Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

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arshiyakanishka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#411

Loved the update Zehra.

All the intended puns were awesome.😆

Khushi and he inner monologues about Arnav's plan of killing her was hilarious...how does she come to such conclusions n that too so convincingly🤣Also the way she went all prepared with all types of ammunition to his office...rolling pin...seriously😆

You gave so many kisses...thank you for that.

Last para with both of them misunderstanding each other was cherry on the cake.😃

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moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#412

🤣

I loved it...!! Bas!!

Khushi, with the rolling pin in the office armed with a handsome man. Will she work for him and/or marry him. Yes! According to ASR anyway...

Brilliant stuff!

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#413

He wants to marry her!!! I did not see that coming. Each chapter ends in a shock with my jaw on the ground.

Loved Khushi in this chapter! HUD HUD Dabangg!!

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shalini_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#414

omg.. loved it.. talking abt 2 different things... waiting to see Khushi's outburst..

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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#415

Zeee, it was awesome to say the least - lots of wit, lots of pun, lots of jalebi and lots of kisses!

And Anjali is Devi Maiyya's cupid avatar on earth :D

What sounded like war horns turned into wedding bells and now just lots of laughter. Arnav is saying yes to marriage! And all she wants to do have a ball with gotas. 🤣

Ekdum mast tha! :D

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riafna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#416

Zehra you know how to change the wind direction... That note from Anjali and Nk ..they are playing cupid.
Arnav thought it was their marriage proposal... he was ready for that... another twist if he know Khushi said no to that...
Bhola?? wohi wohi...
ASR needs and my brother need her...
Chotey's wife is important
than your life Nk...😆
hanks for mail Zehr
a and thanks for pm Rasgulla

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cozy_mango

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Posted: 12 years ago

#417

I love this FF, it's hilarious! All the writers are brilliant and have written it so well! Love that Anjali and NK decided to meddle by playing cupid 😆 Thanks for the pm 😊

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Sonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#418

Hahahahahaha really? what a turn of events. loved every bit of the chapter. I love this anjali, so so much. and the kissing in the end, so hot, such comfort, such honesty and then the misinterpreted conversation of proposals. Hahaha hilarious

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fhussain237

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Posted: 12 years ago

#419

Great update
It definetly made me smile n laugh
I loved the way anjali confused khushi by her proposal.i cudnt stop laughing wen khushi done the same to arnav
Loving the story so far
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm