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Niki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#961

Woah... Finally I read it..!
OH... Mind Blowing update Avantika Di!!!!!
Oh I am so excited to read the next part now, I wonder what will be Ayesha's answer to the Hot headed cop?
Please update soon and Thank you so much for the PM 😊😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#962

Originally posted by: sips_crazy
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By tonight.. For sure! 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

#963

Originally posted by: _Mohabbatgirl_

By tonight.. For sure! 😉

waiting 😳

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#964

Originally posted by: sips_crazy
waiting 😳

Errrmm.. My tonight, maybe.. *ducks* 😉 😆

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#965

NOTE:

1. For haters/bashers/stalkers.. First n foremost let me clear out one thing..

Yes, I have said a few things which people have misconstrued and presented as bashing!
I'm not answerable to you guys; but to my loyal readers and friends on the forum..
And hence this post..

Anti-Ariya/bashing involves ridiculing the character of the actress who played it and poking fun of the couple's chemistry.. And I believe, I haven't done either of it, nor have any of the ones who've been at the receiving end of some very lovely words..

I've time and again asked readers to leave their FEEDBACK and not Praises.. And hence if you had a problem with something related to this particular work of mine, I expected you guys to have the courage to say it on my face.. and not talk about it behind my back!

The Lady in Red was NEVER a Ariya story..

I had chosen Sana because back then, we did not have any other lead and I truly felt Sana was graceful enough to be my Rosanna.. It is Sana who I changed, not Riya..

So this does not qualify as 'Ariya bashing!'

But then again. U wouldn't be yourself if you understood the difference between reel and real...

Secondly, I changed Rosy to Drashti because I wanted to.. (Not Geet or Madhubala).

As the creator of Rosy, I bear the right to alter her as I wish, I suppose.. And if my loyal readers have accepted the fact and understood my POV, all's well for me..

It's the character that matters and well, I wasn't convinced that the earlier actress I'd chosen could do justice to what I have in mind for the future track.. (In my head, of course!)

Also, I'm not a 10 year old who can be brainwashed or influenced into doing certain things.. By God's grace, I have a head on top which functions well.

But by the way, I never knew my baby had soo many silent admirers (Soo overwhelmed!!)

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Regular readers, I apologize for the above nuisance.. But it was necessary to let a few friends of ours know, that I wouldn't take lightly to my work being ridiculed..

You mess with me and a few dear friends of mine, which though not pardonable yet we've stayed mum..
But you do the same to any of my babies, and you'll be served with Sweet Poison, as always.. 😈

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@ Everyone else, thank you for having read, liked and commented on the previous part..

I really appreciate it, guys.. I'm a bit pressed for time and am skipping the thank-you's this time.. But I have read and will cherish every single comment of yours..

And I apologize again for the above bits.. Please skip if you want to.. Those aren't for you..

As always, stay tuned for more.. Read and leave behind your HONEST reviews.. 😊

Thank you..

Avantika/Avni/B2, RMJ-1

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#966

Warning: Long update and some of you may want to keep tissues handy.. Errm.. Maybe not! I did.. 😉

And this one is a slow paced one.. Not much progress.. But well, I wouldn't say that.. 😉

Please read the note above before you begin..

Chapter 17-A..

"Secrecy involves a tension which, at the moment of revelation, finds its release.."

- Georg Simmel

ETF Headquarters, Mumbai

Ayesha knocked on the slightly ajar door twice and upon recieving no response walked in.. She saw him standing at the window, overlooking rains lashing at the windowpanes and called out to him, "Sir, aapne bulaya?"

Sameer didn't turn back, "Baitho.. Ayesha.."

She sensed the informal tone in his voice and knew he wasn't her senior at the moment.. But, he sounded tensed. And maybe a bit disappointed as well.. She wondered what had happened..

He spun around slowly and handed a file to her, "It's time you braced yourself for some questions.."

Ayesha looked at him with confused eyes when he pointed towards something on a sheet of paper.. Her eyes widened in response and she looked up at him..

Her name was mentioned as the sixth casualty in the fires that had gutted down the Gupte's home.. Sameer had deliberately removed her name from the copies being circulated amongst the other team members..

She put the file away and stood up.. She needed to tell him all about it, before he turned judgemental and began assuming things..

