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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey jaana
kaisi hai aap pehle tou thanks so much kii aapnein humare liyye upadte diyya despite you fingers and headache that's so nice of you hope kii aapki fingers aur headache theek ho
now coming to the part mujhe pata hai kii chahe aapnien mujhe iss part meiin bahut rulaya hai par sachii bataun ismien aapki koi galti nahin hai we all love ar so much kii oonka dard nahin dekha jaata humse aur aapnein jo oonka dard bayan kiyya hai naa itni khoobsoorati se ooske liyye alfaz nahin hai mere pas batane ko shuru se hii jaise armaan ne riddhima ko call kiyya manane ko binaa aapnein dard kii parvah kiyye oos se baat karke ooske karreb jaakar har pal vo ek nayyi maut marta hai pyaar kii maut yeh dekh kar kii vo ooski nahin ho sakti fir bhi oosnein kiyya kyonki vo jo rishta ooske saath share karta hai ose nahin khona chahta vo ooski zidnagi meiin rahein cahe ek dost ban kar hii ooski iss baat kee peeche aapnein bahut deep meaning samjha diyye jaana kii ''pyaar karne vaale aksar aapnein mehboob kee honthon kii hansi meiin aapna saara gam bhula dete hai chahe kisii doosre kee saath dekh kar oonke dill kee hazar tukde hii kyoon naa ho fir bhi vo hanstee hain'' yehi armaan nee kiyya ooske saath aaoni friendship kaa relation rakh kar pas rehna chaha and i love the especial dialogue riddhima says ''bye officer'' that shows the right she has on him to get mad chahe vo dikhana nahin pa rahii kii vo armaan se pyaar kar baithi hai par ooske zazbat alfazon keezariye sab keh deten hai just the mere word '' bye officer'' batata hai riddhima armaan par aapna sara haq samjhti hai naraz honein kaa ruthne kaa aur fir jaana aapnein jo armaan kaa pai show kiyya osmein bas itnaa kehna hai kii ''dill kee zakham jab gehra jaate hai tab yaa tou aanson sookh jaate hai yaa salilab ban kar bahar ate hai'' yehii jaana aapnein armaan kee saath bakhubi dikhaya kaise ooske aanson binaa bolee bhi sab kuch bol gayye aapki bhasha meiin jaana kii kaisee aaj tak oosnein kabhie pain ko pas nahin ane diyya kisii se nahin baanta sab akele saha par aaj riddhima kii sirff berukhi ne ose tod diyya aur ooske aandar kaa tufan aanson meiin behne laga hai i afrain kii yeh toofan armaan ko kahan tak todega aur then riddhima kaa dard tou bas koi nahin smaajh sakta hai itnaa dard hum chah kar bhi nahin samajh sakte jab iss stupid mind ko pata hai hum kisii aur kee hai fir bhi yeh pagal dill gustakhi kar baitta hai kisii aur kaa honein kii aur poochta bhi nahin hai humse yehii sab riddhima kee saath hai pata hai poore part meiin riddhim kaa ek question jo mere aandar bhi chal rahaa tha kii ose armaan se kyoon pyaar hua jabki vo tou rohan se enagage hai rohan se kkyoon nahin hua ose pyaar aur bas ekk hii zawab hai iskaa kii ''pyaar kahan kiyya jaata hai yeh tou o jaata hai aur hotaa bhi aisee hai kii aankhon se baarish ban kar behta hai yeh aisii baarish jo kabhie nahin thamti tab tak nahin jab tak hum oosko paa nahin lete'' yehii jaana aapnein riddhima kee aansons se dikhaya kaise vo har pal armaan kee pyaar meiin tut rahii hai aur khud se dur hokar ooske aur bhi pas jaa rahii hai sirff shareer se dur kiya oosneien armaan ko par ruh tou kabki armaan meiin sama gayyi aur jaana hats off kii aapnein kaise riddhima ko kashmakash dikhaya rohan aur armaan kee beech meiin pata hai jab do insanon meiin ek galat ho ek sahii choose karna easy hai par jab dono sahii tou choose karna mushkil hai yehii riddhima kee saath hai kisee chune pyaar ko jo vo sirff armaan se karti hai aisaa sachaa aur dill kii gehrayiyon vaala pyaar jo kisii aur se nahin kar paayegi aur doosri aur farz rohan jo humeha se ose chahata ose dokha degii vo kaise, jaana what you potryaed in riddhima's feelings is just awsome sab kuch bayan kar diyya tumne kuchh dilaoguses meiin riddhima kee poore dill kaa haal hats off tou you for this jaana aur jaana pata hai aapnein aur bhi khoobsoorati se dikhaya jab riddhima ne rohan ko kiss karne kaha actually merii nazar meiin vo farz kii rah par chalne kii koshish kar rahii thi aur bas yeh ''tujhe haq nahin den sakti mai tujhe keh nahin sakti aapko mohabbat kee baare meiin isiliiye chali hun mai khudd ko tabah karne terii iss sachii aur pak mohabbat meiin'' han jaana yeh lines maine isliyye kahii thi kyonki farz kii rah meiin riddhima aapni pak mohabbat jo ose armaan se hui haii oosmein vo khud ko barbad karti kyonki tan man ruh sab aapna astitav aapna har haq tou naa chahte hue bhi armaan kee nam kar diyya oosnein tou ose tou brbad honaa hii tha par oos se nahin hua yeh itnaa aasan nahin hai aur yeh jaana aapse bkhoobi koi nahin bata sakta kii ''dill ke tar jud gayye kahin tou mera shareer bhi vahin judna chahta hai ooske aagosh meiin smaana chahta hai har tarah se'' hats off to you when riddhima said 'oos se nahin hogaa' these meere words spoke intensity of AR's love which is unconfessed and then the dream pata hai mujhe humesha se pata tha kii yeh sach hogaa kyonki jab hum kisii se dilon jaan se mohabbat karte hai oonse humare dill kee tar jud jaate hai vaise hii riddhima nee armaan par ane vaala khatra pehle mehsoos kar liyya aur jaana then finally when armaan comes there saving riddhim standing in between the bullet and riddhima aur jab goli ooske dill ko chu kar nikli naa bas yehii honaa tha ''jo dill tera naa ho saken ose dhadkane kii izzazat nahin den sakta maii'' that's all i feels and riddhima's condiion just so much heart breaking yehii expected tha vo tou bas isliyye ooski sansein chal rahii thi kyonki osepata haii aagar armaan ko kch hotaa vo bhi nahin jee paati aur then theecene between juhi and riddhima is so heratw renching sachii hats off to you and then juhi aur rahul's scene how they said their son is fighter sachii meiin its so painful yet most beautiful emotion describing parents love for their child aur his friends how much they worried it showed how all loved him as he is gem if person evenn rohan jo ose kuchh din pehle milla tha jab vo bora feel kar sakta hai tou bakiyon kaa tou honaa tah aur riddhima kii tou jaan basketi hai armaan meiin eyh tou honaa hii tha naa jaana and i loved this scene when everybody ruhsed tehir jsut hearing the news loved him aur then riddhima kii prayers for armaan to ganesh jii is sachii meiin riddhima's prayer humari riddhima dmg vaali jo kii aab humari jaana kii riddhima kee aks meiin humein dikhti hai aur then the scene where she enters and armaan responds feeling her tears sachii meiin ''dill kii gehrayi ko pata hai kii ooski dhadkan ko ooska inttazar hai zarurat hai tou vo kaise jaa sakta hai dill ko dhadkan kee pas ana hii tha'' yehii armaan nee kiyya pata tha ooski dhadkan riddhima ooske binaa jee nahin paayegi tou vo laut aya aur riddhima nee bata diyya kii vo oos se bahut pyaar karti hai beinteha mohabbat aur jaana thank so much aur i truly salute you writing such a heartwarming and emotional part chahe rulaya par jaana aapnein zindagi aur mohabbat kee kuch asool bhi smajha diyya so thanks so much.
and yes riddhima aur rohan kaa relation bahut acahaa hai i adored him as a friend aur aab boora bhi lagta hai rohan kee liyye kash ooski life meiin koi aisii hoti jo ose bhi ootna hii pyaar karti jitna vo riddhima se karta hai tou shayad ose ane vaale kal meiin yeh jan kar dard naa hotaa kii jis se vo pyaar karta hai does not and will not evr love him back aur atul-anjali kaa scne bhi achaa tha hoa anjali orried for his baby sister and atul now understanding things between his brother and his saali sahiba
and now please aagar aapki ichaa hui tou contiue kar dijiyega please aur han jaana title well suited for the part really good one
with lots of love and regards aur aage part kaa wait kar rahi jaana
nikita
Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Congrats for fourth thread.
great update.
waiting for next update egarly.
continue soon.
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
hey thanks 4 de pm...congrats on new thread
de part was awesomeee..hope armaan gets alright sooonnn...awww rohan such a sweet friend...
cant wait 2 read de nxt prt...
continue sooonn

