TS FF-raksha bandhan:rishta bhai-behen ka(part 15) - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
nyc update yaar...bt cheating hai... aage jaldi ipdate karo yaar...its way 2 cute n thnx 4 d pm :)

n yayyy...m d 1st 1 on page 12 :p
Edited by sonakshigupta - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😃one of the sweetest and best bonds in the world a bro-sis bond n taani and swayam portray it perfectly thank you for writing such a nice OS on them very touching :) plz continue :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
hey great update dear. . . . . .dont know why swayam is angry wid taani but i know everythng will be alright. . . . .now its page 12, . . . .update plz.love taayam.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

oh my god! u guys are so desperate for the next part . ok so here u go-

PART-3

when swayam saw her face his heart melted. he went to her

swayam- taani listen...(she stopped him by showing her palm)

when swayam shouted her she was hurt which was now turned into anger. she was so furious at him that her eyes turned red. but tears were still streaming from her eyes.

the raakhi fell from her hand

swayam saw it then he remembered that today was raksha bandhan. the most awaited day of his life, he was preparing for this day from two months. how can he? how can he forget most important day of his life?

taani- bhai me to bas yahaan par aapko raakhi baandhne aayi thi, bas do minute ki to baat thi. na jaane do mahine se iss din ke kitne sapne sajaye the! ki me aapko kaise raakhi baandhungi, kaise aap mujhe hamesha ki tarah hug karenge, aap mujhe konsa gift denge jo mujhe hamesha ki tarah perfect hi lagega( tears were still streaming from her eyes) lekin aapne to mere sapno ko tod diya?kyun bhai? khun?(crying very hard)

all were feeling bad for taani and all were a little angry on swayam. they were thinking how can someone hurt this angel?

swayam- taani i am sorry taani plz apne bhai ko maaf kardo plz taani i am really very sorry(he tried to go near her but she moved backwards)

seeing this swayam was really hurt and was feeling guilty he was regretting, the person he loves the most, the person who is the most precious thing in the world for him , he had hurt that person and that too on the day which was most important for them. how can he?

taani- bhai me aapse kabhi baat nahi karungi, pata hai aapne mujhe pehli baar hurt kiya hai, pehli baar mujhe rulaya hai, pehli baar mujhpe chillaya hai. i hate u bhai! i hate u!

he felt like someone tore his heart when he listened to those last words. he felt like his world broke apart his life was his sister he loves his sister so much that he can do anything for her.

swayam shocked and crying- taani ye kya keh rahi ho tum? plz taani aisa mat kaho mai ye nahi seh sakta, tum mujhe koi bhi saza de do par aisa mat bolo plz mai mar jaaunga taani plz aisa mat bolo plz

taani- aaj aapne mujhe bohot hurt kiya hai, mai aapko tabse bhai bulati hoon jabse aap mujhe mile the, mera iss duniya me koi nahi hai bhai aapke siva. maa ke jaani ke baad sirf aur sirf aap par hi bharosa kiya tha maine bhai, bhai? nahi me abse aapko bhai nahi bulaaungi aap mere swayam bhai nahi ho aap koi aur ho. mere bhai iss duniya me sabse zyada pyaar mujhse karte hai wo ye din kabhi nahin bhool sakte. mai sirf apne bhai ko hi raakhi baandhungi. aap mere bhai nahi ho!(she shouted)

she went crying from there

swayam- taani(only this can he speak)

he felt that he has no existence in this world. he felt like a soulless body, jaise usme jaan hi nahi hai kyunki uski jaan to taani hai na.

her words were haunting him. how could she how could she tell that he is not her bhai the one he loves her the most?

is she was telling the truth? has he changed? yes a lot but the love for her is still the same( tears were flowing from his eyes uncontinuously.

he fell on his knees and broke down.

the whole team was seeing all this all were feeling equally bad for both of them and listening that taani's mother is no more they were shocked as well

suddenly swayam saw the raakhi which fell from her hand. he picked it(still in the same position)

it was the most beautiful raakhi he has ever seen. he could sense how many hours she would have spent on finding this because she always choose perfect for her bhai and wat she chooses is always perfect for him.he cried looking at that raakhi.

here taani went to the fire exit and was crying uncontinuously because her parents died when she was 8 yrs and from that day her only parent was her bhai obviously swayam's parents were there but she loved her bhai the most.

