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the introductory prolologues, especially the article one, really draws the readers in! with so much perfection, they're bound to be made for each other, right?! as arnav and khushi were reading about the other and recollecting the comments, I wondered for a moment if those had been said by each and overheard by the other... nice to have proof that great minds think alike: each wanted to propose to the other! kudos to you for making khushi propose to arnav, surprising and confusing him no end... that must have been such a change from the usual! the scene of their first meeting, with both being mesmerised at first sight was very beautifully etched... some of the most beautifully descriptive lines were: Even before the door had fully unveiled one to the other, his eyes had moved down and hers had moved up, their gazes locking instantly. Warm dark brown with amber tones and soft hazel green with grey flecks met like never before. Both held a certain warmth and softness in them, but there were secrets as well. Sparking curiosity deep within one another, wanting to know the other and unravel the secrets for themselves. I could almost see the scene unfolding before my very eyes... that's the power of your writing!
with two such well-known personalities getting together, one can expect a media frenzy... then what price their privacy? it seems to have started as a marriage of convenience for their families' sakes, but the seeds of friendship have been sown... this relationship has the potential to grow into something deeper... however, the fact that they've jumped into this relationship without really knowing much about each other gives me pause... anyway an interesting premise that has great potential!
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