But here's where she was mistaken..
For, Sameer Rathore wasn't a man who judged people, ever..

Practicality and a clear reasoning were his strengths and which is why he headed one of the most formidable forces in the country..

Sameer walked back to his desk and pulled his chair, "Jaanta hoon.. Aur koi sawaal karunga bhi nahi.. But being the Chief and in-charge of the case, I will have to ask a few questions.."

Ayesha looked away when his eyes fastened onto hers and he spoke on, "And as your wellwisher and friend, I think it would be better if you do not wait for me or anyone else to question you.."

She understood what he meant but before she could reason out her silence, Shree knocked on the door.. "Sir, everyone's in.. We're waiting for you two.."

She saw him transform into the Chief as he stepped ahead, holding out the door for her, "Chalein Ayesha.."

She walked out followed by the two men preparing herself to face Arjun; because if ACP Arjun was sly and ruthless, her friend, Arjun was hurt and angry..

Maybe Ro was right.. Even Rathore Sir won't be able to save me from his wrath.. She sighed and stepped in..

Andy's Beach Shack, Arpora, Goa..

The salty yet chilly breeze at the sea-side made her senses tingle and she gulped another spoonful of the hot soup unaware of the fact that a pair of chocolate brown eyes had been keenly observing her ever since she had entered the restaurant..
Or maybe she was pretending to.. One would never know..

Mario Pereira was a man of his words and hence, the bond papers lay on the table between them, ready for the deal to be clinched..
His eyes were fixed on the lady's blank face, devoid of any emotion and he wondered what it was about the her that had him thinking all night..

He hadn't slept a wink, rewinding to the day he had seen her perform on stage for the first time..
She had looked like a sultry seductress that night and he wondered if that was it.. Surely not..

He had been with a lot of bold, beautiful and influential women before, but there was something about her..
Something very different, dangerous and appealing..

She possesed a natural aura of mystery to her.. He had felt it last night as well..
And it had nothing to do with her physical appearance..

She was dressed in a seemingly ordinary blue churidar with her hair tied up in a loose braid at the moment.. And yet, her expressionless face, the lilt in her eyes and her beguiling smile seemed to define who she was..

He snapped out of his thoughts and looked away when a waiter brought in desert.. She smiled and refused it, "I don't like sweets.."

Mario asked him to take it away and refilled her glass of wine, "So.. Here's your contract.."

Rosy took it and flipped through the pages, "Any loopholes?"
She looked up when he didn't answer and found him eyeing her with a smirk on his lips..

He watched her cock a brow and shook his head, "None.. You may read it for yourself.."

She smiled one of her flirtatious smiles and picked up the pen.. A few minutes later, she had signed it and handed it over to him, retaining a copy of the same..

She saw him hesitate a bit before he handed it to one of his employees and stopped the man, "Anything wrong, Mr. Pereira?"

He motioned the man to leave and turned to her, "Not really.. I was just wondering about the NGO you work for.. Don't you want to quit it now that you have a better offer on hand?"

She pressed her lips together and nodded, "No! I won't.. Like I've said before, it isn't about the money.."

She saw his expressions turn grave and blinked, "Nor am I attached to it emotionally..
It's simple.. I don't back out once I commit to something and make sure that I follow it to the end.. It's about keeping your word.."

Karan munched on a carrot in the hotel kitchen and hit himself with another, "Arre waah, meri lady Salman Khan.. Ek baar jo maine commitment kar di, toh main apni bhi nahi sunti.. Lage raho!"

Rosy bit the corner of her lip making a mental note to smack him later for the untimely comic intrusion and was about to speak up, when she heard Karan's muffled voice through the earpiece, "Suno.. Meet me at The Woodhouse Pub in an hour.. Got some breaking news for you.."

She pretended to cough a little and then turned to Mario, "So.. When do I have to begin?"

Pereira shrugged his shoulders, "We don't have anything lined up as of now, atleast for a few days.. But I've got a few foreign delegates coming in a week's time.. Important.. Influential men with power.. And I am throwing a party to welcome them.."

Rosy listened attentively and then crooked a brow, "So, you want me to sing at the party?"

Mario blinked and entwined his hands on the table, "No.. But, will you go with me?"

