IPKKND SS:Sins * Thread 1* - Page 110

And as usual..you and KKG not only surprised arnav, who bichara "fantasized" about this moment, but also us!

Thank you

"I know what she is referring to, of course"

for a moment I wasn't so sure.

The way he looked through this khushi to figure out:

"The old Khushi challenged me at very turn."

"the shyness"

I liked.

And aman and arnav haha:

"Already? And the day is just beginning.."

Somethings don't change:

"Does her return have anything to do with me at all?"

And they might just have:

"I chide myself for my selfishness."

I never doubted khushi's capabilities to move ahead. I love how you described the whole scene in arnav's office. The moving back and his need to reduce all proximities..I guess he can understand it now. Although he was always good at reading her eyes..the words he didn't really understand.

Aww a coffee date! YAY! And Arnav is right..there is a confident air about her, I feel it too blowing in my face through the screen. She is what she wants to be..not fully but getting there. I like this transformation..you have kept it realistic as always!!

And obviously arnav cant stop himself now..

"Why do you think?"

This must be amazing to catchup and yet so awkward..when you dont know "what is off limits". And you pen it perfectly as usual and you bring out a "comfort level between us.."

And in mine and Arnav's excitement we forgot about what khushi was thinking about him also..

"I almost didn't recognize this man in front of me"

Yaaay cannot wait to see what arnav has been doing all this time, apart from phangirling over your FF's and getting some pointers from my comments obviously!

"I am afraid that words will fail me, and so I have decided to show her what I have done, while I waited for her return."

I am so happy you made them move out of shantivan, and that green house..nice idea!

It must be sooo difficult to write arnav khushi without the passion. I mean he has it and she can't bare it, still. I love how you handled this in the office and even now!

Hitashi

It was perfect juhi...

The touch.

The trauma. (I am so glas you mentioned all this!)

The self-disgust at not being able to fully recover.

The anger.

"Because I love you, dammit! I always have, and I always will! "

The trust.

The guilt.

"Why did you choose to suffer alone?" etc.

The tears.

Then the journal made an appearance..again perfect and everything I wanted to hear and more. And I guess you answered my question:

"This was supposed to be journal of my sins, but it has turned into a record of a journey towards finding love."

And then the man himself...

The planned proposal.

The career choice.

The whatever-I-do-I-do-it-for-you!

The pull.

The memories.

The passion. (Ek line..and you remind me what they are about, what i have forgotten about in the past 11 chapters..you are really good at passion wali lines, dammit!)

The gotas.

The unexpected proposal!

THE MANGALSUTRA. The spoon theory, the pull theory, the air theory all lead to the hope of hamesha!

The honeymoon! (The passionate khushi of LLATW!)

The surprise in true khushi + juhi style.

Beautiful beautiful beautiful way to wrap up this story...loved this journey.

Hitashi

ps. thank you for indulging me and my comments :)

It is amazazing!

You done a great job writing it :)

Gut wrenching and very well written.

and i started reading few mins back... finished part two

GOSH! the way you write, every sentence, every WORD touched my heart, the diction of urs is minblowing, the concept is touchy and i think i'll read all the chapters in one go tonight!

thank you SO MUCH for such a SS... *hugs* and kisses

-Mushfika

I am also glad that the story doesnt have just an arrogant tycoon for ASR, he is shown to be making efforts to redeem, voicing his words out, apologizing for what he did at the right time (atleast when he needed to later on). I was so sick of not seeing this particular thing with the show. and in such great way, beautifully done.

Aaah Khushi has to be my favorite, her strength resilience courage was just amazing. Even after Arnav assumed she would be horrified to recall the incidents to the police, she did not hesitate. She did not think once that she should be a wife even if she really wasnt one, she took a chance to change things for herself, with bravery and courage. She made herself something before returning back to the ones she left behind. Only strengthening her character more and more. Also she did propose him before he did, lol that is really something, but not unbelievable. Because she was always a girl with so so much tolerance, and power, only if Arnav had trusted her enough. There is so much power in forgiveness and she showed that, for Arnav.

Brilliant, just brilliant.

I still have to read the epilogue but couldnt keep my thoughts flowing after reading this, and so I wrote the comment before that.

I don't how this story is linked to the woman you say who never gave up, but I bow down to her. Women are an epitome of strength and will power if only they choose that path. And the women who chose to do just that, never give up, do deserve my respect and adoration for their courage.

J, I still don't believe I am reading these serious stories from you, I remember your kakda OS'es on chameli threads, and also your trolling posts with me...lol but really you do this beautifully too! You have split personalities, yaaras? Really, this is as beautiful as your other story Shattered.