ArHi FF: Finding Solace# 3 *Completed*

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#901

Surprise surprise surprise.. Here i thot dat dey finally gave into deir wants n wat i come to know is dat interestingly khushi's want for sleep ovrpowered!.. Hehehe lol.. Dis part was soo much fun to read.. Arya is soo lyk her daddy possessive abt her thngs..;) dats why she was all d time scowling at payal.. No wonder she's a daddy's daughter.. Btw i jst luvd payash moments.. I can't remember any ff dat read in wich i laughed soo hard reading abt payash.. Dey were adorable. Aaskash's incesstant flirting n payal's bashful rearks.. Dey were rlly funny.. N finally our arshi ver jst perfct.. Both caring for each other.. Puttin the other one before self.. Awww dat was soo mesmerizing.. Arnav is damm good.. Luvd dis post rlly lots..
Post nxt part soon can't wait to read more abt payal n aakash's fights n remarks!

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Tina

@TinaEskay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#902

i kinda forget about everything and just focus on arhi, sry bad habit😆.

but i really love the hot and cold aspect between these two. and that encounter was hot☺️. really, it had to be her bedtime now? ahh, but can't yell at arnav either, he's just being a wonderful dad.

i feel like u have a lot of scope in their relationship, excited to see where you will take it! 😊

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rizib

@rizib

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#903

aww! they didn't do it!! I really thought they did.. 😆

And i loved this part : Two brothers looked at the two smiling sisters and unconsciously filed this new found knowledge for future use. It was so cute...

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#904

Yeay!!! Grt one... so indeed they didnt do it!! And am worried abt arnavs reaction wen she is gnna say about shyam... well awesome chapter...nd happy and safe journey there..

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masam

@masam

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#905

I'm in love with Aakash.
But I'm more in love with Arnav.
The fact that you have described the 'couple' through Aakash's eyes. made me love you more (for such a perception and of course, Aakash)
Payal and Arya- children and their insecurities happen.
But Payal and Aakash-- thunder did strike. And alota times!
Coming to Arhi, I love how he is a gentleman and a flirt at the same time. How he can love her and make her feel loved at the same time. Possessive but bring possessed.

And I hope, the solace is half-way there. Almost.

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#906

Oh Akash he is so sweet and I did feel sorry for him. But hope that payal will see the true Akash, who is very sweet, and kind. Akash is happy for his brother and think that they will make perfect family.
Arnav didn't wake her up, wow..he is worth waiting for. He is a wonderful father. Arya will come at first him, anytime, and khushi just could love him just for that. Thanks for the pm

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#907

Saiyu, great update, and yeah thanks for the "ramanchi" 😉

Beneath the flirtatious attitude there lies a very perceptive Aakash. He took no time to read the situation correctly between his brother & Khushi... Which proves his innate serious nature, his flirting is just a facade...

Payal, can totally understand her reserve against both Aakash & the Raizadas in general. Her wanting to be close to Khushi is purely natural & instinctive for a sister...

Arya's jealousy against Payal was so cute. She is fiercely territorial like her dad, like father, like daughter...

But what I am not getting is Arnav's feelings for Khushi?? So, he knows he is deeply attracted to Khushi, he knows first-hand the way his daughter loves Khushi & treats her like a mother. He has also seen the way Khushi cares for Arya like a daughter, so what's he waiting for?? He doesn't seems to be interested in making Khushi a permanent feature in his life... He seems to be just interested in her physically... When will he take the next step?? Doesn't he realize both him & Arya cannot do without Khushi in their lives?? Sorry, but there seems to be no reason... Am I missing something?? I want to know more about Arnav's thoughts on Khushi...

But what I did love was their mutual care for each other. They both being aware of and taking care of each other's needs before their own. Yes, that was definitely progress, but it seems to be going no where from Arnav's side, at least, I feel that way...

Sorry, I have another observation, while you make Payal out to be fairly modern & well educated, wearing jeans, & being a lecturer etc., why is Khushi so traditional?? Why is Khushi not that well educated & more westernized?? If these two sisters grew up in the same family, then why these differences?? They didn't make any sense to me... Or am I missing something again???

Wishing you safe & happy travels. Hope you have a great time at wherever you're going.

P.S. Never complain about the length of your update, unless it is too short. The longer the better any day. :D

Edited by pixiegirl - 12 years ago

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#908

Amazing update, Omg so no action happened on the night they went to the farmhouse because khushi fell asleep and Arnav is such a gentlemen that he did not wake her up. Wow the bedroom part was so hot and passionate, khushi is just as eager as Arnav to do it. I'm loving Akash he is so sweet and flirting with Payal is so funny and harmless. Thanks for the PM xx

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#909

firstly have a happy and safe journey, hope your visit goes well and you come back safely.
secondly i am going to quote the lines which where the update stealer for me

1. He heard Payal murmur under her breath, "Poison will be more helpful" and he choked looking at her disbelievingly.

All through the dinner he saw his brother and her sister throwing looks at each other and here, he was a single guy, with a couple of casual relationships in the past, studying MBA abroad, decently good-looking, rich, with no bad marriage or child anywhere in his life, was being pointedly ignored by a girl who was by no means the most good-looking that he had seen; but by far the only one who had caught his attention not by her looks but by just being present around him. Did he make sense even to himself? Hell no! Would this stop him from flirting with her so she would talk? Hell no again!

2. This man had no shame. Even the venue of a meeting with him to discuss something important sounded like an invite for so much more.

3.Two brothers looked at the two smiling sisters and unconsciously filed this new found knowledge for future use.

For the life of me i could have never guessed that nothing happened that night what a ramanchi 👏
however i love the reason because of which nothing happened and respect arnav alot for that. arya is very justified in her reactions because this is what usually children do. aakash is cute very cute indeed

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#910

Great chapter...you totally threw me off as I really thought they did it!

Loved the bedroom conversation scene/conversation between Arnav and Kushi. It seems like they are a real couple, not just in it for their desires. If only they would both realize that, and soon!!

Have a safe journey. Can't wait for the next update!