Though taken aback at his sudden proposal, she didn't let it show and pretended to be surprised, "Wait a minute.. So you're asking me to be your date for the party, is it?"

He chuckled and fastened his gaze on hers, "Maybe I am.."

Rosy's lips sported a barely there smile and her eyes glistened with an unknown emotion as she whispered huskily, "Be sure of what you ask of me, Mr. Pereira.."

His lips curled up into a sly smile, "I am.."

She chuckled, "Okay then.."

Though he pretended to be indifferent, feigning a playful look on his otherwise stern face, he couldn't help but be attracted towards the woman in front of him..

She seemed to be having a normal conversation with him at the outset, but Pereira hadn't missed the slight teasing tone in her voice and the way her eyes widened and glistened when she spoke..
The familiar fuzzy feeling returned and he had to struggled to shrug it away.. It hadn't happened before and he wondered what it was all about..

Just then his cell phone vibrated on the table and he snapped out of his thoughts.. He glanced at the name flashing on the screen and Rosy saw his expressions change.. Gone was the flirtatious man he was a minute ago..

He looked like he meant business now and just when she was expecting him to excuse himself to answer the ringing phone, he put it away and turned to her instead..

He looked for something in his jacket pocket and then held out a small velvet-coated box for her to take..

Rosy alternated her gaze between him and his outstretched hand and straightened up, "What is it?"

She saw a shift of emotions on his face yet again when he smiled and motioned her to take it, "A gift for the lady.."

Rosy raised a brow, "A gift? But why?"

He shook his head, "To a new beginning.."

She smiled and nodded, "How can you be so sure of it? And besides, I don't take gifts from people I hardly know.."

Mario pretended to be offended, "Aah! Don't say that.. You know me, now.. And besides, I am sure of it.." He paused, "Always am.."

Rosy let out a soft sigh, "Okay.. But I still cannot take it, Mr. Pereira.. I'm sorry.."

He placed it on the table and looked up, "I've heard diamonds are a lady's best friends.. Aren't yours?"

His words took her down the memory lanes when someone had asked her a similar question..

*Flashback*

"I know.. Lekin kabhi toh normal ladkiyon ki tarah kuch kar liya kar, yaar..
Waise, they say diamonds are a woman's best friends..
But main thehra ek mamuli policewala.. I can only gift you this. Agar diamonds chahiye toh kissi ameerzaade se dosti kar lena.."

She had smiled and snatched away the red pouch from him.. Her eyes twinkled at the sight of a pair of silver anklets and she quickly bent down to put one around her ankle..

She tapped her foot on the floor and turned to him, "Mele se laaye? Theek hi hai.. But please, dobara yeh typical ladkiyon wale gifts mat lana.."

Arjun chuckled at her diplomacy and she looked back over her shoulder,
"Aur haan.. Mujhe dosti karne ke liye diamonds ki zaroorat nahi hai..
Kyunki mere paas already ek diamond hai, Mr. A.. Mera best friend khud kissi diamond se kam thodi hai.."

He raised a brow and threw a blade of grass at her, "Eeew.. Bohot cheesy tha, Miss A.."

She chuckled and threw him the empty pouch, "I know.. Bilkul tumhare iss gift ki tarah.."

*Flashback ends*

A smile curled at the corner of her lips but she managed to restrain just in time.. Her foot tapped on the floor on its own and she felt the chiming cold metal against her skin..

She saw Pereira eyeing her from the corner of her eye and quickly dismissed those bittersweet memories away.. Now, wasn't the time for it..

Rosy twirled a strand of stray hair around her finger, "No.. Not mine.."
She pressed her lips together and smiled, "They don't mean anything to me, Mr. Pereira.."

Mario, though taken aback by her refusal decided to mask it for the time-being.. No woman had ever refused him.. And yet, this one was different..

Rosy looked at her wristwatch, "It's getting late.. Anything else?"

Pereira shook his head and placed the box back where it came from, "No.. I think we're good to go.."

She held out her hand to greet him, "Okay then.. Nice meeting you.."

He looked up at the formal gesture and offered his hand, "The pleasure's all mine, lady..
By the way, you are coming to the party, aren't you?"

Rosy picked up her clutch and fixed her dupatta, "Do I have a choice?"

He grinned widely and walked her to the car park, "Most definitely.. You do.."

