I'm all yours RTMC FF part 6 on pg 21 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: PariK

Hey sorry for commenting so late :(

It was a nice update Riya 👏

Keep up d good work

Love you dear :*

thank u so much pari for ur lovely comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: ridzzi

Champa??...that means if our pakhi is champa then our ryan will be??...chandu ha ha ha, ok ok jokes a part
part was very nice, loved how they were getting comfortable with each other
so their families hate them too much, hope their hatered didn't harm their relation
update soon
luv u :-)

thank u ridzzz for lovely comment
will update soon
love u
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: soniaparte90794

Thanks Di for luvly, jhakkas & fabulous part with lots of comedy.👏
I enj
oy lot mera to has-has kar pet dukh rha hi.🤣🤣
That champa seen mindbloing di & that chiku is realy cartoon.😆😆

Ofter that pakhi and ryan nok jhok kya kahna...-hahahaha... Uske bad mrning seen me pakhi ryan ki shaving karti hi or jis tarh ryan pakhi ko dekhta how sweet di.😳😳😳

But ab to villons ki entry ho chuki hi 😡 unhone hamare pakhi ryhaan ko marne ko kaha hi. koi unhe chu bhi nhi sakta hamari pakhi uska vo hal karegi vo log to future me kisi ko muh nhi dikha paye
ge or ryhan to unhe future hi nhi dekhne denga.

That bloody ansh😡😡 bahut has rha tha bachu bas kuch din or phir to uska bura time bahut pass hi.

Over all outstanding comedy di.👏
plz upd soon & LUV U. HAPPY VALENTINE WEEK. Muahhaaa... 😊😊😊

awww so sweet of u
sonia i love u n ur comment
chiku is joker isliye meine naam bhi usse aisa hi diya
will update very soon
love u
muahhh
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Arpimugfan

Mai Pm se pehle hi tapak padi :-P

Awww Pakhi n Ryan already Behaving like Husband n Wife, Thats sooo sweet of them, itne kam time mein kitne Comfortable ho gaye hain dono eksaath,

Unhe dekhkar koi bhi Normal Inshaan ahi kehga ki they r husband-wife n they r mean to be together... Wait I said Normal Inshaan Not Abnormal Like Chiku, Awara kahi ka! Thik se Line tak marna nehi ataa :-D

Hmmm tho Rakhi n Ryan ki Misunderstandings ki waja Ansh ha, I am sure kamina ne Property k lalaj mein alag kar dia hoga Do Bhai-Behen ko.

Tho Maneka n Ansh Dono Pakhi n Ryan k Jaan k piche padhe hain, well Ideots ka maksat kabhi pura nehi hoga!

Lol Pakhi k Sone k tarikese dar k Ryan bed chodna chahta tha, uff yeh ladki bhi na, kitni Cute n Sweet ha, ok tho Ryan ne pehle hi sab Clear kar liya about Pakhi's Relationship with her So Called Bf, Good Very Good!

OWESOME UPDATE, Do cont soon :-)

LOVE YOU :-*

aww thank u so much arpita for ur jhakasss comment
loved it
thannk u again
love u
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: shona_muratfan

wonderful story..👏...i like it veryyy muchhh...please continue soon...& also send pm...

thank u dear
will send u pm don't worry
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
thank u😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
part 4

they both startled to saw shreya on doors..she looked at them with big frown on her face -''what are u think u r doing??pakhi''

pakhi stood up n said immediately-''shaving ..ryan ko job ke liye h jana h na''

ryan excused himself from the 2 girls n went inside ...shreya hit her head with slight slap-''are u mad pakhi u almost lying on him''

pakhi-''so what mein uska rape thode hi kar rhi thi''

shreya-''pakhi u are just impossible wo ek stranger h or tum usse itna interact kyu rehti ho tum jaanti ho na yeh ladke kabhi bhi dhoka de dete h ''

pakhi rolled her eyes-''ryan aisa nhi h wo bhot sweet h''shreya put her arms on her waist-''oh really 3 din me bhot jaan gyi ho tum usse...i think varun bhi bhot sweet n simple tha starting mein h na''

pakhi grinned-''coffee logi tum''

shreya-''pakhi topic change mat karo i want my answer agar usne kabhi akele mein kuch ulta seedha kar diya tumhare saath to kya hoga''

pakhi went inside the kitchen n looked at her through window-''common shreya ryan aisa nhi h...tumhe pata h usne abhi tak mujhe touch bhi nhi kiya wo ek dum girls ki tarah blush karta h or wo jab blush karta ya smile karta h to or bhi cute lagta h''

shreya pat her head-''oh god what kind of girl she is 2 din pehle iska break up hua h or yaha isse kisi or ki smile acchi lag rhi h''

pakhi came with coffee-''here is ur coffee''when ryan came outside n folded his shirt on the arms

shreya stared at him-''hi ryan''he smiled lazily-''hi me chalta hun im getting late''

pakhi gave him coffee -''tum coffe nhi piyoge''ran nods negatively-''nhi chalta hun bye''n he walked outside

shreya looked at him-''pakhi ryan ne dusre flat ke liye kaha tha na mein ussi ke liye baat karne aayi thi''

pakhi-''nhi chahiye hum dono yaha thik h'n smiled at her...shreya stared at her-''are u sure''she nodded n gave her coffee

