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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrts for d new thread nd nyc updte
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congrats 4 d new thread...
awsome update
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Srry mereko aur koi thread nai mila
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Helllooo people back with update...!!!

"Mei taani" The person on the other side answered.

Kria:Taani thum muje call kyun kiya?

Taani:Am sorry kria for what all i have done.I know that i shouldnt do like that but i was mad for rey so..Please forgive me.Agar thum forgive nahin karogi tho mei kuch kardhungi.

Kria:hey hey wait its ok ,i forgive u...And now stop doing useless things

Taani:Thank you kria thank you sooo much!!

Kria:Ur welcum dear.

Taani:Ab se thum meri best friend jaise ho..Mei thumhe rey ki saari updates dhethe rahungi.

Kria:Haha okok.

Taani:Waise muje jana hai woh rey hai muje kuch kaam hai so bye talk to you later.

Kria:Ok bye.

After cutting the call

Kria:Pagal Ladki kuch bhi kehthi rehthi hai..Kya mei rey ko bataun ya nahin?Agar bataunga tho wo gussa ho gaya tho?taani ko kuch ulta seedha kehdiya tho?

When she was in a confused state seeing her like that swayam who was passing by came and asked whats the matter

Swayam:Kya hua kria itna confused lag rahi ho?

Kria:Swayam actually abhi muje taani ne call kiya

Swayam:What?thumne usse baath kyun ki?

Kria:Arey pehle baath tho sunlo mera bhai ...woh muje apologize kar rahi thi aur keh rahi thi ki usse galthi hogayi..

Swayam:Aur thumne usse beleive karli.??

Kria:haan agar kissi insaan aapna galthi ko realise hokar sharmindha hokar maafi manga tho hume maaf karna chahiye tha na so that we can reduce their guiltiness rite?

Swayam:Kria Madam ji!gyan dhena bandh karo aur uss ladki see zyadha baath math karo aur dhur raho.Samja?

Kria:Haan okay.

Swayam:Waise thune rey ko bataya kya tumhara aur taani ka conversation?

Kria:Nah...Wahi soch kar confuse ho rahi hun bataun ki nahin.agar bataun tho wo gussa hokar kuch kar na baite..Upar se bahut possesive hai.

Swayam:Oh possesive and all haan?

Swayam said in a teasing manner.

Kria:*BLUSHING* haan possesive tho hai..par gussa wala bhi hai.!Aur agar usko gussa agaya tho woh kuch na kuch stupid cheez karke baitega.

Swayam:Haan woh tho hai.

They both burst into laughing.

Swayam:I think thumhe usse batana chahiye iske pehle ki koyi gadbad na hojaye.

Kria:hmm

Soon kria's cell ringed.By seeing the caller ID kria blushed ,by seeing this swayam pulled the phone from her hand and answered the call.

Rey:hello baatcutter kaise ho?Waise bhi mei thumse gussa hun !you dint call me.Thum itni chup kyun ho kayi rani laxmi bhai oops sorry teri mom ya phir tera protective bhai tho nahin hai na?Oh baatcutter chup kyun ho?

Swayam Talked as smriti

Swayam:Hello mei smriti kria ki maa

Rey:hell...hello...hello aunt...aunty...am so...sorry...woh mai am sorry aunty woh bas aise hi keh raha tha am ...am sorry!

He was feared to the core.

All the while kria was trying to pull her cell back and here swayam was ROFLING!

Swayam:Arey Bhai mei hun swayam!

He replied laughing hard.

Rey:Abey!muje toh ek second ke liye heart attack agaya tha..ddhubara aise maath karna mera heart pehle se hi bahut sensative hai aur usko itne sare jatke dhunge tho woh bechare seh nahin payega...waise tere behan kaha hai?Wait a minute tu uss ka phone kyun utaya ?manners nahin hai kya love birds ke baathe mei taang adane keliye?chi swayam chi!

He was going on talking...Swayam was trying to speak but no way he was conti cut by rey

Swayam:CHUP! Chup raho...Bolthe hi ja rahe ho bolthe hi ja rahe ho?Baatcutter meri behan nahin thum ho!Aur ye lo apne love ke saath baath karlo

he said giving the phone to kria and left the room.

Rey:hello?

Kria:haan bolo

Rey:kya yaar tera bhai ne aise bhola...mei baatcutter hun kya?

Kria:haan woh tho thum ho.

Rey:thum bhi?

Kria:kya karun aap kuch dhino se baatcutter jo bangaye

Rey:Mei kya karun tere saath rehne ka side effects..

Kria:MR.Baatcutter*giggling*

Rey:waisa bhai jaisa behan ...dhonon ke dhono mere saath khel rahe ho.

Kria was laughing.

Rey:aise hi hasthe raho..

Here she was blushing and there he was smiling.

