks

Sanka Devi and her Antics...lol i loved it

on top of that TH EVER CRAZY RAIZADA FAMILY🤣🤣🤣
BECHARA ASR..KITNO KO SAMBHAALE GA😆


Yeah I can empathize with him😆,
Thanks for liking it😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
wen r u updating the nxt part???
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting for the next update !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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just read it all loved it pls pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi, sweeties, apologies for delaying this update for long, hope you haven't forgotten this FF 😆.
Okay confession time! Dear God and the Readers, the idea of this FF is partly inspired from a flop bollywood movie 😕, and the similarity just ends there.😃

The story and the given situations are solely my product of imagination set in IPK land and how Arnav Khushi would react to certain situations.😊

If it's inspired from a flop movie does not necessarily mean that my FF will a flop show as well, so rest assured😉🤣..
Chapter : 5
Since the temple incident Khushi, Nani and Anjali got along like a house on fire, given their common background Lucknow, they would often meet and chat for hours like long lost friends, generally talking about Lucknow, sweets, chikankari saris, at times nothing in particular and in a short span, Nani and Anjali grew very fond of Khushi, her chirpy nature, her contagious smile which could lighten up anybody's mood within seconds.

Like any other Sunday Khushi met Nani ji at the temple, who was not accompanied by Anjali.

"Anjali Ji did not come today", Khushi asked, as they proceeded to sit on the stairs after the completion of their regular poojas.

"Anjali bitiya has gone out on lunch with her husband, you see, her husband works as a lawyer in Lucknow, and since Anjali is expecting a baby, she is living with us, our Damad ji visits us whenever possible and pampers her a lot"

Khushi already knew about Anjali's condition, she just smiled, munching on Prasad from her plate. She knew that Nani ji and Anjali belonged to some big affluent family, what she did not know was that they were the Raizadas. And neither did Anjali or Nani felt the need to disclose it.

"Waise, Khushi bitiya when are you getting married, I know Payal would be the first in line, but your parents might have seen someone for you, or do you already have someone special in your life", Nani asked trying her luck, wishing her answer to be negative. Deep down Nani had made up her mind that Khushi would be the right choice for her khadoos grandson, who had no life other than his business. She knew Khushi would breathe life into his otherwise tediously boring life.

Just the mention of someone special brought a beautiful smile on Khushi's face, as thoughts of Arnav raced up in her mind.

"Yes...No,..Yes... I don't know", Khushi said not sure of her answer anymore.

Khushi's answer dampened all little hopes of Nani Ji.

"What do you mean?"

"I don't know Nani Ji, it's complicated"

Nani just rolled her eyes and sighed, these kids of today are not even sure about their relationships and come up with an easy excuse of 'it's complicated'.

"I like him, no, I love him, but he is unaware of my feelings for him" Khushi said, scrunching up her nose a little, finishing the last piece of the sweet from her thal.

"It's funny how one person can affect your life and is the centre of your universe, and guy in question doesn't even know you exist" she said downheartedly, eyeing the sweets in Nani Ji's thal ready gobble it up as well if allowed.

"Why haven't you expressed your feelings to him yet?" Nani asked trying to go more into the depth of the matter, as she offered her share of Prasad as well to Khushi who gladly took it.

"He is my boss, I don't even remember how long I've been in love with him, in fact I took the job just to be closer to him, I thought things would gradually fall into place after I join his office, but in reality, I can't even strike a decent conversation with him without making a fool out of myself", Khushi said, leaning her head against Nani Ji's shoulder, her face now crest fallen.

"For whom do you work bitiya?" Nani asked gently caressing her hair with her hand.

"Do you know the famous business tycoon, Arnav Singh Raizada, owner of AR fashion house, he is the reason for my sleepless nights" Khushi said the last part with an added huff.

"What?!", Nani jolted and turned with an abrupt movement making Khushi's head jerk a little at the sudden loss of support.

"What? What?", Khushi blinked her eyes, not understanding her reaction.

"You work for Arnav Singh Raizada?!"

And to say that Nani was shocked would be an understatement; she could not believe her ears. Just few moments ago, she could see her hopes getting crashed, and now all of sudden her dying hopes got rekindled; she couldn't stop smiling at her luck.

"Khushi bitiya, he is my...", Nani began say that she was Arnav's grandmother, but before she could complete her sentence, she was cut short by Khushi.

"I know Nani Ji what you are going to say", Nani looked at her disbelievingly, how did she know what she was going to say?

"...that he is cold, rude, and arrogant, that's what the media paints his picture like, but he is nothing like that" Khushi said trying to clear out any doubts on Nani's mind. While on the other hand Nani was completely amused, at the way Khushi was defending her Chotey.

"I know he is a bit Akdu types and I admit that he has anger management issues, but all in all he is a very nice person, in fact I make so many blunders at his office, yet he still overlooks them, you know he is very forgiving and his business acumen has no match you must be well aware of it", Khushi went on and on praising and exaggerating Arnav's qualities to Nani Ji, it reminded Nani Ji of prickly salesmen promoting their products determined to make a sale.

To use a word like forgiving and that too to describe Chotey would be an insult to the word forgiveness, somebody ask poor Hari Prakash how forgiving her Chotey actually was, Nani mentally thought, all while listening to Khushi building a mountain of his nonexistent qualities.

"If he is that much of 'nice' person, then what is the problem?", Nani thought to play along for a little while and not reveal her real identity.

"He is nice, but the problem is with me, the moment he walks in front of me, I turn into a pulp, start uttering random gibberish, forget about expressing myself, I just lose the focus and my mind as well"

Nani tried to hold back her laughter; here she was planning on how to bring Arnav Khushi together, and thinking would Khushi like her monster of a grandson? But Devi Maiyya had already completed half her task, as Khushi seemed to be mightily besotted with Arnav. She thought of helping Khushi a bit and suggested.

