I'm all yours RTMC FF part 6 on pg 21 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

sry di..

maine res kiya, n bhot dinn tak unres nhi kiya...
i m sry...

but, mei bhot busy ho gyi thi.
sry.

so, update per aate h...
ekdum roler coaster ki tahar chal rhi h stry abhi..
ye jo ladki h- pakhi.
bhot sahi bandi h..vry gud..aapne botfrnd ka bhot acha fayda utha rhi h...

badi kharchili gf mili h ryan ko...
but , baat h ek-
ryan iss per nhi latayega tho kiser lutayega apne paise..

pakhi ka network..arey wah!...


co-incidence - haye, aapne ff k coincidence hamehsa mera dil jeet lete h...
jo ki ye h- only one room available...

mahi n aarav k liye bhi hotel mei ek room tha...

kinna shona h na?

wow!..ghar ka maalik tho bada khadus h...


kya delicious khana tha...mouh mei pani aa gya...
baghvaani aise cook biwi sirf ryan ko de...
kisi aur ko nhi... :P

chai mei chini nhi thi tho kya hoa...itna pyar tho tha na?meetha meetha pakhi ka...

super duper update h..
vry sweet stry..
looking forward for dis..

thank u rashu

its ok babes...i know u r busy with ur studies
but fir bhi u commented
thank u dear
love u baby
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Riya Mai Agai,

I know Thoda late ayi hnu but tu hi tho kehti ha better late then never So... Hum Ageye :-)

Yeh Pakhi kahi Mahi ki bichdi hui behen tho nehi ha na? Sayed Nehi coz yeh ladki Mahi se bhi 4 kadam aage hai,

Well Rayan k Paise kharach hone per mujhe koi problem nehi ha Coz I know Banda kafi Ameer ha, Paise nehi Pyaar ki kami ha Ush k Zindegi mein,

Pyaar n Pakhi Haaaye khub jaach rahe hain, Lekin Pakhi k Pyaar se jayda Interesting Ush Pyaar k Side Effects Hai Like... India ki map jaisi chapati, something like daal but not daal, tea without suger N Aage pata nehi aur kya kya!

Outstanding Update, Do Cont Soon,

LOVE YOU :-*
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
Its awesum dear!!! Its sweeet... :-)
Beautiful n full of... wt do u say.. ummm.. true feelings typs... u understud no wt I meant?!!! Bas hai!! ;)
😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
thanks for writing n sharing rtmc ff
beautiful start!!
sorry for late comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

part 3


he checked his credit card third time but his efforts gone in vain...he slid his card in pocket n walked away from there with sad face

door bell struck into her ear ..she quickly opened the doors by the thought that it must be ryaan...but her face down with annoying expression-''who r u?n what do u want?

a young man with weird smile on face approach her-''hello ji ...daddy ji ne kaha ki aap new ho yaha to rent lene chala aya''

pakhi thought for a while-''jaisa baap waisa beta cartoon ek dum laofer.''n said quickly-''shaam ko milenge abhi jao yaha se''

he entered in the room from the other side of pakhi n looked all around-''i hope u haven't any problem here,have u?''

pakhi smiled fakely-''yeah i have a problem ...sometime wild dogs entered in my house without my permission...have u any solution for that?''

he smiled-''oho...aap to bura maan gye ..waise what's ur good name''...she hissed-''champa''with a cute smile

he smiled-''really u know my name is chiku...kitna cute lagega na dono ka naam ek saath''he said cheekily

pakhi glared at him-''u want a slap''by showing her palm straight to him...he gulped-''na ji mein to sirf rent lene aaya tha...shaam ko fir ayunga...aapko koi bhi takleef ho to mujhe kehna pls''

pakhi opened the door n stared at him..he smiled cutely at her while walking outside...she closed the door n started to walk inside when the bell rang again..she opened n saw him-''what's ur problem''

chiku leaned on doors-''are u married??''

she nods annoyingly -''han to''

chiku-''really waise lagte to nhi ho aap''

she closed the door on his face -''kya problem h isse''

he rang the bell again...n she had losing her control...she opened the doors-''problem kya h tumhe''

he smiled again cheekily-''waise aapke husband kaha h??shaadi hui bhi h yeah aise hi??''

pakhi barked-''just stop smiling...u looked donkey when u smiled...''he closed his mouth quickly with palm n walked away from there

she walked inside the kitchen when third time bell rang...she put the dough roller n rush towards the doors..she opened the door with one hand n about to hit when ryan hold her wrist tightly-''hey what are u doing''

she pulled her hand back n stared him with wide opened eyes-''u..wo gadha kaha gya''

ryan looked at sternly-''pakhi''she turned -''sorry ryan..wo landlord ka beta aya tha rent ke paise lene''

ryaan sat on couch sadly -''pakhi''she turned towards him n asked-''kya hua u looked sad is everything ok''

ryan-''mera credit card band ho gya h''

the roller fell on her feet-''ouchh''she bend while taking her feet on palm...he quickly made her sit on couch n looked at her feet-''kya kati ho tum''

she removed his hands-''wo sab choddo yeh btao ab rent kaha se denge''

ryaan pulled his face upwards-''rent ke paise to kisi tarah ho jayenge but uske baad?''