they both had a flashback of when they first time met each other

FLASHBACK-

taani's mom was breathing her last breathe and beside her hospital bed there two persons whom she loves the most. a cute little girl holding her blue teddy and wearing a blue frock 8 yrs old like an angel everyone will fall in love with her. she was looking at her mother and pearl like tears were flowing from her eyes. a cute 10 yrs boy with somewhat long hair crying and holding the lady's hand

taani's mom- swayam beta ye tumhari behen hai...(taayam never met each other before this) me bas kuch hi pal ki mehmaan hoon isliye tumse kuch kehna chahti hoon

swayam- haan bua boliye

taani's mom- swayam ise me tumhe somp rahi hoon tum mujhse ye vaada karo ki tum apni behen ka hamesha khayal rakhoge, use kabhi chodke nahi jaaoge, kabhi uske aankhon se aansu nahi behne doge vaada karo swayam vaada karo

swayam- haan bua me aapse vaada karta hoon ki me apni behen ka hamesha dhyan rakhunga use kabhi hurt nahi hone doonga kabhi nahi!

taani's mom- pari beta( she calls her pari) yahaan aao mumma ke paas

taani went near her

taani's mom- beta abse tum swayam ke saath rahogi abse mumma tumhare paas nahi hogi par mumma upar se tumhe dekhegi isliye mat rona varna mumma ko bura lagega, ho sake to mujhe maaf kar dena pari!( she died)

swayam started crying then he looked towards taani, her sister! whose responsibility was on him. she looked like an angel, like a pari

he went near her, she stopped crying. she was a little bit scared her mother was no more and she have to live with a person whom she never met before but when she looked into his eyes she found love and care for her.

swayam cupped her face and wiped her tears

swayam- tumhara naam kya hai?

taani- taani

swayam- taani aaj ke baat kabhi mat rona me hoon na tumhare saath

taani- bhai aap bhi kabhi mat rona(she wiped his tears with her tiny hands)

swayam had no sisters and when he heard the word bhai from her he felt very special he smiled and kissed her forehead and they hugged each other.

FLASHBACK OVER

ok guys this part is over. next demand page 20😆😉 demand ke baare me bolne se pehle kaisa likha tha ye bol dena. i've converted it into a ss aur haan likes and comments varna page 100 tak bhi chala jaayega to bhi no update and bade vaale comments ok😆😊

Edited by adi.cutiepie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
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ye m first...

amazing dear...taani's anger and swayam feeling guilty...

there past ...i m crying reading there past.😭😭...u made me cry...😭

amazing update...update next soon...
Edited by Dipu_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
awesome & emotional update dear.
you made me cry...😭
The way you described taani's feeling and swayam's guilt is awesome.
beautifully written.
she has no one in her life except her brother and uska bhai the most precious and important person of her life uspe chilla raha hai..
am waiting, how swayam manofying and make her happy..
aur kya ek aur dhamki page 20 se pahele update nahi karungi..
not fair.

Edited by dh19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: dh19

awesome & emotional update dear.
you made me cry...😭
The way you described taani's feeling and swayam's guilt is awesome.
beautifully written.
she has no one in her life except his brother and uska bhai the most precious and important person of his life uspe chilla raha hai..
am waiting, how swayam manofying and make her happy..
aur kya ek aur dhamki page 20 se pahele update nahi karungi..
not fair.

thanks dear for such a lovely comment n everything is fair in love and war n u all guys love this ss n me😉 right?😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
di its amazing 👏

just loved it so so much

it so emotional...so touching

more den awesome

plz update soon

thanx 4 d pm

n plz demands kam rakho yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Rula.diya mujhe
litterally main ro rahi hun
kaise manage kar leti ho itna accha likhna
swayam n taani...dey r d mst sweet bro sis ive eva seen
aur tumara os usko aur bhi sweet bana rHa hai
itni kam.umar main swayam n taani dono kitne jyada mature hai
dono kitna pyAar karte hai ek doosre se
bt swayam.bhool kaise sakta hai
kitna hurt hue hai dono
cnt. Soon...update asap
n pm.karna mat bhoolna
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Adi u no it's not good to make ppl cry so early in the morning lol, it was beautifully written the love each other so much and their past omg Taani mom die 😭 well atleast her bhai was there to take care of her, but why did he snap at her I wish I have to wait until pg 20 hmmm lol. U did a superb job adi love it

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