ArHi Collab -The Mistake#3 -Ch13, pg28 *Completed*

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

oh dear they are done for
the fact that those two sad women really dont know what they have done
they did it for fun but looks like things are gonna get bad for these two
i know its wrong for them to indulge in this kind of behaviour but they did
but what now
damn thats bad real bad
but thank god for payal it seems
god that girl gave us a right heart attack
saying she is pregnant
hope she can save these two
or else all shall be over for them
well if anyone can help them its her for sure
cant wait for the next bit
short but very informative

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saarah96

@saarah96

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

loved iit
ooh payal is so directt
so pam and sim made up a rumour when its actually true
lol,,and what will arhi do now,,hope they will bluff it=]

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

crap Sim and Pam let the story out, unfortunately

for them it is true

now Payal has come to do damage control

Edited by seeta_naips - 12 years ago

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Loved the way you used the names of most of thepopular ffs in the update. So Payal is not kabab mein haddi but Arnav's best friend. She is surely going to help them. Waiting to see what happens next.

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GirlOfFire

@GirlOfFire

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Darn - i was wondering what had happened to this story.. Glad to see it resurface again...!!!

NEXT, puh-Leej!!

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

awesome update! loved the bold and very direct payal!

OMg wats going to happen now!

cant wait to read more of it!

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

hahahah damn

payal is a lawyer she said so hopefully she can get them out of this mess

and pam and sim, jealous to the max, but its quite funny how what rumour they have spread is very true, apart from the fact that they are sleeping with each other just to bump up grades

and i love how you did the paragraph with some great FF names, worked well 😊

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Awesome update payal really a great character

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

awesome update loved the payal she is bold feisty and in your face awesome loved it so cute and she is a lawyer asr is going to need one loved the update beautifully done