Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 2)

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@Anony_mous

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: mysticmanthri
after reading this one ss for some time now i can say that you are a writer to watch out for...superb update...
he willingly excluded red ...his covetous heart i couldn't stop the smile that was spreading thinking about arnav's frustation at the happenings around him...i so cant wait him to break out...
congrats for the new thread may you get more!

Thank You so much for the wonderful comment :)

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@Sweta...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Congrats on the new thread loving arnav getting jealous of Akaash and his possessiveness that he does not want everyone to see khushi in red probably because he won't be able to control himself lol lovely update :) can't wait for the party Uodate :) thanks for the pm :)

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lilakumariac

@lilakumariac

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Oh... Akash has feelings for khushi... Hmnn...
Wat will happen nw???
Hope arnav will tell her first...
Nice update..
Waiting...
Continue soon plzz
God bless you...

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nightfury

@nightfury

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

i like ur writing style
i feel u can increase the pace of the story little bit.just my opinion though
thnx for pm nice update 😊

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vgedin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Khushi, that poor little oblivious girl, cannot blame her; Arnav sucks at showing his affections let alone love, how is she to know ? But now she has plans to spend the whole time in the party with Aakash, lets see how that goes :D

Aakash and Khushi should make an interesting pair, don't think I have ever read that before. Kahaani me twist!

Congratulations of the new thread :)

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segad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Quite frankly i had trouble with this chapter. khushi doesn't feel anything for akash, that much is clear. she is still oblivious of her feelings for arnav. arnav is jealous. akash wants to make his feelings clear to her at the earliest.

did i get that right? but the part i am having trouble with is the progress of the story. did anything move in this update or is it jaise the from the last update? my feeling, jaise the.

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

@Anony_mous

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: segad
Quite frankly i had trouble with this chapter. khushi doesn't feel anything for akash, that much is clear. she is still oblivious of her feelings for arnav. arnav is jealous. akash wants to make his feelings clear to her at the earliest.

did i get that right? but the part i am having trouble with is the progress of the story. did anything move in this update or is it jaise the from the last update? my feeling, jaise the.

Thanks for the comment.

You got everyone's feeling right and we are on the same page :)

I've been getting lots of comments where people want to know how khushi feels, how Arnav feels.

So I used this one update to make their stands clear.

Progression in Khushi's feelings will get more space in future though.

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kinno

@kinno

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

After along impatient wait the update was really worth it😆
Congrats on your new thread
update soon hun

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anusha.nush

@anusha.nush

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

congrats for the 2nd thread
i love the way you write or describe arnav's jealousy, the way he says that khushi his and she will stay in his house forever.
waiting eagerly for next part