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Posted: 19 years ago
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Road Trip

Chapter 4

As Kripa stared at the motel, she grimaced. "what are you waiting for? Go inside and get the rooms, and ill get the luggage." Angad said. She nodded and headed inside. Ugh was it disgusting. The lobby was painted a shade of puke and the room was bare except for one small couch and a old wood desk and a antique looking computer. She frowned and walked up to the desk.

'U excuse me?" she asked. The man looked up at her.

"Ya?" he grunted.

"Can we have two rooms for tonight please?

"Nope. I only have one. Cuz we got some marriage party thing going on and all the rooms are taken."

"oh". Kripa said. Now what was she going to do? She didn't want to sleep in the same room as him. He probably was loud and took up a lot of space. Ugh. But it would be totally decent and innocent….she would sleep on her side and he would sleep on his side. She stood up straighter and walked outside.

"There's only one room. I was thinking we could share it if you wanted to." She told him.

"Nah it ok. U can have the room. Im sleep in the back of the car. As it is im pretty loud." Angad said..

"are u sure?" asked Kripa. He nodded.

"Im used to it so don't worry about it." He answered. "bye".

She waved and went inside the building. Once she let herself inside the room, she saw that it wasn't bad at all. The queen bed was big and the pillows and sheets looked so soft, and comfy. For a second she felt a pang in her chest. She knew that Angad and she could both sleep on the bed without even touching. But she quickly got over it when she saw her treo light up. YES! Maybe it was Prithvi call. She looked at it and she jumped. Hallelujah! She picked it up. "Hello?"

"Hey Baby" he said. She smiled. This was the first time he had ever called her baby on the phone.

"Hey you. How is it there?"

"It's amazing. Everything is beautiful and its so peaceful. Man I do miss you so much."

Kripa wanted to squeal. This was so weird. But good weird. Prithvi was never the kind to be so romantic. Kripa wondered what had happened.

"Baby I miss you so much. I wish you were here hunny."

Kripa sighed and smiled so hard it seemed liked her cheeks would fall off. Just then her phone beeped.

"Hold on. I got another call" she said to Prithvi.

"Hello?"

"You got some mouthwash? My breath smells funny." It was Angad.

"No I don't."

"I know you do. I saw it in your purse."

"YOU LOOKED THROUGH MY PURSE!?"

"Um ya….why?"

"DO YOU HAVE NO MANNERS?" she shrieked.

'Quit yelling and gimme it"

"Im not coming outside!"

"So throw it out ur window!"

"Huh?". Kripa walked over, opened her window and saw Angad standing there. She angrily opened her course and threw the mouthwash, aiming for his head. He caught it and smiled.
"Thanks!"

"DON'T CALL AGAIN!" she yelled and ended the call. Then she switched back to Prithvi's call. "Hello?"

"I gotta go. Bye"

She sighed. "bye.", and then thought "I hate Angad!".

She headed of to the bathroom to take a shower.

Preview: Kripa gets locked out, wearing a very revealing night suit.

That's it for today. I gotta go somewhere so I didn't proofread. Sry. No car pics either. Please leave comments!

Edited by prakriti - 19 years ago
Mulle thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#72
omg awesome part prakriti 👏 👏
continue soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73
great part
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prakriti thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i got a new ff....plz c if u like it

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=391331&TPN=1 &#6646392
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Posted: 19 years ago
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revealing eh??? lolzzz... continue soon.. cant wait to see wat happenss.. and wonder why prithvi was romantic. wat had happend?? 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hahahaahahahaahah locked out lol !!!! that is wayyyyyyy too funny! plz continue soon totally cant wait to read more!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hahahahah.... greattttttttttt jobbbbbbb
cont sssooon 😆 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww wow!! last part woz 2 gud!!
cant w8 4 d nxt 1!!
dis is jus sooooo cute!!
ur doin a briliant job 👏 👏 👏
continu soon 😊
xxMWAHxx
xx Saz xx
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: prakriti

lmao. thanx. i kno rite? it was good. u?



my was ok yaar...lol yea...well stay in touch
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pooja922



my was ok yaar...lol yea...well stay in touch

i will

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