She flagged a cab and got in, waving at him, "Maybe I don't.. See you soon.."

He watched on as the cab zoomed away with his eyes fixed on the busy street..
His cell phone buzzed yet again and he sprinted towards the car park.. Something else needed his attention at the moment..

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Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 12 years ago

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#967

Chapter 17-B

Ayesha sat in her chair and picked up a file to keep her occupied until the briefing began.. Arjun held the glass of hot tea close to his lips and stared at her, sensing her discomfort..

Rathore walked in, halted for a moment to look at them and then walked up to the facts board..
He turned to the rest of the team and let his fingers brush his moustache when he spoke,
"So Team.. Now that you all are familiar with the details, let's come to the point..
We need to start from scratch.. Uss din exactly kya hua tha? Kaise hua tha?"

Shree nods and speaks up, "Aas pados ke logon se pata chala hai ki the family was celebrating something.." His voice trailed off and he looked at Ayesha..

She felt everyone's gaze upon hers but it was Arjun's piercing one that made her look away as she whispered, "Mere parents ki wedding anniversary.."

Arjun inhaled sharply and turned to Rathore, "Aur phir achanak se SP Gupte ke ghar mein aag lag gayi.. Aur.."

He pushed the file away and stood up turning away from the team, "Sab bakwaas hai yeh report.. Phenk do isse.."

Sameer exchanged a knowing look with Ayesha before he walked up to Arjun, "Matlab kya tumhara?"

Arjun let out a mock chuckle and turned around, leaning over the table, "Humare investigation ke do pillars hote hain, Rathore..
Pehla saboot aur doosra.. Gavaah.. Aksar yeh dono kadiyaan ek doosre ko jodti hain.."

Liza was thoroughly confused, first with the cold glares being exchanged around her and now with Arjun's trademark riddles, "Toh Sir, aapko lagta hai ki iss case mein koi eye-witness tha?"

Ayesha clenched her eyes shut and felt Sameer stand next to her.. She waited on with bated breath for Arjun to speak and he didn't disappoint her..

He looked back over his shoulder, "Haan.. Prime eye-witness ho humein ek first hand account de sakti hai.."

Rathore looked at Ayesha and their eyes met.. He sensed her disappointment and hurt, yet there was little he could do to stop Arjun.. And besides, he didn't want to..
He looked away, "Saaf saaf bolo Rawte.."

Arjun clenched his jaw and spun around banging his palms on the table right in front of Ayesha and spat out thorugh gritted teeth, "Saaf saaf hi keh raha hoon, Rathore.. Who better to fill us in with the details, but the only survivor? Am I right, Miss Ayesha Gupte?"

All eyes turned to her and hers were fixed on Arjun's..

Both eyeing each other with a blend of hurt bordering on hatred..

Ayesha snapped out and glared back at him with an equal fervor.. Everyone sat still, digesting the piece of disturbing information and watched their senior cops engage in a visual duel..

Rathore, however knew better and also realised what was expected of him at the moment.. He placed a palm on the back of Ayesha's chair and she looked away reluctantly.

Sameer pulled a chair next to her and cleared his throat, alerting everyone.. "Okay.. everyone.. Back to work!"

Arjun shrugged his shoulders in annoyance and slumped in his chair averting her hurtful gaze.. He knew he had hurt her by bringing it up in front of everyone.. But he had waited enough.. And if the case demanded it, he wasn't going to let her off the hook..

Ayesha saw Sameer nudge her with a slight nod of his head and stood up, "Kya jaan na chaahte hain aap sab? Yahi ki main uss waqt wahan thi ya nahi?"

She looked around and saw everyone waiting for her to admit it.. She exhaled a deep breath, "I was there! Thi main wahan.."

Arjun was the first one to react and he reacted just as Sameer and Ayesha had expected him to..

He pushed away his chair, stood up and turned around to face the wall, not trusting himself anymore.. They heard a silent whisper and looked in his direction.. "You were there?"

Ayesha looked at his back and fought back her tears, "Yes.."

She could see him tremble with rage and even heard the chattering of his teeth..
She had always known he would react violently when the truth was revealed to him.. And she was prepared to face him and his volley of questions with a brave front, because she knew if she faltered even one bit, he would catch it.. And then, it would be over..

