Kriyansh SS- Destiny's Game updt pg36 pms ltr

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey fellas..I'm here with another new SS, Here goes a short intro.

She say's he is changed.

He say's he is changed for her sake.

She thinks he doesn't love her any more.

He says he loves her more than anything else.

 She thinks their marriage isn't working.

He says their marriage is perfect but stuck in destiny's game.

What will happen when she comes to know about the reason behind his changed behavior?? Will she believe him or destiny has some other plans.

Scroll down for the part 1.

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Edited by lovely7010 - 12 years ago

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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Posted: 12 years ago

Here's the first chapter.

Chapter 1:

It was just the start of the day and rey started shouting.
Re: kriya!!!!!! meri coffee kahan hai???/
Kr: yeh rahi rey...She said panting in between.
Re: tumse ek coffee bhi jaldi nahi banayi jaati...saying this rey left the room.
Kriya was hurt so much. It had been 11 months since they were married. Their marriage was working and there was love between them but from the past 1 n 1/2 months rey started behaving differently. He used to shout at kriya, scold her, come late at nights drunk and some night he wouldn't come back at all. This hurt kriya so much. Even he had stopped making love to her and would try to maintain some distance from her. Kriya tried finding the reason behind this but all her tried were useless. They live in Delhi right now where rey owns a huge construction company and a dance institute. Both of them were named "KR". She came out of her thoughts and saw the time, it was half past 8 in the morning and she needed to hurry up or rey will be angry again for serving him the late break fast.

Some how kriya managed to prepare the break fast and it was sharp 9 and rey was on the dinning table. She served him and also sat down to have. Before she could put a spoon ful of food in her mouth she heard rey shouting " kriya??? Do you call this a breeak fast...itna ghatiya hai yeh"
Kriya dropped the spoon and rey left from there. As he left kriya began crying. She was fed up of this. Every day some thing would happen that would lead to the destruction her heart. The rey who never even spoke loudly with her was now actually shouting and scolding her for small things. She tasted the breakfast to know what was the fault but every thing was fine. She so badly wanted her old rey back.

I know very short...sorry for that but I had written a long one but due to power cut it got deleted.

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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Posted: 12 years ago

Index.

Chapter 1: pg 1
Chapter 2: pg 8


chapter 3: pg 15
chapter 4: pg 24

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

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Posted: 12 years ago

Yuppieee. . . . ,
me first,
me first,
me first. . . . . . .
*dhinchika dhinchika*
yayy yayyy yayyy. . . . .Now cuming to the ss. .
Wowww nice start. . .
Superb intro. . . . .
A very new concept. . .
Lovd it. . . . . . . .
Part 1 was awsome. .
Rey kriya ko kitna hurt ker raha hai. . . . ..
Pata nahi kyu inta rude and mean behave ker raha hai kriya ke satha. .
Now m hating dis rey. . .
Poor kriya,bechaari kitna sehan ker rahi hai. . . . .
Hope everythng gets well soon. . . . . . . . .Egarly waiting 4 d nxt update. . . , . Update really really really very soon.. . . .

Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago

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vipula

@angel_kriyaansh

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Posted: 12 years ago

res

unres

wwwooowww !!!!!!!

amazing!!!!!! luvd it to d coree!! read both d chap nw...suprb wrk!!

n soo sry deah...4 d late unres...😃😃

Edited by kriyaansh4evr - 12 years ago

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GARIMA

@grungta11

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Posted: 12 years ago

nyc start n do pm me wen u update nxt

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CHOCOLATEKRIYA

@CHOCOLATEKRIYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

completely different story and what the mistry behind the reys behaviour

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

nice start... par rey aisa kyu behave kar raha hai????...continue soon...

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rubykriyansh

@rubykriyansh

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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved d concept ..!
Very interesting ..!
Awsome update ..!
Hope rey tells d reason of his changed behaviour ..!
Update soon ..!
N do pm me wen u update ..!