Kuch Pal Zindagi Ke...UPDATED pg47 - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
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its an awesome story u guyz....jus 2 gud...n kripa...haaye allah kitni nakami hai....hu wud want 2 get married...n dat too ven dey r 19......seriously paagal hai.....bechari ki koi life hi nahi ho gi....cuz seriously...widout ne jokes....once u r married----u bid buhbye 2 ur life....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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next part kaun likh raha hai aur kab. Pls wait nahin hota jaldi karo
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Yar jaldi se faisla ker lo that whos gona write the next part per na sirf faisla karo balke part bhi likh do jaldi se 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey its so good to c tht two awsome writers r now cuming with combine venture... m sure story is gonna rock.... 👏 😉 😛
well kiran really nice part... 👏
n dear farah plz story ka 2nd part likho... 😳
kiran cum bak soon & its a request that plz cont u all ur other 4 stories too..... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 😆 yaar agaye ki story usse pata hai...waapis akar likhe gi na....lolzz... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajeev1

😆 😆 yaar agaye ki story usse pata hai...waapis akar likhe gi na....lolzz... 😳



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kiran please jaldi aao aur story aage continue karo...😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yhe lojee agla paet....

Episode 2!!!

Recap: Sujal and Krippa Intro....2nd pge per hai parh lo..heheheh!!!!!