Kria:Waise rey aapka dhin kaisa tha?

Rey:Dhin?bilkul kharab tha

Kria:Kharab kyun?

Rey:Kyun matlab kya kahun thum jo nahin ho mere saath..jab bhi tera photo dhektha hun tho thumhe kiss karne aur hug karne ka bahut man kartha hai par kya karun afsooz mei kar nahin pa raha hun.

Kria:Rey uthna udass math ho ...2-3 months ke baadh hum milenge na?

She was trying to cheer him up.

Rey:Par mei thujse ek dhin ke liye bhi shur nahin reh saktha.

Kria:uffo rey app pagal ho.

Rey:haan hun thumhare liye.

Silence prevailed for few seconds.

Soon kria realised that she should say that taani convo to rey

Kria:Rey muje kuch kehni thi apko

Rey:I love u hi na?kehdho am waiting.

Kria:nahin wo nahin..

Rey:tho muje i love u nahin kahogi.?

Kria:Arey baba..

Rey:I love u i love u i love u i love u i love u i love u

He was going on saying

Kria:Chup!

Rey:jab tak thum muje i love u nahin kahogi tab tak mei i love kehtha rahunga i love u i love u i love u...

Kria:Okayy I LOVE YOU!

Rey:Sorry i cant hear.

Kria:I LOVE U REY

Rey:Kitna?

Kria:matlab?

Rey:Simple mei pooch raha hun ki thum muje kitna pyaar karthe ho?

Kria:Jitna app soch bhi nahin sakthe..

Rey:mei tho thumhe usse kya zyadha kartha hun baatcutter.

Kria:Nahin main!

Rey:No me!

Kria:ME!

Rey:Ofcourse its me baby!

Kria:ME!

Rey:bye sweetheart got to go!!work hai urgent talk to you later at night humare first night ke baare mei discuss karlenge bye!love u! and i love u more !bye!

Saying this he disconnected the call.

She was blushing

Then she realised that she dint say what she actually wanted to say.

Kria:Uffoo mei jo bath bathane ke liye phone kiya tha woh bataya hi nahin..Yeh rey bhi na humesha baathe guma gumakar baath kartha hai.

She was thinking about their convo and blushing.She received a message.
Now all thhis below convo is a message convo.

"Stop thinking about me and kuch kam karo:P"-Rey

"Mei aapke bare mei nahin soch rahi thi huh!" -Kria

"I know you baatcutter"-Rey

"Aap kuch nahin janthe!"-Kria

"Mei thumko thumse zyadha jantha hoon.and mei yeh bhi jantha hun ki ab mei woh kehne ja raha hun jisse sunkar thum blush karogi...actually i want to say that I LOVE YOU<3"-Rey

She blushed seeing that message.

"See i said na:D...Dheka mei kitna smart hun"-Rey

"haan muje pata hai ki aap smart ho aur badhmash bhi"-Kria

"badhmash?:O...Mei badhmash?:(" -Rey

"Awww,acha aap badhmash ho par cute ho:)"-Kria

"Woh tho mai hun isliye ladkiyan muj par fida hothe hai"-Rey

"Ithna bhi udd math!:@" -Kria

"Woah!something is burning:P"-Rey

"Haan woh burning ka smell thab ayega jab mei kis ladke ke saath baat karu ya phir dance karun:D"-Kria

"I will kill him!"-Rey

"Kisko maroge?"-Kria

"jo bhi thumhare saath dance karega ya phir baath karega:@"-Rey

"Something is burning:D"-Kria

"Muaahhh aise hi hasthe raho humesha .Love u<3"-Rey

"Love u too<3"-Kria

"Hello mera kiss kahan hai?"-Rey

"Muahhh...Kush?"-Kria

"Haan super duper kush:D:D"-Rey

"Okok baatcutter got to go time for class ...byeee:*" -Rey

"Bye.Take care"-Kria

Message convo stops.

Kria(Thinks):kya mei rey ko taani ke convo ke bare mei message kardhun?nahin nahin agar aise baath message mei bataya tho woh gussa ho jayega mei directly bataungi

Soon she receives another text .

"Hey kria tera borfriend tho bahut gussa wala hai yaar.teek se step nahi kiya tho daant tahe hai.Acha acha sorry aur ye lo uska dance pinc meine chup chup kar pic kicha thumhareliye.Have good day darling"-Taani.

Kria:yeh taani itni achi tarah se baath kar rahi hai?lagtha hai ye badal gayi..aur pic?

Soon she receives an mms of rey's pic.

The pic is something like rey doing the same step when kria did in their first meet.She blushed seeing that pic.

Kria:awww mere reyu!!!Love u!!

she said kissing the pic.


swayam calls her to join him for lunch.kria agrees and comes.

