Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 2)

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Simran

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Firstly, congratulations on the second thread! Very deserving:)

This part was great!

I really hope Arnav is able to express his feelings for Khushi before Akash! Even soemthing small from Arnav for Khushi will speak a thousand words (since it will come from Arnav!)

I wonder what Khushi truly feels about Arnav!!

Cannot wait for the party:)

Great job!

Thank you very much for the pm!

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ashred12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

congrats on new thread...
aww khushi is so oblivious !!

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niharika111

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Anony_mous

Thanks for the comment :)

As for your doubt about Khushi's naivete, she is not naive like the character in show . It's difficult to survive in this world with that kind of attitude. Its just that Arnav never gave her any reason to like him. And now that he is aware of her, her opinion won't change overnight.

Thanks for the clarification. But now that she has become quite comfortable around Arnav, has she never felt anything out of the ordinary in his presence? I mean, its true that Arnav has never really let out his feelings. But as a woman, has Khushi ever felt any awareness when in his presence ?

Edited by niharika111 - 13 years ago

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OmNaMaSteOm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

congrats on a new thread

about the update I found it more of introspection of each other nothing has really moved - usually in your updates the story moves right here I did not feel so - otherwise it is a very interesting part

Edited by Arhi-Did-IT - 13 years ago

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mon4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

no red why? Arnav strict's instruction😉 I know he cannot control himself after seeing her in red.😉

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Ashakalyani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

awesome update...oh god akash also feels 4 khushi...wen arnav wil come 2 knw abt dis he wil bcome mad...lets c wat happens..waitng 4 nxt update

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puppy.puppy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Waiting for next one
Nice update
please don't hurt akash

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mysticmanthri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

after reading this one ss for some time now i can say that you are a writer to watch out for...superb update...

he willingly excluded red ...his covetous heart i couldn't stop the smile that was spreading thinking about arnav's frustation at the happenings around him...i so cant wait him to break out...

congrats for the new thread may you get more!

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: niharika111

Thanks for the clarification. But now that she has become quite comfortable around Arnav, has she never felt anything out of the ordinary in his presence? I mean, its true that Arnav has never really let out his feelings. But as a woman, has Khushi ever felt any awareness when in his presence ?

That's what the story is about. Her becoming aware of him and his efforts for the same :)

As of now, they've lost their loved ones, and emotional bonds of caring and sharing have been formed. Rest all is to come!