Sujal Krippa ke kamray se nikal ker neechey hall main ata hai....wahan dekhte hain keh aik aurat hall ke side per bannay mandir main pooja ker rahi hai..Sujal uss ko dekh ker bhagwan jee ko door se namaste kerta hai...phir table per parray fruit bowl main se aik apple nikalta hai, aur saath parray huay newspaper ko uthata hai...aur apple khattay khattay dining table takk pohanch jata hai....before he can sit down on his seat, there comes a voice
Voice: Sujaallll.....
Now we see that the woman doing pooja has turned...she is a short,stubby woman draped in a blue sarri and with a pooja thali in her hand...she is heading towards the dining table
Sujal, before sitting, says
Sujal: marr gaya Sujall.....(to himself)
then he stands up, drops the paper and walks towards the woman
He bends down to take her blessings....
Sujal: Good morning Mumma....
So this is Veena Garewal,Sujal's mom...whom he, as usual, loves a lot...and Sujal is the apple of her eye...yani ke ankh ka seb...seb se yaad aya, Sujal is still eating his seb..hehehe
Veena holds his ears and khenchofies him upwards
Veena: kyun bhayi mumma ke bachay.....yeh kahan ki Good Morning hai?
Sujal: Mumma...ap ko pata nahi...subah ko morning kehtey hain....(innocently)
Veena: Sujall....tu aj phir pooja ke liye late ho gaya....
Sujal: Pooja....kaun Pooja?(shararti baatain)
Veena: Sujaaalll...
Sujal: acha sorry mumma.....actually raat ko kaam ker raha tha iss liye...sorry...lo kaan pakray (he holds his ears cutely)
Veena: acha koi baat nahi....betho nashta ker lo.....
Sujal and Veena go over to the dining table....and both sit down opposite sides...
Veena: to.....jaga diya apni ladli behen ko?
Sujal: Mumma....ainda se to yeh zimadari apki....mere qabu nahi ati woh...
Veena: arey teri hi to baatain manti hai thori bhut....
Sujal: waisay utha to diya tha main ne....pata nahi itni dair kyun le rahi hai?
Veena: tayar honnay main....tujhey nahi pata uss ki aadat?
Then both look at ecah other...smile and nod and then together shout out: KRIPPPPPPPPPPAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Krippa comes running out if her room....
Aik sandal haath main aur doosra paon main...doosre haath main char kitabain, aik bag aur lipstick....
She tries to wear her sandal in the way...and by the time she reaches the dining table, her books are in the bag, sandals on her feet and lipstick inside her bag
She is all puffed up with breath cuz of the running...she comes and kisses Veena lightly on er cheek, says GOOD MORNING MUMMA....and then goes and sits with Sujal
Sujal: tumharay do minute khatam ho gaye??? with skeptical look...
Krippa: woh...Bhai...actually...meri jooti ki heel toot gayi aur doosri dhoondhne main......
Sujal leans over and whispers
Sujal: phir bataon suspension letters?
Krippa shakes her head vigorously
Sujal: to phir jaldi jaldi nashta kero...mujhey dair ho rahi hai...
Veena: Krippa beta...bhut ghalat baat hai...jaldi utha kero....
Krippa: Mumma please....Bhai pehley hi bhut class le chukay hain....ab ap nahi?
Sujal and Veena laughs
Veena: yeh hai to tu kuch control main hai....warna tu to kisi ke qabu nahi attii....
Just then, some one comes from the kitchen......its a girl...she is clad in a purple sarri....and is holding a jug of juice....
She comes over and puts the jug down near Sujal...
Girl: Bhai...tumharay liye juice.....
Sujal: thanks...Anjali....
So this is Anjali Garewal...Sujal's sister....23 years old...she is not at all like Krippa...very practical and serious....has done MBA and is nowadays freee....helps with mom...Sujal is very close to her and concerned abt ehr as well...they are more like friends...
Anjali comes and sits with Veena...
Anjali: kaun kiss ke qabu nahi ata Mumma....
Krippa: Behna....Mumma meri baat ker rahi hain....keh rahi hain keh Sujal Bhaiya ke ilawa main kisi ke qabu nahi ati....(Krippa calls Anjali Behna for big sis)
Anjali laughs
Anjali: aik dumm theek keh rahi hain ap Mumma....
Krippa: ap bhi?????
Sujal: Krippa jaldi karo late ho raha hai....
Krippa: Bhai khannay to do....(stuffing her mouth with food)
Anjali: koi important kaam hai office main Bhai?
Sujal: nahi bass.....kuch kaam hain jo jaldi nibtanay hain...Krippa tum uth rahi ho ya main jaon?
Krippa:mujeyykhanetorovhookgagiay.......(mouth stuffed)
Veena: Krippaaaa...kitni baar kaha hai khatay waqt boltay nahi....
Sujal: main ja raha hoon...(gets up from his chair)
Krippa: main keh rahi thi...mujhey khannay to do bhook lag rahi hai....phir bhi ap ko itni jaldi hai...cchalo...
She gets up from her chair as well, taking a sandwich from the plate...
They both are near the door when Anjali comes running behind them...
Anjali: Bhai bhai bhai bhai bhai.....
Sujal turns around...
Sujal: haan Anjali?
Anjali: woh meri garri kharab hai...mere kuch kapray hain designer ke pass...shop se la nai sakti...attay huay please ley ana...
Sujal: theek hai Anjali...
Anjali: thanks....
Krippa: ab ap ko late nahi ho raha?(sarcastically)
Anjali: bhai aik aur baat...
Sujal: hmmmm....
Anjali: Papa ap ko bulla rahay hain...
Sujal: ufff.....unhain keh do keh main office ke liye nikal gaya hoon...
Anjali: woh kafi ghussay main hain......
Sujal and Anjali share a look...
Sujal: Krippa...yhe lo garri ki keys...tum ja ker betho main betho main ata hoon...
Krippa: jaldi ana...
She goes and sits in the car...while Sujal again goes inside the house and Anjali follows
Now in the hall is one more person...this is Chetan Garewal....Sujal's father...they both never got along due tospecific reasons that will be disclosed later....but Sujal only beared wit him for Veena....CG had handed over the whole business to Sujal and now was a retired person..ehehhe...
For now, he is in full anger...he is holding the newspaper in his hands and is looking angrily at Veena and saying something when Sujal and Anjali enter
CG: bhut barri ghalti ki Veena main ne jo business iss ke haath main thama diya.......tumhara beta kisi kaam ka nahi hai...
Veena is standing in a corner listening quietly
When Sujal enters....CG looks at him...
Sujal: kia baat hai....ap ne mujhey bulaya...mujhey office ke liye dair ho rahi hai....(looking at Veena who has tears in her eyes...)
CG: koi zarurat nahi hai tumhain office janay ki....ghar per betho aur jhag marro.....
Sujal look at him puzzled...
Sujal: lkein hua kia hai?
In reply, CG throws the paper at Sujal's face
SUjal is shocked and Anjali too...Veena is also shocked and tears flow down at last...
CG: tum ne aj ka newspaper parha hai...?
Sujal: nahi...kiun?
CG: itna barra article aya hai....London ki top companies main shumar hoti hai humari company...lekin tumne to iss ka naam mitti main milla dia...
Sujal: maine akhir aissa kia kar dia hai?
CG: Williams and Bros. Company ne jo contract ke liye tender fill kerwaya tha, uss main humari company ne tender kyun nahi bhara?Tum jantay ho woh kitni barri company hai...agar yhe contrat humaray haath ajata to jantay ho, humain millions ka faida hota....itni barri company...aur iss show ko sponsor ker ke humari company India main bhi recognized ho jati!!! (PS: Abhi takk jiss pagal ko samjah nahi ayi woh samajh ajye keh GAREWALS London main rehte hian, India main nahi...and Sujal's company was one that organzied events and shows...good money in hand)
CG: pichlay aik saal main humari company ne aissay 3 contracts loose kiye hain....Sujal sirf tumhari wajah se....iss company k asman ki bulandion takk pohanchanay ke bajaye tum to din badin iss ka standard giratay ja rahya ho....akhir kerte ho tum office main....BOLO!!!!
Sujal looks at him for two minutes
Then takes some steps towards him until the both are face to face
Sujal: Dad....agar apko waqai main lagta hai keh mujhey business nahi ata to ap iss company ka hold mere se le lein...kyunki jab main kaam kerta hoon to poori mehnat ke saath kerta hoon....aur koi bhi mujhey mere profession ke naam per beyizzat kere ya mujhey business sikhanay ki koshish kere...mujhey yeh har giz pasand nahi..khawah woh ap hi kiun na hon..
Sujal: mujhey samajh nahi ati Dad..keh itnay saal business kerne ke bawajood ap business tactics kyun nahi samajh patay? yeh contract jiss ko bhi milay ga woh croron ke faiday ke bajaye bhut barra nuksan uthaye ga...woh company aissay shows hold ker rahi hai jiss main woh celebrities hain jinhain public bilkul pasand nahi kerti....woh Indian hain, yahan London main Indian population bhi kafi hai..lekin un celebrities ko yahan pansad nahi kiya jata...hum public se updated rehet hain...show aissay hi hold nahi kiye jattay Dad....poora survery karwana parta hai....woh contract hai 50 million ka...jabke iss contract ki nakami se 100 million takk ka nuksan ho sakta hai.....aur iss ki responsibilty Williams and Bros. Company nahi le rahi...iss sab ki wajah se main ne yeh contract nahi liya...muje jo sahi laga main ne kia....aggay ap sahi samjhain ya bura....mujhe farq nahi parta...

