Kuch Pal Zindagi Ke...UPDATED pg47 - Page 6

kiran dear i'am seriously started loving this story to the maximum extent...i love the twists & turns you give in your story..they are just awesome.. they are totally wonderful...oh..i love your story... they are simply superb...great...very damn nice & intresting...... 👏
akshat aur sujal dost..akshat yahaan bhi aa gaya... woh hamesha kya sujal ke ghar main hi rehtha hain.. 😆 tho ab mujhe patah chala why sujal hates cg...cg has one more wife & najayaz beta woh bhi swayam..yuckkkkkk..yikesssss.....
🤢 ab agla part India mein..yess..jaldi se sab ko India pohancha do....aur haan kashish ki entry bhi jaldi se karwa do.... 😉
please continue soon..me will be waiting... 😃

hehehe...thanks for commenting...sur...yaar..bass dkeh lo CG hai hi aissa....aur haan......kashish ajayegi wait ekro... 😆

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ehehehe najayaz rishta...wah jee CG to baar tharki nikla hehehehehe.....dash kisam ka insaan hai lolz....muje to veen ki samaj nahi ati....pti parmeshwar bana rakha hai...fazul insaan hehehe..kth mein bhi aur tumhari kahani mein bhi...but i looooooooove akshat heheheeh kth mein bhi aur tumhari kahani mein bhi heheheehehe 😳 .....fully faltoo....agaye likhioye..heroine ka intezar rahega 😛

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this is for sujal&u

as far as cg is concerned this is 4 him

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hey kiran very very nice part.... 👏
god ye CG kabhi nahi sudherega.... 😃
do cont soon.... 😊

hehehe...CG agar sudhar jata farah...meri kahani main bhi aur kth mein bhi to maza kahan se ata..sach main tharki hai 😆

kinannnnnnnnnn buhat acha part hai ............ 👏 welldone gud zabardasht wah ji wah exellent shabash amazin aur buhat kuch luv ya anum

hehehe...so heres next part...

Episode 4...

Hehehe...i was free...to socha update ker deti hoon....so heres the next part...

Ok so recap: Akshat intro....India jannay ki baatain...aur CG aur Sujal ka phadda....aur Cg ki doosri family...Rewa n Swayem Garewalll....

Sujal: sach hi to keh raha hoon...kaisay bhulla doon main....kaisya bhulla doon keh woh aurat aj bhi humaray ghar main rehti hai.....woh insan ab bhi apka beta hai...kaisya bhulaon main REWA aur SWAYEM GAREWAL ko......??????
Dhamakayyy.......
CG comes forward and raises his hand to slap Sujal...but stops midway...Sujal raises his eyebrows and looks at him, then at his raised hand...then again at him
Sujal: gives a side smile.....Ruk kyun gaye Dad....bass ab to yehi baqi rhe gaya hai...warna to harr nainsafi ker chukay hain ap mere saath...
He gives a hard look to Cg and leaves
CG: (to himself) pata nahi kia samajhta hai apne apko....jitna tum mere bete ho uta hi Swayem hai...afsos ke tum sach jante nahi...afsos....(shakes his head)

Bhut ho gaya ghussa aur badtamizi...ab kuch aur....

Krippa shower le ker bahir nikalti hai....clad in white caperies and a sky blue T-shirt....
She goes out of her room to look for Sujal...intending to talk to him...
She comes in his room.....banging open the door....
Krippa walks in slowly...
She sees that Sujal is sitting on the sofa...doing some work on his laptop...
She comes and stands behind him.....and is baout to say something
Sujal doesnt look back...
Sujal: kia baat hai Krippa?
Krippa is surprised
Krippa: apko kaisay pata main ayi hun?
She comes and sits with him...Sujal looks at her and smiles
Sujal: iss ghar mai aik tum hi to ho jo darwaza zorr se khol ker paon pathak pathak ke kamray main ati ho....
Krippa: bhaaai.....hits him playfully on his arm....
Sujal smiles
Sujal: kia baat hai..kuch kaam tha....paisay chahiye?
Krippa: nahi.....apko kiss ne kaha mujhey....paisay chahiye...
Sujal: often tumhari aik hi baat hoti hai jab tum mere kamray main ati ho....
Krippa: BHaaiii...apko lagta hai mein sirf paisaon ke peechey bhagti hoon (acts fake)..main.....apne aissa socha bhi kaisay...mein itni selfish hoon...
Sujal: ziada dramay na karo mere saath....
Krippa: dramay...dekha...merii feelings ki to apko fikar hi nahi hai.....
Sujal smiles
Sujal: ab bass bhi karo...
Krippa: wohi to kehne ayi hoon Bhai...bass kar do ab.....woh kabhi nahi sunnay gi humari baat...(gtes serious)
Sujal: agar tum Dad ki baat ker rahi ho to rehne do...
Krippa: kia rehne doon Bhai...hamesha woh iss tarah apni baat manwa lete hain...bass iss baar hum nahi mannay gay un ki baat..nahi jayengay India...
Sujal: main India jannay ke liye tayar hoon...
Krippa: KiA??? lekin ap to...
Sujal: haan khilaaf tha iss ke lekin aik baar phir Mumma ke liye manana parra....
Krippa: achaa...chalo phir main bhi tayar hoon...
Sujal looks at her, amused
Sujal: achaaa...matlab keh tumhara faisla mere faislay ke saath badal jata hai...
Krippa: hmmmm......ap hi to ho mere sab se pyaare bhai bhi aur dost bhi.........mere liye apse ziada to koi important nahi.....
Sujal is touched by her love...
He puts an arm around her and kisses her forehead
Sujal: aur mere liye bhi meri behen se ziada koi important nahi....
Krippa hugs him...awww...cute...
Just then Anjali enters with a tray.....of tea...
Anjali: hmmm.......barra pyaar agaya aj apko apni behen per...kyun Bhai?
She says, smiling....and puts the tray on the tabel...
Then she comes and sits on Sujal's other side...
Krippa: Di...ap kyun jealous hor ahi ho?
Anjali: jealous? bilkul nahi.,..mujhey to acha lagta hai tum loogon ko aissay dekh ker....
Krippa: now dun try to hide..i know u r jealous
Sujal smiels
Sujal: BASSS....larna band kero....mere liye tum donon bhutt important ho...
He puts his other arm around Anjali..and both hug SUJAL...

AWWWW...cute behen bhai...chalo agla part baad main..gotta rush...comment....bubye

kiran dear a very nice part... 👏 i like the rishtha between sujal ,anjali & kripa....shooooooooo sweetttttttttttttt......shoooooooo niceeeeeeeeeeeeee..........shoooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeee...... 😳 cg kehtha hain sujal sach nahi jaantha..hmm..yeh kiss sachchayi ki baat kar raha hain..me confused... 😕
ab please jaldi continue karna...as the part was very damn small.... 😊

hehehe..i know sur it was a small part...kuch der pehle hi likha tha update kerne se 😆 ...thanks for commenting... 😆 ...yup...i lurve this relationship too.....