"Why don't you try the clichd, carrying too many files, bump into him, and you both pick them up, then start a conversation"

A picture of Arnav, Hulk Smashing Khushi flashed into her mind.

Khushi just shook her head, as that thought scared the living daylights out of her, "Oh no Nani Ji, bad idea, he'll maul me like an angry bear and tear me to pieces"

"Khushi bitiya you have to make an effort, if he doesn't notice you, then how is he supposed to know you" Nani tried to encourage her, after all Khushi winning over Arnav was beneficial to her as well.

"I don't know, maybe I'll think over it", Khushi said as she looked a little more composed.

"Okay bitiya, I'll take your leave, do ponder over it, you just need to be more confident, and take it easy", Nani got up to leave as her driver arrived to pick her up.

"Want me to drop you home?"

"No, thank you, Jiji is on her way from the library, we both will manage and thank you Nani Ji, you are very understanding", Khushi smiled at Nani Ji and hugged her.

Nani was not sure what Khushi harboured for Arnav was true love or mere attraction, only time would reveal, but she was glad that Khushi liked Arnav, as he wouldn't find a better life partner than Khushi. She couldn't wait to share the news with Anjali.

**

"Eat slowly Khushi and chew the food completely", Garima said to her daughter who was just swallowing her breakfast hurriedly.

"I'm getting late Amma, my boss will kill me if I'm not on time", Khushi said with her mouth already stuffed.

"Don't talk with your much full" Payal scowled and slapped on her wrist, feeling disgusted.

"Khushi me and your Babu Ji are going to the Sarita Aunty's daughter's marriage, we will be late home tonight"

"Alright, Amma, say my Namastey Sarita Aunty and bye, I must dash, I'm late", as she took her bag and ran out hastily.

**

Spinning the pen in her hand, Khushi was busy making a list of Arnav Singh Raizada's meetings and appointments for today, when a sharp snap of fingers made her look up.

"Hey you there! Tell ASR that La's here", she said snobbishly, looking at Khushi with disapproval, and then turning her face back to the vanity mirror in her hand and admiring her fake beauty.

She was too skinny and looked unrealistic, scantily clad in a clingy dress, which was barely covering her hips, showing off her long sticks like legs, her cleavage, which was barely any, exposed by a deep low cut of her dress; she looked fake, unnaturally thin and completely unhealthy. She must be an AR model Khushi came to a conclusion looking at her.

"La? Can you tell me your name please and do you have an appointment with ASR"

"Look Behenji, it's Lavanya and who put you in charge here, AR's level is certainly going down with you downmarket behenjies, don't you know me...Me?", she sneered in a snooty manner stressing more on 'me'.

"Oh, sorry, that I didn't recognise you, my bad, actually I left my bitchometer at home, otherwise it would have set off alerted me of your arrival" Khushi said with straight face, giving her a taste of her own medicine.

Lavanya's was mouth just hung open at her audacity and she was failing to come up with an equally insulting quick retort. True to the expression; models like her worked on single brain cell.

Arnav who was just passing by heard the conversation, and Khushi's last remark about Lavanya and he just couldn't help but smirk, knowing fully well how pretentious and snobbish Lavanya was.

"Lavanya come to my cabin", he said once looking at Khushi giving her an assurance with his eyes, that it's okay to let her in.

"ASR what kind of ill mannered ganwar people you have hired", she whined walking inside his cabin.

"Shut up Lavanya!", was the last that Khushi could possibly hear, before the door of his cabin clicked shut. She strained her ears to hear what was going on, but she could not catch a single word. As sudden pangs of jealousy surged inside her being. She banged her head against her desk in frustration.

Argh...Somebody stop me from committing a murder!

P.S. I don't hate Lavanya of IPK infact I loved her alot as La, she was a sweetheart and completely healthy 😆. But this La is nothing like her.😕
Liked it or not?😕
Please comment and let me know! Even a 'Nice Update' would do the trick 😉. So, don't hesitate from commenting.😃
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Edited by sweetly_sour - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Res
Me first!
Ab padhne jaati hoon! 😉
Maine publicity ke baare mein suna tha...but this kind of publicity? Who starts the introduction by saying that this FF is inspired from a flop movie? Humi yeh sirf tu hi kar sakti hai! 😆
Naniji, aap kamaal ki ho...ofcourse this chirpy girl is required to tame her khadoos grandson! And I imagined Nani rolling her eyes at Khushi's response... hilarious!
And even while she's talking about a pretty serious issue (I'm terming love as serious here; since Khushi is head over heels for Arnav), she couldn't take her eyes off the sweets in the thal. Humi i have a feeling that this Khushi is partly modeled on you...am I right? 😉
Bechaari Nani ko heart attack dene ka iraaada hai kya? you are making her take a roller coaster ride, raising her hopes, then dashing them and then again uplifting them.
Khushi does the job of a salesman aur woh bhi ekdum perfectly! 👍🏼
You say you don't hate the original La, then how come you portrayed in such a way that makes us scrunch our noses in disapproval over each and every thing of hers?
Bitchometer...bas kya naya term coin kiya hai! Loved it!

I had decided to give loads of 'constructive' 😉 criticism today..you know to make up for your and Iru's convo, but the update just broke through my fury and I couldn't help but write all good things about it. Plus update bhi accha khasa lamba tha! But since everything must be taken with a pinch of salt, I shall add one thing, don't make us wait any longer for the next chapter, warna hm readers strike pe jaayenge! 😆
Edited by Eccentrica - 12 years ago

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