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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Wow how do your stories keep getting better & better?? I have read each one multiple times.

Love the fact that you have brought Dhruv home. Can't wait to see his interaction with his family. I want to see his reaction to meeting Khushi, since she's so different from Arnav.

Please continue!!!

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A_R_S

@A_R_S

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Again you have superbly described even the smallest things. It's always a pleasure to read ur OS. Hmm, u mentioned in ur comment on my FF, that u strongly have the feeling, maybe we are writing about the same person. But now we know it isn't, it's a different of one generation. Hehe 😉

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Fuzzbucket

@Fuzzbucket

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

i love reading your os's! you write pretty well, but at times i feel it's way tooo mushy😆 however, you are good at it and please keep on writing!

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Really nice introduction of the character. Whenever I read your One-Shots I get really angry on the creatives - Wish they were this creative and we could still have IPK on air. Damnit yaar- who the hell says they have no story left after the leads got married. The way you write your oneshots make me want to show them - 'Hey this is how you show the story after marriage' and the way you introduced the new character Dhruv - Too good. Firms my belief, the FF/OS writers on this forum are much more creative than the PH and the creatives. Would be waiting for the next part of this OS.

Good to know that you are an architect. Enjoy your job.

-Sarada

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Great! Wonder how the family will react after such a long time? Will Kushi be able to douse the fire? Will the estranged brothers be united again? Waiting to find out what happens next. Loved the morning "session" with Arnav/Kushi. Thanks for the PM. Waiting for the next update.😃

Edited by kbtr - 12 years ago

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abavi

@abavi

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Aparna, indeed great minds think alike😉... I had been planning for a reconcilation OS on Dhruv with family- a sequel to my os - An outsider and here I see you writing it! - and ofcourse its much better job done than mine!

Cant wait to read how you will take this further- Dhruv's flight journey should have been tiring and boring for him- but for me, your way of writing held me captivated 😛

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Soumya

@Siaa_Rickman

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

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Dhruv is certainily an intriguing character and so is his past! If he adored and admired his Bhaiyya so much, what went wrong to an extent that he'd avoided him and now has an uncanny nervousness to meet him and the rest of the family?

Very interesting!

He loves her tresses open and flowing

Till the next is updated, I'll be dreaming and dreaming and dreaming

Edited by -Siaa- - 12 years ago