pakhi-''pehle rent de dete uske baad sochenge ok''he nods positively

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he came to hall and saw her on couch reading newspaper...he snatched from her-''mujhe do''

she frown n tried to snatched it from him but he bend his hand back-''pakhi tum kitchen me jao or mere liye tea bnao''

she fumed with anger-''oh hello im not ur servant''ryan raisedhis brow-''but wife to ho na...or mein tumhare saath kuch bhi kar sakta after im your husband yr''

pakhi frowned at him-''hath to laga ke dikhayo...hath tod dungi samjhe''

ryaan smiled-''accha apne bf ka kya toda tumne ??''she smiled softly-''usse kisi se romance karne layak nhi choda mene''

he stared at her-''iska matlab tumne''n he laughed...pakhi too joined him in uncontrolled laughter

after few minutes ryan gazing at her-''can i ask u one question''

she nods while smiling-''what''

ryan hesitatingly started-''kya tum or tumhara bf physicall...leave it''he stood up from the couch when she grabbed his wrist-''no...i was in love with that b*****d but meine usse kabhi apne aap se hath nhi lagane diya''

ryan looked at her n smiled-''are u believe in love''pakhi-''yeah..tumhe kisi se love nhi hua''

ryan-''na''she giggled-''pakka tum alien ho''

ryan too chuckled when chiku arrived...pakhi stood up-''lo aa gya elephant teeth wala donkey''

ryan looked at her puzzled...

pakhi pat money on his palm n he smiled at her again cheekily-''thank u champa ji''ryan burst into laughter when chiku stared at him...then he followed his gaze to pakhi-''ur husband''

pakhi-''u have any problem'

chiky-''are u really married ...lagta nhi h''n stared at her from top to bottom...ryan's smiled vanished to saw his wicked gaze on pakhi...he walked at him-''paise mil gye na...leave''

chiku smiled at him-''yeah yeah mein to ja hi rha tha bas''n gazing at pakhi who was fuming with anger...

ryan smiled-''bye''n closed the doors on his face''

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maneka pacing in her room when her husband came in the room...she barked-''oh so u reached...u have any idea that ur bitch daughter flew from here with all my jewellary n my money...my safe is empty prakash(pakhi"s father)

prakash sat on couch-''please give me water maneka..im tired''

maneka said angrily-''im talking to u prakash..call the police right now..i want my money back''

prakash-''so why are waiting call the police...what can i do in this''

maneka frowned at him-''prakash tumhari daugheter bhaag gyi apne bf ke pass..or tumhe bilkul tension nhi h''

prakash pour water in glass-''atleast wo varun ke saath safe to rahegi...roz roz yaha jhagde to nhi honge na''drink it in one go..then he stared at her-''sab tumhari wajah se hua h''n left the house''

maneka looked at the pakhi's pic which lying on table...she throw it on floor-''mein usse chodungi nhi...chahe kahin bhi chali jaye''she dailed a number-''hello...pakhi kahi bhi dikhe kill her''

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ansh threw the arrow on his face-''kuch pata chal iska''a man behind him lowered his head-''no sir i think wo delhi me nhi h''

he twirled to saw him n slapped him-''u know what mujjhe na sunna accha nhi lagta ...kahi se bhi dundo...uski dead body chahiye mujhe beneath my shoe..is that clear to u''

he bow n leave...

ansh smiled wickedly at ryan-''bechara behan ka bhai...''n laughed loudly in the dark room

when rakhi came and switch on the lights ..she shocked to saw ansh sitting on floor with tears...she walked at him-''kya hua ansh ..are u ok''

ansh hugged her-''rakhi im sorry meri wajah se tumhara bhai tumhe chodkar chala gya''

rakhi wiped his tears-''naam mat lijiye uska...mera koi bhai nhi h...mein kisi ryan ko nhi jaanti aap chaliye or khaana kha lijiye''

she left the room n he smiled-''oho...ryan tumhari behan toh bhot naaraz h tumse''n laughed again

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at night

she laid on bed when ryan put the pillow n bedsheet from the bed...she frowned-''kya hua kaha ja rhe ho''

ryan-''mein hall me couch par so jayunga tum yaha aaram se so jao''

pakhi sat on bed-''yaha koi problem h...mein koi ladka hu jo tumhe pareshaan karungi''

ryan chuckled-''nhi wo ''

pakhi-'thik h mein bhi hall me chalti hu''she got up n put the pillow when he stopped her-''ok fine yahi so jao''she smiled in victory n laid on bed while pat on other side

he laid on other side n covered his face with bedsheet...she giggled to saw his silly act

next morning

he opened his eyes lazily n saw her on his chest again...he slid her head gently on pillow n remove her leg which snaked on his leg...he looked at her bare legs...she just wore her short skirt n top which she was wearing 2 days before...he covered her with bedsheet without looking at her...