Only kria and swayam ,sharon and kria are dinning.

Swayam:So kria thumne rey se kaha kya?

Kria:Nahin swayam ...thum rey ko janthe ho na woh sab guma guma kar baath kartha hai aur mei bhool jathi hun ki actually muje kya kehni hai.

Swayam:haan haan jantha hun

Sharon:kiske bare mei baath kar rahe ho thum log?

Swayam:Arey woh taani hai na remember?

Sharon:yes!woh phir agayi kya?Kya kiya usne kria ke saath?

Kria:woah woah cool down sharon ,woh mere saath kuch nahin ki.

Sharon:tho kya rey ke saath ki hai kya?

Kria:arey nahin nahin sharon...swayam samja dho na

Swayam:sharon actually woh ..

He explains her everything.

Sharon:oh muje lagtha hai ki kuch gadbad hai .kria thum uss taani se dhur raho its better.waise thune rey ko bataya kya?jaldi batao warna woh gussa hokar kuch ulta sedha kaam karke baite ga/

Kria:haan sharon hum bhi wohi soch rahe the.

Swayam:anyways kria tho thum apna dance academy kab start karne wali ho?

Kria:haan swayam meine uske bare mei abhi thak socha nahin i will think and wiill say soon.

Swayam:okok.

The door bell rings and swayam opens the door to find and was shocked to see the view infront of him

There was a large teddy bear with a card,flowers,chocolates on its lap.

Service guy came from behind and gave a pamplet to sign it.

Swayam:ye kiaun bheja?

Service guy:woh Mr.Reeyansh singhania ne bheja sir Mrs. Kria reeyansh singhania ke liye

he said seeing the paper which contained the info.

Swayam:What?

Swayam laughed.

Service guy:haan sir aisa hi hai iss paper par..

Swayam:okok wait..Mrs.Reeyansh singhania thumhare liye kuch parcel.

Swayam shouted from the door..To which kria spittef the water

Sharon was Rofling!

Kria ran towards the door and asked whats the matter.

Kria:kya hai?kyun aise chilla rahe ho ?aap kaun ho?

she said seeing at the service guy.

Service:hello madam aap ho <rs.Reeyansh singhania kya?actually Mr.reeyansh ne aapko yeh parcel bheja actually sir ne bahut instructions diye the haar min call kartha raha ki parcel bheja ki nahin..woh aapse bahut pyaar kartha hai.

The service guy said smiling.He gace the parcel and went off.

Swayam:so mrs.reeyansh

Swayam was laughing

Sharon:swayam kria ko tang karna bandh karo aur chalo usse akela chod dho.

She took the gift to her room and was smiling all way along.

She took the card it read

"Hello Mra.Kria Reeyansh Singhani! kaise ho?:P...Kaisa laga mera gift?acha ya bhura?ofcourse acha laga hoga..Kal mei soch raha tha ki agar mei chala jaunga tho thum kaisa raho gi?tho i got a plan so i had sent this teddy jab bhi muje hug ya kiss karna hai tho iss tedy ko Rey samjkar jo chahe karo..And also save some kisses and hugs for Real rey haan!Please blush math karo muje thumhare pass ane ka maan kartha hai..Aur ye lo chocolates thumhe pasandh hai na..aur ye roses kyunki they are beautiful like you.I love you baby missing you.Muahhh<3
Your lovely hubby
Rey. "

She smiled and laid on her bed hugging the Teddy!


Here ends my update

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Edited by kriyaansh_07 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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me frst me frst...yaya!!!!!!!!!!

mujhe na daal mai kuch kaala lag raha hai...

tani n itna sweet.....krai door raho usse...

kriyam ka convo...aww bahi n behan...

swyam n rey toh mast tha👍🏼

awww kriyaansh in hw many ways they ll be cute...

rey sayin i luv u continiously

dekha kisi ko bi uss chudail par barosa nahi

awww rey is so sweet MRS REYAANSH SINGHANIYA...

n the gift was superb i can imagine the teddy😆

teddy ke saath kuch bi kar sakti hai...🤣🤣

loved it...🤗🤗🤗


Edited by kreya_pearl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😭
me late gain
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Superb update.
Tanni wo bhi itne sweet . .😲. daal me kuch kaala nahi puri daal he kaale hai. .😳
Kriyaansh ke lovely talks n teasing. .😛
Reyam convo is to funny. .🤣
Loved it❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesum update..tani itni sweet..kuch gadbad hai update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woww. . .nice update. . .
Yeh taani mai achhaanak se inta jada change,
mujhe toh bahut gadbad lag rahi hai. . . .
Just hope sab thk ho. .
Woww kriyaansha ka phone and msg convo was super cute. . . . .
Mrs.REYAANSH SINGHANIA vaala part was so cute. . .lovd it. . .

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