IPKKND SS: Ruled with love Ch2+3 p5 CONCLUDE - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Another beautiful story on our favourite ArHi by you. I read "Hasde zindagi" and really liked it. So when I saw this story from you, I had to read it and I was not disappointed. You depict theor characters beautifully and show the love hidden behind their arrogance and misunderstandings. I almost cried at the end of the story when they hugged each other.

You are a terrific writer. i will wait for more stories. Please PM me. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Amazing...wonderful... beautiful... mind blowing...I don't know what to say. I just love your writing. It feels like I am watching the show. The emotions... dialogues... all seems so real. y the way I did not expect a letter from Arnav. Thanks for the PM. In future please let me know about your new FF/OS/SS ( I hope it will be soon😊)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow what beautuful piece of writing...as i said i have thot a part of it before but u gave a perfct ending i just couldn't believe that letter he had written for her ...really a perfect ending all her doubts concern vanished after reading the letter ...i guess that confrontation of arshi after marriage that she won't be able to love him broke him and he didn't wanted to see her hurt and he also knew that she hasn't read that letter bcoz he knew he wasn't the type of man that can get love from a girl like khushi ...he was hurt bcoz of her conditions her background she married him so rather than confessing his feelings he waited and waited for her to love him the way he loved her so he didn't force his feelings he was being himself for her to love him not an illusion or changed man or the man in love with her so that she loves the man who is asr and not arnav who loves her...u defined love in the most purest way to love the way u are...very thotful from arnav's pov rather than changing he was being himself waiting for her to love him ...another purest form wait intezaar...he didn't cheat nor deceived her but she was the one who didn't understand him he only wanted her confirmation for this marriage to work...so the most perfect ending i haven't thot of this part i couldn't imagine dis was coming ...if la wouldn't not have come she wouldn't be able to know his feelings neither would he make her realise his feelings...he thinks and assumes his own way...really a man of few words...i wished u provided us more details on what was written on the letter...i thot he would stop after receiving a peck from her(i thot it was more of a peck) but he didn't i wanted him to stop ...but really a great ending awesome it was really a finest piece of writing...thnx for the pm...loved it like hell...do pm me when u write a new story...
love u tk care...
Keep smilin...
God bless...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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luved it waiting for new stories
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Posted: 12 years ago
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excellent piece of work must say ,tooo good 😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46


just read the entire story

it is awesome

a beautiful story

loved it

plz come back soon with a new story

Edited by chandananagesh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
nice update but i think this time it was very fast😆 back to back 2 updates that too with THE END :(
loved your update..and poor innocent khushi too


but where are you going?
plz come back soon with a new story 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was beautiful! Please continue this!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you note!!

Thank you very much to all of you for your lovely comments, I think this SS has t to one of my personal best ones till date. Really enjoyed writing it here are your individual responses. As far as my presence as an ff writer in this forum is concerned, Im not all too sure whether I will be writing anything anytime soon. Ive got some ideas but nothing that I think will make you want to jump to read. I also feel that there is a lot views gained by by writing but very little response which is a little off putting when a lot of time goes into writing.

am sure I'll be back soon with something more. Ive had a few pms requesting me to continue some of my OS's SS's into ffs. If a number of you guys want to read an ff on a particular ff of mine please let me know here.

At last thank you for reading and please feel to drop me a me or reply to this thread and any of my comments.


@ Noreen

Am I right in thinking you are one of my readers from way back. Thank you for following me it's a pleasure having you read. Lovely to see you here.

@chavvi16

hey, thank you for reading and yes there was a slight turn to the whole plot in the end where by characters were shown in a different light. Sometimes what we see from one angle isn't always the whole picture so this was the idea here. – hope you liked it.

@ Nidsubh007

hey, yey ASR was already in love with her..khushi just fail to understand him that's all. Kind of judged him without giving him a chance. Like I say im not sure of whats to come next in terms of writing for this forum but I will probably post something sooner or later. – thank you for reading.

