IPKKND SS: Ruled with love Ch2+3 p5 CONCLUDE - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Siaa-

I love the way you've described the emotions!


Khushi is a woman with flaw but one can't help but feel sorry for her..She'd expected herself not to like him leave alone love him and now that she's fallen in love with him..her very own conditions and terms are backfiring at her..

To see a man whom she now loves must be very painful for her... :(


ASR is after all ASR...true to his nature..and he doesn't let go of the opportunity to give a dose of her own medicine making it all the more worse for Khushi...!

And her outburst..very understandable!!


Waiting to see how Khushi tackles her feelings and what does ASR do..

I hope that you'll update quick :)



Hey
You got it in one..i dont think anyone can summarize this SS the way you just have not even me😉
first of all thank you very much for reading and i'm so glad you liked it.
There is no other way in which i could termed khushis feelings, like you say shes set her own conditions which are now proving to be wrong.
She was probably wrong to judge him even before she witnessed him in the role of her husband and now shes fallen in love..well Arnav singh raizada isnt really the type to forgive. The mix of anger from the current incident with laavanya, public humiliation and probably resentment for khushis condition never to love him is all visible the way he was seen behaving the last chapter.
Khushi is just a sole in awe of what her heart tells her..at first it was not to love him and now..now she is in love with him she has to deal with her own web of circumstances.
The next chapter will be added very soon, if not today then in the next day or so.
It was originally intended to be an OS which i decided to slit into two chapters..so as per plan it would end with the next chapter but.. lets see..not too sure yet.
Thank you very much for your comment it was a pleasure reading your feedback.
Jagruti

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Posted: 12 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: jagrutid



hah thank you very much for reading and i'm glad you liked it. As far as the storyline goes khushi judged Arnav even before she married him and decided that she wouldn't fall in love for him, just because of the type of man she thinks he is. A bit of a womanizer , power mad and rich i guess.
But now shes witnessing him around other wemon shes realized that she does have feelings for him. As far as not wanting to see her that was only a in the heat of the moment type comment, a little bit like hes saying he doesn't want her see her until things die down..until he sorts out whatever is going on in his event downstairs. it wasn't intended to be a i dont want to see you ever again type thing he'll be back thats for sure.
this was very much intended to be an OS so things will begin to makes sense more in the next chapter i hope.





is that so? 😆

ohkay then, i am all set to read your next update 😃😳

plz update soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aanchu19




is that so? 😆

ohkay then, i am all set to read your next update 😃😳

plz update soon😃




aw yey, he wants to see her alright😉😆 for what reason, i'll leave that a suspence. will be back with the next chapter soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting concept, please pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: samia19

interesting concept, please pm me when u update



thank you very much will be sure to pm you soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really enjoyed a lot!!
Did khushi's babuji had some major illness? N she got married so that She"ll get money.
What were khushi's conditions prior to marriage? Why arnie was ready to get married wid khushi?
N now as khushi confessed she loved arnie how's he going to react !
Plz update soon.. N kindly pm me, will u?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i cant believe she is married to this guy
agreed its a marriage of convinience but this doesnt mean you are gonna do such things still
wait why did she marry this womaniser
hmmm what we need is to make him realise what it feels like when someone tramples on their heart
does he give a damn about her of course not
what will khushi do now
i would say just leave him the hell with that man
gosh he has to be made to realise what he is doing aint right
but i guess it wont happen huh
look forward to more

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhaktiii

Really enjoyed a lot!!
Did khushi's babuji had some major illness? N she got married so that She"ll get money.
What were khushi's conditions prior to marriage? Why arnie was ready to get married wid khushi?
N now as khushi confessed she loved arnie how's he going to react !
Plz update soon.. N kindly pm me, will u?



Thank you very much and of course i will pm you the next chapter. Yey there was a line in the very begging of the chapter that said khushi agreed to marry arnav thinking of her ill farther and for anjali who she became gradually fond of. For others basically. Answers to your other questions, why he wanted to marry her and all about khushis condition the only one is addressed in the next chapter. She basically pleged that she would never love him based on what her perceptions of him were. Hopefully all will jel together in the next chapter. Will update soon, thank you very much for reading with such attention to detail.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chavvi16

i cant believe she is married to this guy
agreed its a marriage of convinience but this doesnt mean you are gonna do such things still
wait why did she marry this womaniser
hmmm what we need is to make him realise what it feels like when someone tramples on their heart
does he give a damn about her of course not
what will khushi do now
i would say just leave him the hell with that man
gosh he has to be made to realise what he is doing aint right
but i guess it wont happen huh
look forward to more



hello, thank you very much for reading and my god was i waiting for somebody to react like you have to this chapter..lol this is just what i wanted.😃
yep theres lots of questions as to why she married him, ok i put in there that she did it for her ill farther and the sake of others but questions such what right he has to act the way he does, does he even realize what type of impact the way he behaves has on his wife??.

All these are relevant at this point but ive taken a slightly different angle to the one you guys probably see right now and because this was intended to originally be an OS you guys have been left at a point where all these questions wouldnt have been so focal if it was an OS. So all i have to say is those questions will be answered in the next update which might or might not change your perspective on this fiction.
i will update soon and i'd love to hear your take on it after the next chapter which will complete what remains of the two parts.
thank you very much..loved replying and reading to your comment.
jagruti
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow what a start ...u always strike a different and a beautiful chord...i always had something similar in my mind long before but i not being a talnted as you are so could not pen down my thots...i have always thot man have desires and the women he marries forbids his desires saying she cant love him and has married for family pressure or whatever it is ...so the man needs someone to satisfy his desires reallly a lovely update...loved to the core she made it clear on the marriage day itself that she will not fall in love wid him and will also not fulfill his desires but being close to a person whom u hate 24*7 will always make u feel something bcoz hate is also a feeling what matters the most is u feel something...atlast her anger vented out and she confessed ...great part was that it was from khushi's pov ...i just wanted to know how she fell for him ...my guess would be the constant reminder in her mind to not to fall for him make her heart ponder over him ...bcoz love just happens...thnx for the pm...it really is lovely...waiting for the next part...continue soon...
Love u tk care...
Keep smilin...
God bless...thnx for the pm

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