Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

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amritab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

loved the "dabaang" background and the rolling pin in hand!! They can't help themselves can they - close proximity and either a fight or a kiss must ensure and I would have it no other way. Anjali is best when in her planning avatar! A great chapter.

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GirlOfFire

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Arnav is thinking marriage not Khushi!! Hollaa!!!

This is getting better and better !!

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vandana73

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Posted: 12 years ago

#423

HA HA HA OH GOD HA HA HA

hud hud dabangg

salmanji

i could imagine the wheels turning in khushi's mind poisonous jalebi!!

ha ha ha

so much in character

loving it

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aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#424

Awesome update!!

Khushi and her sankeswari mode!!! I can't believe Khushi dumped her favorite jalebis thinking that they can be poisonous *rubs my eyes & read again*

Anjali is so smart & manipulative.. She not only fixed them up for a meeting but also gave Khushi a nice option to join ASR oops AR😉 i loved Khushi's monologue & what she blurted out trying to clear the air to Anjali..😆

It reminded me of old IPK days during some moments like

"Rehne do, tum seh nahi paogi" & "hum aise dikhte hain per hum 2 kilo jalebi.." but thankfully Arnav didn't let her complete it..😳😉

Well Arnav had this in his mind even before Khushi entered his cabin.. He had plans to take this "Aman ka hath" and well how beautifully with so many kisses😳

Another interesting confusion - Khushi is talking about her dream of job & new people to adapt as in office & here Mr. know-it-all ASR is thinking about marriage!! Can this man really think of marriage?? "I'm not ready yet" whoa but still he agreed for Khushi & ensuring that nobody else (specially NK) gets close with her.. 😉😆

I loved it all... It was awesome.. You did not only made me smile but made me laugh too.. Amazing update

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Mithila

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Posted: 12 years ago

#425

Super-duper update

So happy ...lots of kisses😳😳

So funny Arnav thinking about marriage otherside Khushi thinking about her career

Too good yaar

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sruthick

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Posted: 12 years ago

#426

That was hilarious... Lol...
1st Khushi MU Anjali's proposal... Then Arnav... 😆
Nd Arnav agreed 2 this marriage...!!! OMG...!!!
Xcitd 4 d nxt part... I really falln lov with this story...❤️
Lazy...Great update

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annab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#427

Hilarious...poor arnav, i cant wait to read when he finds out wt khushi is actually talking abt..A total kodak moment 😆

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Tara Singhania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#428

hehehe...amzing...loved it...poor arnav and khushi...both are thinking on the same lines yet equally different...

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ekiholo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#429

it was awesome dear...
now is going to have the biggest shock of his life!!

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Reader_Hobby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#430

Hey!

Hope you are doing well ... this goes for all the writers 😊

Onto the update!!! 😃😃

I'm extremely glad that our Anjali here is very observant. I love this qulity in her! I truely hope that what she plans with her brother in mind doesn't goes pear-shaped 😕

Khushi. Bless her. She's so adorable here. I mean we know her and jalebis are like BFFs ... but the questions she's come up with in regards with the sweet things are just ... well so herrr. Sooo Khushi! 😆😆😆 Loved them!! She made me smile when she was talking about not wanting to die and that she'd die a virgin ... like really?! Superb! Trust Khushi to say something like that at a time when she's worried. A unique woman she is. As for her changing from being afraid to being or appearing brave in a matter of seconds, that was something I really enjoyed reading. She isn't weak in any case, but with Arnav or ASR its a different case. No I'm not saying that she's scared of him, just that the normal rules that would apply to others don't apply to him on the receiving end of Khushi's blow. Ooopsies. The effect that he has on her no other can come up with anything remotely close.

Wow!

A slap for a slap in Khushi's eyes ... but for Arnav, its a case of a slap for a hmmm ... well ... a frickin enjoyable make out session. Actually scratch that! Making out for Arnav was great, but it was also the same for Khushi 😉😉

As for the continuing kisses between the two, well that was sooo sweet! Him. Her. Kisses. Beautiful.

Khushi thought that Arnav was talking about her working for him and he, he thought she was talking about marriage ... between the two ... Ooops! 😲 But the amusing thing here is that he agreeed! HE AGREED for marriage, obviously not knowing that she was talking about working 😆

Extremely well-written.