he steps behind and then goes out of the hall....CG is left stunned as he had not considered these facts before...but he is angry at Sujal's behavious
CG: dekha Veena...dekh liya apne bete ko....baat takk kerne ki tameez nahi hai....besharam...
He goes to his room in anger while Veena starts crying...Anjali goes and consoles her
Veena: kyun...kyun hamesha yeh koi na koi mauqa dhoondhtay hain Sujal ko dantnay ka......kyun uss ke kaam ko appreciate nahi kerte...phir hazaron tannay sunatay hain..tumhara beta aissa hai,waisa hai...kya woh in ka beta nahi??????
Anjali: bass Mumma...ap roye matt...ap roti hain to pata hai na Bhai ko kitna burra lagta hai...bass ap araam kerein....Papa ki aadat hai...ap cchalain mere saath
She takes Veena to sit down an gives her a glas of water...

Meanwhile...Krippa garri main wait ker ker ke sarr jati hai...Sujal ghussay main ata hai aur garri mein bethta hai aur garri chalanay lagta hai ghussay main....
Krippa: kia baat hai Bhai...ghussay main ho?
Sujal: kuch nahi.....
Krippa: kuch to hai ap aissya to...
SUjal: KRIppppaaaa....
Krippa: ok sorry...(she stays quiet)
After some time
SUjal: tumhara college agaya...
Krippa: ok bye...
She gets out of the car....Sujal realizes he was bilawaja angry on her
SUjal: Krippa....
Krippa: jee bhai...
Sujal: i am sorry...
Krippa: kpoi baat nahi Bhai...its ok...hota hai...(all smiles again)
Sujal: ach chal theek hai...enjoy...best of luck for ur test...
Krippa: i really need that/....Bye...
Sujal: Bye..
He takes off with the car and Krippa rushes 2wards her friends...

Episode ends.

Weelll...hoped u likeed it........commentofy.....bubye!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 ok ok kiran....for a change me commenting 😆 ok now for some serious commenting...........gr888 part 👏 👏 👏 juzz rocking in every sense....hats off 👏 👏 👏 needless to say that u rock when it cums to ffs 😃....excellent part.....mindblowing...mindbalsting truely tremendous 👏 👏 👏 👏 and yeah cont sooon 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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tahnks surbhi...lub u muaaha 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
kiran dear tooooooo gooddddddddddd.......me so happy that you continued yaar....me liked sujal ,anjali , kripa & veena.. they are all toooo sweettttt.. aur sabse BEST tho humara hero sujal hain..... 👍🏼 lekin us chetan garewal ne saara mazza kirkhira kar diya.. uski tho main.......... 😡 i totally loved the way sujal ne chetan ko jawaab diya......chetan ki tho bisti ho gayi... 😆 achcha hua... 😆 achcha chal ab jaldi se continue karna & even introduce kashish soon me waiting for her entry......... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago

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