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..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

A great prologue.

I loved the way you defined perfection in each of their cases.

Arnav has perfection in his business,looks...and to an outsider...its obviously the PERFECT life to be leading. Hence, he's the definition of perfection to an outsider.

While Khushi here, is the perfect human...in terms of her values which she projects outwards. :) Hence, the essence of perfection.

And the best part, no one is poor here. You can call them equals, in a way!

I'll look forward to reading more! :)

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: raomedhz
A great prologue.
I loved the way you defined perfection in each of their cases.
Arnav has perfection in his business,looks...and to an outsider...its obviously the PERFECT life to be leading. Hence, he's the definition of perfection to an outsider.

While Khushi here, is the perfect human...in terms of her values which she projects outwards. :) Hence, the essence of perfection.

And the best part, no one is poor here. You can call them equals, in a way!
I'll look forward to reading more! :)

Thank you :)

And making them 'equals' was kind of the plan. I got annoyed with Khushi always being the lower class, poor character she was portrayed as :/

I'll be updating soon! I'm glad you like it :)

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..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

I prefer stories where she's an equal too! That gives a better story telling opportunity that what we got to see already in the serial! :)

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_disha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Loved the prologue !

Cant wait for chapter !😃

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reallyhappy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

dis Arshi wud b hard 2 digest..lollovely intro..w8in 4 it 2 strt.:)

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Pakhi15cutegirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

and a perfect story...
i'm loving it...
plz make it spicy with arshi style... truly this is fantastic ...
go ahead...

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Thank you everyone for all your comments :)

I did read and like every single comment! They truly mean a lot to me!

And a special thanks to those who left comments longer than a few words<3

Because each words means a lot and it very encouraging for me to write and update faster ;D

Prologue 2 is posted below :)
Yes, I said Prologue 2! Read the note at the end of the next post to find out why.
Also! I've edited the Prologue on the first page if you'd like to check it out :)

-Anjani-

Edited by Titaliya_AP - 12 years ago