She couldn't give away Rosy's secret.. It wasn't hers to give it away since she was as clueless as he was..

He tilted his head to stare at her and clenched his eyes shut.. She was there? She witnessed everything.. She saw them die.. Kaka-Kaki, Baba and.. Ro..

His Miss A's clinking laughter fell on his ears and he punched his fist into the wall shocking the others..

Rathore stood up and held his arm, "Rawte, control yourself.. Aur wahan chalkar baitho.."

He looked at Ayesha and gave her a reassuring nod asking her to go on..
She narrated the entire day's events as and how it had transpired..

Ayesha had to return to Mumbai for an emergency meeting with her team, shedding her undercover image for a day.. Luckily, it was her parent's anniversary and she wanted to surprise them..

After the meeting was done with, she booked a pre-paid cab and headed off towards Khopoli..
While travelling, she decided to check her secret e-mail and social networking accounts..

What she saw, stunned her.. She had hundreds of unread messages, all from a certain 'Lady in Red..'

Ayesha knew something had gone wrong and upon reading the latest ones, she had literally held the cab driver at gunpoint and made him zoom the car through the heavy traffic..

She reached the town and surprisingly the neighbourhood was deserted.. She remembered Ro had mentioned about a 'Jatra'/ fun fair in the neighbouring village and her heart skipped a beat.. Things were definitely not right..

She sprinted towards the deserted alleys and reached home only to be kicked in the guts.. Her house was on fire..

Though the fires hadn't spread much, the warmth and smoke around her numbed her senses.. Finally, getting a grip over herself, she had entered the blazing fires without any further thought and she happened to witness a blood curdling scene..

Her parent's charred bodies and her uncle's lifeless form hanging from the ceiling..

She fell on her knees since the shock failed to register.. Tears dripping down her eyes furiously, she let out a loud wail, attempting to relieve the jabbing pain within her..

And then she stopped.. Ro's messages rang loud and clear in her head and she stood up with shaky feet.. She's here.. She was supposed to be here!

Fearing the worst and praying for a miracle, Ayesha ran through the engulfing flames to look for a sign of her little sister..
She found her huddled in a corner of the kitchen, shaking uncontrollably with her eyes fixed on the floor..

She had gathered her in her arms and fled the house, never looking back once, leaving behind a part of her soul.. She needed to save the living, the dead were gone!

Ayesha had narrated the entire incident, word by word, offering them nothing but the truth.. That moment, the vulnerable part of her wanted to reveal about Ro being alive but a re-thought and she realised there was a lot at stake..

And hence, as much as it hurt her, she lied to them, yet again..

Arjun's head snapped up and he realised he had moisture gathered around his eyes.. He stood up and walked to her..

Ayesha stood still, reliving the incident.. It didn't matter that 3 years had passed ever since.. Each time she relived memories of the horrific night, her senses froze..

It had always been Roshni who somehow appeared by her side, every single time, soothing her troubled heart with her comforting words and soothing caresses..

But being the brave girl, she was and was expected to be, she hadn't cried.. She had always held back her own grief, sometimes for the sake of her mission and later, she could't let it out even when she wanted to.. For, Ro's loss was way bigger than hers and Ayesha needed to be her strength to help her sail through..

But it hurt just as bad.. Every single time..

Sameer and the rest of the team were numbed watching their brave, confident officer crumble right in front of their eyes..
Liza took a step forward to reach Ayesha and so did Sameer..

But the unexpected happened..

Ayesha felt a rough palm on her shoulder and spun around resting her head on his shoulder..

Arjun sniffed and held her arm, cradling her head with the other..

This was it.. A loved one's touch broke her resolve and she released herself from tightly gripping shackles of self-restraint.. And besides, she knew him too well to know that this was the only apology she would ever get from her best friend..

She closed her eyes and let her unshed tears flow, her pent up pain had finally found an outlet..

Her muffled sobs reached his ears and he felt her struggling to call out to him..

Arjun closed his eyes slowly and rested his head on hers, patting her hair softly,
"Shh.. I'm here, Sha.."

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Rosy-Karan talk and plot out Plan 1..

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Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 12 years ago

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#968

Res.

phew...

