ArHi Collab -The Mistake#3 -Ch13, pg28 *Completed* - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
nice chapter...actuallly more of a bomb dropped on readers...hahahah
we were not expecting this
but it was great
waiting for new

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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
finally you update it :)


what the hell people?!! it can't be happening
idiot sim and pam



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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
I loved the way u used all my fav FF names in this update..awesome one..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Thank God you updated. Loved the part...And Payal's character is too good to believe. She's amazing and totally different. So Pam n sim just spread this rumor without even knowing that how true it's. And Arnav n Khusi will never know about this...
I wonder what will happen next. This will sure make them regret everything and specially Arnav will feel more guilt ...
Special thnx for mentioning all those beautiful FFs. Can't wait for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Oh goodness gracious! what's with all the heart attack???

(will unres after I wake up)

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!@#$%^&!!!! What????!!!! Is this a joke???

I mean, what the hell! Just cause they were jealous, the idiots decide to spread rumors... it does not matter if the rumors are true or not! That's beyond the question! But dammit! why are they being separated this early! :(

To show the professor how big of a loser his favorite student is, they put it out on the news?!!! And you are trying to give me a heart attack?!

I wonder how Payal will turn this around...
Edited by aycma98 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Loved Payal !!!😃
But now whats to happen of our Hot professor and his not so young Lolita !!😕

ps: A very modest reflection of all current hot FF's !!🤣
Edited by _disha_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
phew!! Thnk God & V, Payal isnt pregnant n Is just Arnav's Best Frn!!

however SHIT!! for d mischief Pam & Sim created!!! freak,wat will happen wen others realize d r rumor is True!!😲

btw,noticed d names of d FFs!! Nice!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Poor Arnav and Khushi ! Hope it dunt create any MU btw them !
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
finally we got an update.. So good and nice..
Payal is so bang-on kinda person..
The way you so perfectly used Ff's name was amazing..😊
Now lets see how Payal saves them.. If only Pam & Sim knew!!!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Hahahaha, you've transformed payal into god knows what, its a miracle. loved it, and the news bit, epic

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