Swaron FF:U & Me..Back to Us.#3...Note -pg 47 - Page 19

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Phweshh !!!! Atlast you updated...
Oopss..3 Chappy's all along...Ye hui na baat..

What to say...
Superb Dhamaka'

AAj to mein full mood me hun comment karne ke..
Umm'

Chap-18
sabse pehle..Dream sequence..
Poor Sharon'kitna saha hoga usne'
Then Swayam woke'he calmed her..

You are the reason behind my every heartbeat...you are the string behind my every breath...my heart will stop beating if you will go away...i would die...

She kept her hand on his lips...and obstructed him from completing his statement...

these lines were so beautiful'awiee'
They talked in Balcony'
The moment was so cute..so special'.

The thoughts of Sharon'(pura paste krungi to bht hi bada ho jaega..:P) were penned downed beautifully'

That moon is full of imperfections...whereas my moon is perfect...he said and kept his lips on her forehead...

Wow..soo awesum'..perfect line' SwaRon ❤️

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Chap-19
The flashback..so perfect'lovely'
She remembered the moments..same moments..
How nice..

The blushy part was adorable'
She was not able to speak the "moon wali line"
At last she spoke..
Have you said this line before...kya aisa kuch pehle bhii ho chuka he?she asked in one breath...her eyes were full with expectations...

Her words gave him hope...of getting back his LIFE..his LOVE..his SHARON...

Awie'she could se the faint images..!!
"US" word came..n I was dreaming..total Drooling'

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Chap-20
Tanya and Sharon's moments were cute..
Swayam admiring them both'
She remembered the hug..

Then Tanya called Sharon "Momma"
This was the best part.

Daddy i am right na... we both missed Momma...her greenish orbs were moist...

Swayam and Sharon head shot up when they heard her calling Momma... till now she called her Angel but today she called her Momma...her Momma...

These lines were the best lines of all..
Loved it <3
Awesum..

Sharon wanted to listen for more time..
Tanya said is so cutely'

A heart was getting back its lost rhythm '.a heart was trying to ingest the ocean of happiness...contentedness...hope...and LOVE...the string attaching their hearts was at peace in the safe embrace of its nurturers ..the melodious symphony of their heart beats were filling the arena...the sweet symphony of their LOVE...

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Awww..m just in SwaRon land..
perfect updates..

This was cherry on the Cake'❤️
but never the less Longest was this break'😡
I don't like delay'😔
As ur updates makes my day'😳

Update next soon'

M speechless'.don't have words to express..how flawlessly u wryt !!!

PS- dare u say..that u're wrytng quality has decreased'.

Love,
Ur Swthrt..❤️❤️

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Amazing... All the three chappy were nice...
Very well written... Loved it...

P.s. Sorry for short comment..

Hey it was great to read an update from you after a long time.. You penned down all the three chapters beautifully.. Sharon's dream was very scary and painful.. But swayam's support made her normal again.. Being there for her all the time is the best quality in swayam.. Sharon getting faint images from her past and she s getting a bit of her memory back Is great news.. The moments spent by swayam and sharon were beautiful I loved them totally..:). The moment when tanya calls sharon as her mother was very beautifully written great way of expressing sharon's emotions lovely updates.. Thanx for the pm..:)

My GOD what an update I luved it truly it was sooo amazing <3<3<3

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res til time😛😛 dONE dIPS

Wow I was waiting for dis 3updates in one day all three chapters are amazing u penned it beautifully first 2 chapters was scary and u beautifully written Sharon's pain I loved it and in last chapter it's Tanya I love dis little princess it was too emotional one for me . Totally Iam happy finally I got update for dis please from here on please jaldi update karo please . Thanx for pm