ArHi SS - P.E.R.F.E.C.T.I.O.N (Thd2 Link-Pg1) - Page 29

Originally posted by: hmtxyz

Ok..now this?

Miss Perfect, Mr. Perfect, Perfect couple, perfect families... aaahhh... all the makings of a perfect story, doncha think?

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Hehe, perfect perfect perfect! Lol.


I hope you like the next parts just as much :)

Originally posted by: Maddy1270

the introductory prolologues, especially the article one, really draws the readers in! with so much perfection, they're bound to be made for each other, right?! as arnav and khushi were reading about the other and recollecting the comments, I wondered for a moment if those had been said by each andoverheard by the other... nice to have proof that great minds think alike: each wanted to propose to the other! kudos to you for making khushi propose to arnav, surprising and confusing him no end... that must have been such a change from the usual! the scene of their first meeting, with both being mesmerised at first sight was very beautifully etched... some of the most beautifully descriptive lines were: Even before the door had fully unveiled one to the other, his eyes had moved down and hers had moved up, their gazes locking instantly. Warm dark brown with amber tones and soft hazel green with grey flecks met like never before. Both held a certain warmth and softness in them, but there were secrets as well. Sparking curiosity deep within one another, wanting to know the other and unravel the secrets for themselves.I could almost see the scene unfolding before my very eyes... that's the power of your writing!

with two such well-known personalities getting together, one can expect a media frenzy... then what price their privacy? it seems to have started as a marriage of convenience for their families' sakes, but the seeds of friendship have been sown... this relationship has the potential to grow into something deeper... however, the fact that they've jumped into this relationship without really knowing much about each other gives me pause... anyway an interesting premise that has great potential!

You're comment made me so happy! I hope you continue to enjoy like this :)


The prologues did what they were suppose to and chapter one did what it was supposed to as well. It surprised all of you! ;)


Can I tell you a secret? That line above took me forever to write! It just had to be perfect and I'm glad someone noticed :)


Hmm, yepp the whole sudden proposal and everything seems rushed! But maybe this next chapter will clear some things up :)

Originally posted by: Mini17

Very interesting and different!

The title is perfect for the perfect couple who have agreed to get married to find out whether they are perfect for each other.

Khushi is very different here and I liked her character description you have given through an article.

This is more like an arranged marriage where the couple find love after marriage. Of course with the adjustments, arguments, insecurities etc..., right?

Want to see what happens next...:)

I hated the Khushi they portrayed on screen sometimes and my Khushi is what I sometimes wish the on screen Khushi was like :)


Arranged marriage? I don't think so... But lets see :)


Next part coming up!

Originally posted by: aycma98

Honestly, I am a little surprised with Khushi and Arnav's rushed wedding, with no feelings whatsoever. So it is taking a while for me to grasp that concept. This is the first chapter, so I can't really make any guesses or draw any conclusions. We'll wait and see how they manage to save this relationship. Is this for real? or is it just a publicity stunt? Just because two people are claimed to be perfect, does not mean they need to be rushed to the altar... hmmm... I'm really excited to read how the story reveals! :D

Well understand this! It's been a while since the proposal Khushi made and they have gotten a chance to become friends or say no to one another. I mean, family was the reason the proposed marriage with one another as the other seemed perfect enough but even if their not in love they have agreed on this marriage together.

I hope that made sense... Anyways you'll see as it goes :)

That was a great update
Pls continue soon
Thanx

Di!
This chapter was such a pleasant surprise!
Maine bilkul expect nahi kiya tha ki unki engagement hogi! Aur phir kuch months mein shaadi! Eeeps! Just the thought excites me!
I could clearly imagine the grand event...their dresses...their rings...the smiles on their families' faces...everything!
And the last part! The last part stole my heart! I did not expect him to smile like that! Haye! That lop-sided smile. He clearly was mesmerized by her! So cute! It was a lovely moment.
A lovely update Di.
Cannot wait to read further!

Manu<3

In those 9 months these 2 are going to learn alot about each other... some good.. some not so good! I guess thats where the story really starts!