he walked outside

when she opened the eyes she found a cup of tea on table...n he smiled at her cutely-''gdmg mrs ryan shah''

pakhi sat on bed with a smiled-''so u r shah''

ryan-''yeah..accha tumhari bed tea table h mujhe kuch kaam h ata hun thodi der mein''

pakhi-''job ke liye jaa rhe ho na''

ryan turned to saw her-''tumhe kaise pata''??

pakhi show a cutting of paper to him-'shayad tumhari pocket se bed par gir gya..well aisi shakal se to koi peon ki job bhi nhi dega''n took a sip of tea

ryan walked outside smilingly when she called him...he stopped to saw her but before that she pushed him on couch n sat front of him-''seedhe baithe raho''

she placed some shaving cream on her face n removed it gently from his face...he hust gazing at her face sweetly...her silky hairs fell on his neck n made tickling..she closed his eyes


Edited by tejjo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Mai Pm se pehle hi tapak padi :-P

Awww Pakhi n Ryan already Behaving like Husband n Wife, Thats sooo sweet of them, itne kam time mein kitne Comfortable ho gaye hain dono eksaath,

Unhe dekhkar koi bhi Normal Inshaan ahi kehga ki they r husband-wife n they r mean to be together... Wait I said Normal Inshaan Not Abnormal Like Chiku, Awara kahi ka! Thik se Line tak marna nehi ataa :-D

Hmmm tho Rakhi n Ryan ki Misunderstandings ki waja Ansh ha, I am sure kamina ne Property k lalaj mein alag kar dia hoga Do Bhai-Behen ko.

Tho Maneka n Ansh Dono Pakhi n Ryan k Jaan k piche padhe hain, well Ideots ka maksat kabhi pura nehi hoga!

Lol Pakhi k Sone k tarikese dar k Ryan bed chodna chahta tha, uff yeh ladki bhi na, kitni Cute n Sweet ha, ok tho Ryan ne pehle hi sab Clear kar liya about Pakhi's Relationship with her So Called Bf, Good Very Good!

OWESOME UPDATE, Do cont soon :-)

LOVE YOU :-*
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
wonderful story..👏...i like it veryyy muchhh...please continue soon...& also send pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
champa...!!
~SHOCK~
champa...!!!
kya naam h ye...

but ek baat bolu...ye champa naam iss jamane mei humari rocking pakhi ko hi yaad aa sakta h...
maaza gya...

aur, cake per icing ka kaam kiya chiku ne... hahahaha...
sry, cake per chiku ka kaam...cake per chiku...funny...

but chiku muje psnd h...so no more jokes on fruit chiku...
but haan, iss chiku ki tho aise ki thaisi...

kaise dekha raha h pkhi ko...
ryaan ankh ukhadd dega teri k#TT#...

and, kahin tere sath bhi vo na ho jo pakhi ne pehle wale chore k saath kiya tha...
romance krne layak nhi chodegi...samjhe???

ryan jobs dhudh raha tha, i knew it, mei kabhi rtmc ko pachanne mei galat ho hi nhi sakti...

ryan ka family bg- dats sad, uss ansh ne uski nahen ko kya patti oada rakh ki h pata nhi...

uska credit crd bhi khatam...


certificates bhi tho nhi h ryan k pass.. pata nhi kaise interview dega... :'(

but, pakhi ne jo last mei makeover kiya h...pakka kisi fashion designer hair ker hi lega itne handsome munde ko...

god knw kya hoga aage...sry riya di knws kya hoga age...

i excited for this...

lov u
miss u di
Edited by sweetsanyo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Champa??...that means if our pakhi is champa then our ryan will be??...chandu ha ha ha, ok ok jokes a part
part was very nice, loved how they were getting comfortable with each other
so their families hate them too much, hope their hatered didn't harm their relation
update soon
luv u :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Thanks Di for luvly, jhakkas & fabulous part with lots of comedy.👏
I enj
oy lot mera to has-has kar pet dukh rha hi.🤣🤣
That champa seen mindbloing di & that chiku is realy cartoon.😆😆

Ofter that pakhi and ryan nok jhok kya kahna...-hahahaha... Uske bad mrning seen me pakhi ryan ki shaving karti hi or jis tarh ryan pakhi ko dekhta how sweet di.😳😳😳

But ab to villons ki entry ho chuki hi 😡 unhone hamare pakhi ryhaan ko marne ko kaha hi. koi unhe chu bhi nhi sakta hamari pakhi uska vo hal karegi vo log to future me kisi ko muh nhi dikha paye
ge or ryhan to unhe future hi nhi dekhne denga.

That bloody ansh😡😡 bahut has rha tha bachu bas kuch din or phir to uska bura time bahut pass hi.

Over all outstanding comedy di.👏
plz upd soon & LUV U. HAPPY VALENTINE WEEK. Muahhaaa... 😊😊😊
Edited by soniaparte90794 - 12 years ago

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