Indecent Proposal- ArShi FF- chap14=pg-23

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utthra1208

@utthra1208

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

loved the update...waiting for the suspense

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kethgauthami1

@kethgauthami1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

k A new guy Ranveer...story will spice up now...Update is lovable especially drunken Kushi...poem is also good and i dont get Arnav's pain and who is Arav's parents yaar...

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Jaya Devi

@Aphrodite88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Interesting update!
The picture on Arnav's cell is his son's??
Khushi's confession tore my heart apart...
Looks like Arnav is going to go mad with khushi's friendship with ranveer
Continue soon! 😉

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nee

@march2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

everytime i read this i feel really sorry for khushi don't know why... this is something i ma trying to understand well maybe she didn't deserve wat she is getting...

just loved her outburst..

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Wonderful! Does Arnav feel guilty yet?

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

i dont know why u are hell bent on giving me heart attacks...

i mean how many more secrets and then on top of everything CLIFFHANGERS...

i know when these "SECRETS FROM THE PAST" will get revealed i'll feel miserable for hating and bashing arnav like m doing at present but literally at present i do hate him...how can he make her suffer so much...

finally she gave the words to the subsided and pent up anger...finally she verbalized the fury and maddening anger she felt all these years...

an FLAWLESS update with perfect background RABBA VE sad version 😆

thanks for update and pm :)

P.S. sorry without asking u i suggested ur story to a friend and gave her the link...

P.P.S. how can i forget this entry of Ranveer...umm will he be a catalyst in their unnamed and not-so-sure love story...

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crazy4ArnavSR

@crazy4ArnavSR

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Hey

Wow! this is one of those very startling stories i have read so far...which manage to build up this tingling sensation within me as i join Arnav-Khushi on their roller-coaster ride of emotions. stars on head baby 10 More Alien Babies?

stars on head baby 10 More Alien Babies?

U have put the story marvellously. I liked your idea of Indecent propsal...! Ur story is giving a very elegant touch to the unflappable sides of Arnav and Khushi...and i love ur story for that in particular. nasubichan 1 Nasubichan Emoticons

Even though, u have been putting the story out from Khushi's view, Arnav's extended silence lingering has begun to sound more disturbing... i really fear...he's hiding a lot more than he can endure under his calm exterior. stars on head baby 1 More Alien Babies?

Would just love to follow this work very closely...hence dropping in a buddy request for u. Please add me too...and make me part of ur PM list too 😊

P.S. I'm the friend Jahnvi.luvs.ASR gave away ur precious ff's title to...! please just forgive her...if u cud nd if it had hurt u in anyway..! stars on head baby 12 More Alien Babies?

and i Wanna cuddle you for this amazing FF! 🤗

Edited by crazy4ArnavSR - 12 years ago

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kethgauthami1

@kethgauthami1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

waiting

I wont leave you in ur dreams also if u dont give update now😉...lol just kidding but try to update daily yaar if u get time

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shivi02

@shivi02

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: jahnvi.luvs.ASR
i dont know why u are hell bent on giving me heart attacks...

awww dear:)
i mean how many more secrets and then on top of everything CLIFFHANGERS...

doesn't it gets u more intrigued;?
i know when these "SECRETS FROM THE PAST" will get revealed i'll feel miserable for hating and bashing arnav like m doing at present but literally at present i do hate him...how can he make her suffer so much...
finally she gave the words to the subsided and pent up anger...finally she verbalized the fury and maddening anger she felt all these years...

an FLAWLESS update with perfect background RABBA VE sad version 😆

thanks dear:)
thanks for update and pm :)

P.S. sorry without asking u i suggested ur story to a friend and gave her the link...

i don't mind...new readers are always welcomed:)
P.P.S. how can i forget this entry of Ranveer...umm will he be a catalyst in their unnamed and not-so-sure love story...
good guessing ...or not we shall see;

=crazy4ArnavSR]Hey

Would just love to follow this work very closely...hence dropping in a buddy request for u. Please add me too...and make me part of ur PM list too 😊

thanks dear:)

P.S. I'm the friend Jahnvi.luvs.ASR gave away ur precious ff's title to...! please just forgive her...if u cud nd if it had hurt u in anyway..! stars on head baby 12 More Alien Babies?

oh...I really don't mind..u r indeed more than welcome to read & follow dis ff:

and i Wanna cuddle you for this amazing FF! 🤗
awwwies<3

[QUOTE=kethgauthami1]waiting

waiting

I wont leave you in ur dreams also if u dont give update now😉...lol just kidding but try to update daily yaar if u get time

lolz...that's really sweet...m trying my best dear..believe me..update coming tomorrow morning:)