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at evening

he was sitting on first step of terrace n looked at sky...his somber face had lots of pain n hopes in eyes...there is loud sough of air which made him to close his eyes a tear rolled out but he immediately wiped it out as he heard her foot steps...she sat next to him-''why are u sitting there all alone...its so cold here''

he smiled at her-''bas aise hi''

pakhi looked at his face-''missing someone badly??''startled he looked at her-''no''

she grinned -''juth mat bolo tumhari aankho mein abhi bhi tears h ''he wiped his eyes-''no wo kuch chala gya meri eye me bas isliye n''he rubbed his eyes n stared at her-''tum kisi ko miss nhi karti''

pakhi-''nhi miss karne ke liye koi hona bhi chahiye na...mein sirf do logo se pyar karti thi ek mom or dusra varun dono hi chale gye wo varun us gadhe ke bacche ko to mein chodungi nhi or meri mom mere pass h''she touch her gold chain in neck with small locket which had her mother n her photo she showed him-''meri mom meri tarah lagti h na dekho''

ryan chuckled-''hey she is beautiful but tum unke jaisi lagti ho wo tumhare jaisi nhi duffer''n pat her head

she frowned then smiled-''han wahi tum samjh gye na''

ryan-''or tumhare dad''

she made her face-''i was 6 yrs old when my mom...''she stop for a moment but then continue-''mujhe bas dad ki jarurat thi but mere mana karne par bhi unhone dusri shaadi ki n wo meri step mom wo mujhe kabhi pyaar karti hi nhi thi hmesha mujhe dad se dur hi rakti thi or dad itne busy hote the ki unhe kuch pata hi nhi lagta tha ki mere saath kya kya hota...''she looked at him n smiled-''but jab mein badi hui na to sab ulta ho gya ab bhi dad ko pata nhi chalta ki unki so called wife or beti ke saath kya kya hota h...meri family me kisiko meri jarurat nhi h or mujhe bhi nhi''

ryan smiled at her-''u r so strong...''then suddenly his gaze fell on her dress-''yeh dress kah se aayi''

pakhi looked at her dress-''acchi h na pass ki shops se li or mein kuch or bhi layi hun she opened her pal n showed him mangalsutra...he surprised-''yeh kyu??''

pakhi-''wo chiku usse lagta hi nhi h ki hum married h to isliye accha h na''n she put it in her neck but it held in her hairs..she tired to freed it but failed ...ryan pulled her hairs on one one shoulder n freed its chain carefully from the hairs n locked it in her neck-''fine''she smiled n nods

ryan-''meine to tumhe paise nhi diye the fir yeh''she rolled her eyes n showed her ring finger to him-''isme kal tak ek ring thi''ryan frowned at her-''tumne apni ring bech di are u mad pakhi''

pakhi growled at him-''itni bhi precious nhi thi wo varun ne di thi mujhe jab varun ki koi nhi h to uski ring ka kya karti mein bt kisi kaam to aayi na mene tumhare liye bhi kapde liye h or mere liye bhi ab kal tum ekdum handsome dikhoge''

ryaan-''seriously tum pagal ho''n grinned

pakhi looked at him but soon her staring changed into gazing...he is the perfect man for her...she thought when he pat her-''pakhi sona nhi h tumhe chalo''she nods n followed him

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nxt morning

he got ready when she gazing him through window..he shouts unknowingly-''pakhi me ja rha hun''she hurriedly came outside with breakfast-''ryan breakfast karke jao na pls''ryan looked at her n smiled-''ok''

she sat next to him n gazing him lovingly-''ryan tumne kabhi kisi se pyar kiya h kya??'

ryan-''nhi but tum kyu puch rhi ho''

she looked on other side -''bas aise hi''

he finished his breakfast n about to walk when she called him-''all the best ryan ''

he turned to saw her n grin-''thank u ''n walked outside

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ravi shah(ryan's father)_kuch pata chala kaha h wo''he asked curiously to a man standing near in front of him -''no sir har jagah dekha but unka kuch pata nhi chala''

ravi closed his fist tightly-'kuch bhi karo kahi bhi jao mujhe mera beta wapas chahiye i don't know how bas chahiye''the man nods-''will try sir''n walked outside the room when ansh outside the room smirked-''sorry dad but aapka son to nhi ayega wapas''


on the other side

maneka walked too n fro in the room when her daughter came -''what mom u r asking for me''

maneka burst on her-''are u finished with ur silly parties...''misha lowered her head-''sorry mom''

maneka-''i just kill her...i want to kill her''misha put her hand on her shoulder-''don't worry mom wo ab jinda nhi rahegi u just relax''