Wow is all I can say for now, will be back for a longwala comment.😉

*Edited*

Okay so here I am behna, day late and dollar short as usual.😆

First of all, this was one of your best SYS session by far, one more to go.😉

I have to be honest with you here, when you told me you were making Dhrasti your Rosy, I jumped for joy, yep I am her panka for sure.😉

Anyway to the update.

Anything I say will not be a complimentary enough for this mindblowing update B2, I was stunned and speech less again at the dynamics of all the relationships and how Rosy handles herself with Mario.

Let's start with Sameer Rathore, god I am beginning to fall for him all over again in your story. He is not only a great leader but a great friend too. Not once does he cross the limit in either of his roles. He is chief when he needs to be and puts everything aside for his duty, yet he doesn't ignore the fact that his friends also need for him to be there as a friend as well as a boss. Love how you have maintained the balance between both of his roles. Can't wait to read more on this.

Ayesha...I fell in love with your Ayesha from the very first update, and the more you reveal of her and what she has done for her little sister the more I admire her. She has put everything aside for Rosy and her secret. She is hurting from inside because one of her best friend hates her yet she continues to guard the biggest secret and honor the promise she made to Rosy.

Any other person would have broke down completely after reliving the horror that killed almost all of her family, but not our lady dabang, she moved past the dead to save the one who was alive and broken. I couldn't imagine what she must have felt. I am so glad that Arjun was the one who consoled her when she finally revealed what had happened that day. They both needed this.

Yes I know it's not over yet, but glad that they are there for each other.

Arjun's reaction was so easy to picture, the rage and pain that he felt was described so well by you that it was easy to imagine that scene in the conference room when he punched the wall. If he is hurt now I am afraid to see his reaction when he learns that Rosy is not dead. He is going to break completely when he finds out everything. (P.S. I am most definitely scared about his reaction)

Awe...that little flash back scene was so sweet and my dear Watson cap was twitching like crazy. 😛 First gift, silver payals, and mind you, I didn't miss the fact that she still cherishes that first gift, just that little memory conveyed so much of their past relationship.

Now last but not the least, my favorite person in this whole story, Rosy. I am bit partial to her more than any of your other characters, even Tiger. 😃

I am in completely awe of the way she handles Mario. Not once did she falter in the role she played nor was she intimidated by the ruthless man.

Any other woman would have been scared witless of someone like Mario, but our Rosy doesn't hesitate to keep him at arm's length and at the same time keep him interested in her too.

I wonder if she would be forced to accept that gift from him just to keep her cover but I am glad she stayed true to her real character and declined the gift. She is brave and courageous for sure.

Lol...loved the comic relief by Karan, that was so very well done, and I agreed with is take, a true lady dabang in a silk gown.😛

Hmm...So Rosy will be Mario's date for a very important party..sounds interesting, can't wait to read more on that. Please update soon behna.

I know I don't have to say it but this was a 10/10 on update, full of emotions and some verbal actions with power packed dialogues. Loved it to bits, from the very first line to the last. Wished it was longer.

Phew...hope I didn't leave anything out.👏 Once again brilliant and fantastic work behna, just love the way you going with this story.

P.S. Keeping all the clues to myself this time.😉

P.S.S Read the update again before commenting.😛

Love your B1, RMJ-2😃

Edited by ll-Shilpa-ll - 12 years ago

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#969

Yay!! ve edited Part B after u read it.. 😛 Oopsie..

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#970

Unres

Hawww ... was that for me 😳😳😳😳😳😳... I swear... I didn't mean to bash anyone... neither Drashti, nor Sana ... 😳😳😳😳😳 ... I was just relating the characters that I have seen... I like ur choice 😳😳😳😳

Sorry if my comment was hurting ... 🤗

For the update... beautiful...👏👏

Ayesha was mentioned as 6th Casualty 😲😲😲 ... And Sameer knew it ... 😲😲😲

Mario - Rosy scene was brilliant ... ab aayega mazaa khel ka... 👍🏼

So Arjun knew that Ayesha was there too ... that is why he directly pointed at her...

Poor Ayesha... felt sad for her...

But Arjun consoling her was brilliantly portrayed ... 🤗 🤗

Now i'm feared what will happen when Arjun gets to know that Ayesha was successful in saving Rosy ...

waiting for the next part 😊

Edited by bgargate - 12 years ago