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sweetnoori

@sweetnoori

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Superb job brillent i read 1st pg all part 2nd is left insAllah in morning ill red;,,, ossawm yaar love it 👏 👏

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rashgirl000

@rashgirl000

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

awesome story.

their family did not deserve any explanation.😃

as they abandoned them.😭

even arnav's pyari di did not try to stop him.🤢

what happened to her so called love

all of them are very selfish.😡

but look at their audacity.😲

they want explanation.

well they got it.

loved the ending.👏

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.ProperPatola

@.ProperPatola

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

It was a gripping story! Loved how you showed the way fate brought Arnav and Khushi together! to create new world of their own!

Great work!😊

Edited by SaRunForevertgr - 12 years ago

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

awesome loved it but you should have made khushi and asr bring their so called family to the road by taking away everything from there awesome os loved it

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

well was that good or what
wow karma is a real ***** right
no one stopped dhruv from throwing arnie out of RM
not his di not nani not akask or mami mama
well that just goes to show no one really cared for arnie much
just that he was earning so much thats why he was there
isnt it what it seems like
because had they really loved him they would have tried to stop him or even go with him
and same was with khushi nobody cared for her either
after all these two did for their family no one stood up for them
well am glad they found each other and went to LKO right or they would never have found out about their inheritance right which their mothers left for them
cool their mothers were best friends who would have thought right
and they had to marry each other to get the inheritance
well they were gonna marry just did it six days earlier
they got all that arnie had lost and more so in your face dhruv and shyam
am glad aman and the prakash clan decided to work with arhi and not the raizadas
aww that was just beautiful they have a small little family of their own and are happy with one another
cheers for pm
loved this story

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sushna

@sushna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Wow nice updte soon thankx 4 pm

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PARVATHY44

@PARVATHY44

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

wow wow amazing.10 chapters together!!!I consider this as an unexpected new year gift from u.Thank u very very very much.
Expecting like this from u occationally
Take care

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Talk about Karan and payback!!!!!'

I loved this

Edited by anita_21492 - 12 years ago

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Angel13

@Angel13

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Hey dear just read this OS of yours
Wow Mindblowing
Must say you wrote it very well
Arnav and khushi left the house well were forced to
Shame on Anjali at least she should have supported her brother
Well this proves she is behind money I mean all want is money and so called her husband that is why Shyam was still there
Both confessed their love and went to lakhnow
They found their mom were friends and left properties on their name
Both married to each other and supported and got famous
Now have boutique on ArShi their daughter name
How dare raizadas and guptas gut to aid them questions
Now they got all answers and deserved word if ArShi
Thanks you so much for sharing beautiful OS

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titanichomeless

@titanichomeless

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Very interesting. New version of IPKKND

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