Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats on new thread! Jst read chapter 6, Emma ur a fab writer. I always admire ur work, now I know u can write comedy too! Keep it up guys 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Emma, this chapter was very sweet and lovely. I was indeed smiling throughout and was going "aww" at some parts. Chulbul Pandey-ji would be very proud of her. Oh & I loved the following lines.

"Hold my jhumkas Arnavji, I can tell this is going to be tough business". 🤣

He felt' un-manly. Yes, that was the word.

She tried speaking in a lower voice, maybe then they would understand that she was representing Chulbul Pandey. 😆

She carried them around in her purse because she liked to befriend people. 😆

I'm not sure why you have not written comedy before because romantic comedy seems to be totally your thing. You did a great job with this chapter & if you do decide to start a SS/FF with a similar genre, I would definitely love to read! :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
wow...
hatts off to u guys...writing it again ...
will follow n read ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread!!!🥳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i KNOW IT MIGHT BE TOO LATE BUT CAN i GET A DATE AFTE 6TH MARCH????

i would like to participate into it...


please...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
I wish i had got the 2nd feb date cause it's my dob...

well no problem...if it is not affirmative...
will wait for your next collab...


I will be very happy if I get a chance...I love reading it...


thank you...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congos on the new thread! ❤️ u all n DIR!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The ch by emma was superb like all the ones before...how will i wait for two more days...n congo for the second thread...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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For Chapter 6 -

This seriously was such an AWESOME chapter. :)
I had a smile on my face the whole time!!!
So smart she is!!! Full on ready to take on the bad guys!!
Just as badass as Chulbul Paney ji.😆

Okay...I just had to stop reading and just ROFL when I read the part where ASR was holding jhumka's.🤣 ASR with Juhmka's...really? Priceless!!!

And Khushi already knows NK!!!
Not to mention the fact that Payal is wooing Akash...and not the other way round. :)
And you know...I could hear Rabbe Ve in the background...along with that randomly appearing wind. :P

Ahhh...Sheesh Mahal. Can't wait for it!! :)

Bring on the laughter riots!! I'm lovin' it!!! :)
Great job Emma!!!👏
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