Allegro

Aw I'm glad you liked the conclude, thank you very much for reading and commenting.

Yappingduck

Very kind of you to use the word beautiful, just nice to have such amazing readers. – thank you.

pri3love

hey there, You are to kind with your words, I simply write out what comes to mind and that is all. Im glad you liked liked this SS and Hasde zindagi too. please do take a look at my index and feel free to read anything you may not have come across. I have one or two more written pieces on ipkknd apart from these to.

Its wonderful to have readers such as urself, your comments and fellowship is much appreciated.

HeBarun21

Thank you very much.!


tvserial2012

Thanking you for all your love and when you say you can picture my writing in your mind that's the best compliment you could ever have given so thank you very much.

I'm not too sure about future works but I will be sure to pm and please feel free to look through my index hoping you find things you like in their. – thank you again

samia19

thank you very much for reading…!!

Avinaarshi

Hey thank you very much for reading and comment, a little unsure of when and what will come next interms of ffs but if I do write something new I will be sure to let you know.

Casker

Thank you very much for reading.

Ajoop

Thank you very much.

Chandananagesh

Aw thank you very much for reading..and I did intend it to be an OS so its probably a good thing that you read it in one go. You probably got the type of effect I was aiming for when I wrote this. – thanks and you are one hell of a reader..to go through it all at once!! :P

aanchu19

I thought readers loved it when ff writers updated with haste!!lol like I keep saying I wanted it to be an os in the first place I think if I had dragged it out it would have lost its touch.

Thank you very much for following my writing, always a pleasure reading your comments. I am a little preoccupied with job searching/ working at the moment and haven't really had very many creative ideas so I was thinking of taking a break for a while whislt I decide wether there is anything else that comes to mind that I would really like to share. Response to my ffs seem quite low as well which is a little discouraging so I was thinking of giving it a rest for a while.

Suwin

Thanking you for taking the time out to read and comment.

IPKlover

Aw thank you very much for reading and commenting. Its nice to know you enjoyed this but It was written as an OS so Ive never really thought about extending it further to be honest.

Having said this..i should be back with something new soon..still unsure about it but fingers crossed.


samaz95

Thanking you for reading and making it even better.

Rockingchamp

Aw you know what your comments always brighten up my day because you're a reader after my own heart. I'm totally one to read into the very smallest of details, feelings, meanings and that seems very much like you too.

You've summed up my SS In the most perfect of words, just as you say arnav fell in love with her yet he wanted her too fall in love with him.. Arnav singh raizada, the man he was not an changed version of him so he let her be. let her assume that things were the way she saw them to be and never bothered to correct her. mostly because he was somewhat heartbroken by the fact that she had been so quick to judge him and not consider that there may be more to him than is seen on the surface. The letter was the turning point in the whole concept where id hoped that even the reader that would have judged ASRs character now would have realized the significance of false assumption.

As for what happened between the two of them in terms of physical relationship. Contemplating whether or not to portray that within this chapter was what took me so long to update. I thought about it over and over again..and decided that arnav would go ahead and make a more significant move rather than stopping himself just because if he had stopped at her kiss a 'softer' side maybe a side that did love her deep down would be too quickly revaled to the reader and the letter..the impact of arnav singh raizadas love at the end would have not been as much of a twist. I wanted you guys and khushi..to be confused as to what was going on in the mind of ASR.

When it came to the actual letter there was so much that could have gone in there, I decided more is less and its probably better to leave it up to reader imagination or just think of it as words written by Arnav singh raizada only for the woman he loves an no one else.

Thank you for always following and reading my writing with so much detail and love. Will be sure to let you know of anything new I write.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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yes, it's me from way back!!! i have always loved reading your work and the bas ek guzarish was my fav from the concept of ltl1

i am chuffed you still remember me!!!

plz keep writing more of your wonderful stories for ipkynd as this serial was ruined just as ltl1 was by mishal/dutta leaving

thnks!!

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