#5 Guzarish [D3 Revisited] Parts 23-26 - Page 63

Originally posted by: *Khushii*

YOU will NOT use PURPLE!! 😳 I have dibs on it first. Don't mess up the balance! Or no SwaRon OS, SS, FF ever! 😈 Aab soch lo. Do you want purple or SwaRon? 😈

Originally posted by: yogini64

loved it khushi...😊thank you so mcuh yogi di <3

finally... she's comng back to her frnds n love 🤗 she sure is!!

naina ko bhi to sab batana tha na... varna vo to confuse hi rehti 😆 haha yes! if she's gonna stay, she might as well know everything :P

inki story sun k kitna achha lagta h na... my kriyaansh so hard to sum up in few words!

but vo unfortunate time bhi aata h... which destroyed our peace just don't think about it.

u made me cry again 😭im sholly 😳

can't believe... sharon ko sab aise man rahe hai...

ab peaceful ho gyi hai na... daant khaane ka darr door ho gya sabka 🤣 hahahaha! I'm gonna have to bring the attitude back. Warna bohut softie ho jayegi. That's not Sharon 😛

ab swaron ki private talks...😉 private moments

d3 me to dono ki aise time fight shuru ho jati... 🤪 Aren't we all glad this isn't D3 then? 😉 D3 Revisited 🤣

but here ... the make sense😎 AHHH! i cannot thank you enough. I was so angry and crying and all and replying to your comment made me smile. So thank you di 🤗

Originally posted by: siliya21

Awesome update

naina is cute

kria's n naina's convo was great...nicely written

loved Reyam...

loved it...👏

my heart says something bad is going 2 happen...

.MU b/w rey n kria

waiting 4 the next update

Originally posted by: mrash

Loved the surprise tooo much 😃

Originally posted by: arch2012

wonderful ff and fantastic update.thanks to tanya i came to know about all your fantastic work. Thank you! Yes, Thanks Tanya :p

all your work are just awesome but i am unable to post any comment on your other work it shows some error saying topic closed i don't know what is it all about but i am commenting 4 all your work here,they all are just fantastic and with mind blowing concept. yes, I discontinued them so the topics are closed. I got them closed so no one can comment and keep on telling me to continue 😳 I get emotional and then do things I shouldn't 😛 I'm glad you loved them all though!!

sajda with 3 hot couples present there and you did justice to all of them update soon Aww you think so? I'm hoping I continue with justice in future when I continue =)

mines forever combined and then separated i am looking forward to that one also update soon Thanks!! It might take time for me to update that.

ishq junoon dewangi multi cast with awesome story update soon Glad you loved this too! Seems like you might be in luck. I'll be continuing that one on popular demand :D

and now let talk about guzarish your version of d3 i am liking it atleast in your ff swaron are showing some positive moves otherwise in show they are making birbal ki khichadi.update soon and plz pm me next time if possible birbal ki khichdi! So true those words are! I'm happy you're loving them here :D Please add update id to get pmz :D And thank you so much for the wonderful comment!! I look forward to more comments from you =)

take care

Originally posted by: shaani2209

Title change, the new one 👍🏼 yup! 😃

coming to the update..

nice lighthearted update :) Only because some pretty heavy one's are making their way in 😛

Loved the ReYam part😆 it was amusing plus heartwarming read :) thanks! it's always good to read them 😳

the way swayam was hesitant n rey's convincing was nicely put...

naina is really a sweet friend n a good to be with person :) that whole part was nicely done :) thankzie!!

when naina said this line""Not me. I know about myself. I want to hear about Rey." " it reminded me about i saying the same thing to one of my friend LOL! only thing is instead of rey i said "your guy"😆 Lol! Right?!! I do the same to my best friend. Thought to incorporate that here. It's always cute.

Kria's cheerfulness was nicely kept intact in her words, when she talks about rey..well done there :)

Sharon is lucky that the gang jus surprised her by going to her house, warna mere frndz jaise hote wohlog toh uske bedroom mein jake uske neendh ki maa behen kar dete😆 jaise meri karte hai Lol! Sachi? How mean are they? 😆 Everyone has their own way to show love ;) Now, if it was just Rey alone, we can expect him to simple invade her room and do the same 😆

jokes apart n now being serious! i Loved it totally!

i imagined LLHH when swayam is the last one to enter😆 i knoww!! I had that in mind before. I dunno why I canceled that scene last minute and only kept a sentence in it's place.. the mood set up was nicely done n loved how they all got her jealous at first n then vishaka making swayam explain with rey jumping at that occasion to join her n even pulling others with him😆 that was a lovely read :) waiting to read the SwaRon convo..hopefully no MU plz🥱 Oh no. You'll be surprised ;D

Looking forward to see how things turn with kria returning n the gang convincing sharon to be the 6th dancer...do update soon...

thanks for the pm..

PS: dint smriti keep plane tickets for her?? n were they not suppose to meet at the airport???😕 LOL! HUSHHH!!!! 😉 I'm a forgetful person on tiny details at times. PPS:Try to re-install MS, see if that works...if it still doesn't let me know! 😊 Reinstall? Alrighty. Will give that a try as well. Thanks! 🤗

Originally posted by: _sweetannu_

superb update as usual thank you!!

kriya is finally going back to her dil dosti dance...😳..this time naina also with her. yes!! changes coming along.

at last kriya told everything about her past to naina..😛..no secret bwt frnds. no secrets..
naina is so cute

kriya shared her frds with naian.. 👏...dono frds r vry sweet. im glad you like their friendship!
Ya first bff r same no can not take thier place in heart but new frd creat its own place in heart..so naina also share soft corner in kriya's heart...😳 that is true. 1st bffs always stay but new one's can make their mark as well. There's no denying that.

reyam r funny n cute
sab frds sharon ke gher use manane gaye..😆..wo ab cool ho gayi hai..fire truns into ice. Should I bring the fire back? 😆🤔

jaleous sharon..😆..no one is more deserving than her...but kriya is coming back na so she join her team..😊 kriya is back.. wait and see how i do things now =)

waiting fr kriya's entry..tab ho ga dhamaal,fun n kriyaansh ka romance. Are you sure? 😛
loved it.❤️

Originally posted by: lovely7010

Awesome
loved it
hope any new MU will not be created when kriya meets them..
update soon..

Originally posted by: sanstina

awesome update 😊

Kria sharing her story with naina

loved the way Sharon reacted on selection of 6th dancer

waiting for the Swaron convo

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Aquilia_Aditi

And I make it 60! :D

15 more to go! ;)

Fab update! xD

Need KriYaansh now! =P