Edited by pari_044 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Hiii Asma...Awesome update...Loved it...sooo sad...poor ridzy...im in tears...rohan is a very good friend...armaan sooo sweet...he saved her again...glad armaan is ok...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Congratulation for new thread i like rohan but its high time that he should know the truth and cosider riddhima as a friend. and hope to see the confession soon plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
hey marvellous update...
god I was so scared for armaan..
he will be alright soon.
just want them to confess now..
do update next Part super soon.. can't wait now..
thanks for the pm..
and congrats for the new thread...:-D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Hey asma,
big hug and Congo on new thread.
Lovely ff.
And you are awesome as always.
Update was also very wonderful but don't you think they should confess now.
Will be waiting for that day.
Continue soon.
Congrats again!
Keep it up.
Love
sonu
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
first of all a heartly congratulations on new thread dear
omg u updates i am excited to read the update
beautiful update
poor soul ridhima
she is very emotional
loved it dear
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69

Hey Aasma

Woww you completed the part

Love the last installment

OMG those people want to kidnap Ridzy

Tahnk god Armaan came on tym to save her

But he is injured now

But thank god that he is fine

Ridzy ki Prayers kaam aayi

So Ridzy confess her love

Hope Armaan ne sun liya ho

Waiting to read more

So do update next Chapter soon

Thanks for the PM

Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

Edited by sweetdesire - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Many~many congo for ur new thread !!!!
ur deserve more & more!!😊😊😊
Now coming to the part ...dat was really touching..
u hve expressed each & every thing so wonderfully!!!
luved it yaar..TOTALLY...😃😃
N i must say u r d only one who is updating ff quickly..👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
so keep it dis way only
LUV U & UR FF...❤️😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

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