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ryan entered in the cabin when a middle aged man looked at him-''come in''

he sat in front of him-''im ryan sir i have read ur ad in newspaper''

the man looked at him n smiled-''oh yeah so u have ur any documents''ryan lowered his head-''no sir''

the man raised his brow-''what do u mean by no...without any qualification u want a job??im a naveen kumar one of the best businessman of mumbai''ryan looked at him-''trust me sir i'll try my best ''

the man stood up from the chair-''listen young man there is many other peoples waiting outside for interview...im sorry''ryan nods n walked outside when his peon hastily came inside-''sir there is some problem with our computer system...it didn't show anything all the clients waiting for a presentation in conference room''

naveen frowned at him-''hwz it possible come with me''n they walked towards the conference room..he tried again n again but then offended-''damn called jai ''peon looked at him-''sir he is on holiday sir''

''can i help u''ryan said in low voice...naveen stared at him-''u can do it??''

he nods n went nearer the computer system...after five minutes he switched on the computer n everyone shocked to saw computer was working with more speed than before..its graphics its text was more clear n visible than before...naveen-''what the hell is this jai doing with this system...uske documents check karo kya sach me engineer h wo''

ryan chuckled under his breath n went outside when naveen called-''ryan...''ryan turned to looked at him-''yes''

naveen-''are u joing from tommorow or from today itself''ran grinned-''thank u so much sir''

naveen-''im sorry ryan kabhi kabhi insaan ke talent to bhi dekhna chahiye...im really sorry''ryan smiled n nods softly

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''or aise mujhe job mil gyi''he replied excitedly...she jumped on couch-''wow ab saari problems solve ho jayegi yes''

ryan took the last sip of tea when she gazing at him-''kaisi h''
ryan looked at her-''acchi h''she made her face-''tum bhot juth bolte ho ryan kabhi bhi kuch accha nhi hota mujhe kuch banana nhi aata fir bhi tum chupchap kha lete ho ...kuch toh bola karo na...''ryan smiled at her-''pakhi its ok na tum mere liye yeh sab banati ho yehi kafi h n sach me tasty hota h wo sab to mein juth kaise bol sakta hun''

she came closer to him n shouts on him-''fir juth bol rhe ho tum''while showing her index finger

he backed off-''ok fine tea me sugar nhi thei subah ki coffee me tumne salt dala tha n kal raat ki daal ''she frowned at him-''hey wo daal nhi thi wo cheese thi''

ryan-''accha usme kuch nhi tha''she smiled-''i'll try to make some tasty food for u''he grinned-''thank u ab mein jau kal job par jaana h''

she nods n looking at him while he walking towards room...she called him-''ryaan''he turned-''ab kya h''

she closed her fist n looked another side but at him-''i love u''

his eyes got widened -''what??''she came closer hastily-''im sorry i don't know when i...i just love u''ryan felt awkward n turned his face-''pakhi i ...gdnt''n walked inside the room

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nxt morning

he buttoned his shirt when he saw her through mirror coming towards him with tea...he turned without meeting his gaze-''shaam ko mein late ho jayunga tum mera wait mat karna''

pakhi-''kyu na karu..karungi...tum mujhse pyar nhi karte''he looked at her-''pakhi mein tumse nhi kisi se bhi pyaar nhi karta...or 3 din me kiski ko kisi se kaise pyaar ho sakta h''

pakhi-''mujhe kya pata but mujhe ho gya...tumhe mein acchi nhi lagti ya tum mujhe isliye pyaar nhi karte kyunki mein bhot bura khana bnati hun''

ryan-''pls pakhi aisa kuch nhi h''she put the tea on table-''to kya problem h...gay ho''he surprisingly staring at her she ignored him-''to kya problem h tumhe''

ryan-''mujhe nhi pata but i don't have feelings for u''pakhi sat on chair sadly-''ok fine jao tum office''ryan looked at her sad face-''im sorry pakhi but meri personal problem hi bhot h ek problem or mat do pls''

pakhi stared at him-''ok ok tum jao or bhul jao ki mein tumhe i love u bola tha''ryan rolled his eyes-''bye n went outside

precap-''she removed his tie n went nearer to his face...he looked here n there-''pakhi what are u doing''she grinned-''wahi jo tum nhi karte''he looked at her n lost in her eyes




Edited by tejjo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
pakhi is pakhi...
god...kya ajeeb dimag daudati h...
idher udher..tedha medha...

itna aasani se bol diya i love u...
bandi kinna kamal ki h..

bechara ryan kaisa sahta h isse...
but isse nhi sahega tho kisse sahega...???

shreya ko mana ker diya for new room...sahi kaha dono comfortable h- kya hoa agr pakhi ka khana is disastrous...kya hoa agr she is hysterically amazing...so unexpected...

ohhooo!!..kahan h vo computer...uske pair chuuooo bhai...kinnte sahi time per damage hoa h...
and aur bhi acha bacha ki ryaan se thikk hi ho gya...

bhot acha bacha h...computer...


ring becharker cloths le aayi- beautiful lag rhi h na???

sahi kaha, mom tumhari tarah nhi, tum mom ki tarah ho pahki... 😳...


ravi jii, acha h ya gande??? kuch bhi h- he wnts his son...n ansh ka reaction dekh kr laga his father ravi is gud... hm.

n yahan step mom n sis murder ki taiyari mei h... :P >_<

gande ppl...

precape is cosy...😳
Edited by sweetsanyo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
read both parts (3 & 4)

beautifully written
luved it

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