Arjun FF: The Lady in Red.. Thread 2. Link added.. - Page 17

what a lovely triller u have written..!!

Another mind blowing part Avantika.

I am so intrigued by this story and impatient to know what will happen next.

Rosy is smart, beautiful and knows how to think on her feet in any given situation. Loved the way she stayed alert at every point and adjusted according to the situation. And Karan is her perfect partner, they are so in sync with each other that it all works well for them.

I want to know more about the murder of the married couple and how they are connected to Arjuna and Ayesha's home town it seems.

Looking forward to more as always. Thanks for the PM. Please do update soon.

Awesome update! Ooh, I can't wait to read more! This is getting more interesting as each chapter appears. :) Thanks for the update!

superb update
loveing this rosy mre nd mre in each update
karan is so cute...loved how they fough like a couple
etf scenes are anazing
want to read more
thanx 4 the pm
continue soon

My dear Avantika,

You are spoiling me, my dear girl, with the most enigmatic and fascinating character ever to grace the pages of an Arjun FF. Your Rosanna is an enduring and ever improving delight.

If she had to be played on screen, it would have to be by a resurrected Lauren Bacall (You would be too young to even know who she was, but you can google her, and perhaps even see a couple of her films with the legendary Humphrey Bogart, whom she married when she was just over 19 and he was 45. It was his third marriage, but they were spectacularly happy together for 12 years till he died of throat cancer). No one else could project Rosanna's self-assured sensuality, the boundless appetite for risk that leaves Karan gasping, the quickwittedness, and the true blue professionalism, half as well.

She runs rings around Karan, and she would do the same with practically every other male member of your cast. Bar perhaps only one, and there too, she would match him stride for stride, she would never lag behind. Now their coming face to face would be something to look out for, and being a female chauvinist, I would unhesitatingly root for her. Her courage is not of the heat-of-battle-against-an-open-enemy variety; it is the cold courage of someone whose nerves can stand the strain of endless jousting against deadly shadows, and at enormous risk.

I just loved her in this chapter. Her spotting the telltale shifts in Pereira's accent. The tenacity with which she hangs in there in the car park, and keeps Karan there too, till Pereira's truth is revealed. The sang froid with which she takes the news that Pereira is having his goons trail her. The speed with which she thinks up, and puts thru, a plan for letting her first remove the bug from Pereira's lapel, and then insinuate herself into his circle, so to speak. Her instinctively making a note of the number of Pereira's SUV. Mata Hari would have approved!

As for the other track, I liked the 'gunmetal' eyes. Much better than the overworked 'coal black', or 'steely'. As for tucking the gun into the trouser waistband at the back, I always find that strange and risky, like keeping your wallet in your hip pocket. So I was delighted when, in the episode about the prison riot, Arjun's gun fell down at a most inopportune moment! A shoulder holster ' like the ones used by Rathore and Ayesha ' is so much more sensible.

And again you have the same two heads snapping up at the mention of Khopoli; I dare say something to do with the laal pari, or part of the shared past of Arjun and Ayesha. But for me, Rosanna comes in at all the numbers from 1 to 10.

Shyamala Aunty
Hello pankhas.. 😃
Back with the next installment..
I'm really happy with the kind of response my youngest one had been receiving.. I know, its just in the initial stages and I shouldn't be too overwhelmed about it.. But then again, who am I kidding; praise and criticism is what we writers toil for, isn't it?! 😉😃

A biig thank you hug to everyone who's read, liked and commented on the FF so far.. 🤗

I've read and replied to a few comments and have realised that I've managed to keep you intrigued.. I can't reveal much at the moment so I shall let the future Chapters do the talking..

Hope you enjoy reading them as much as I do, while penning them down.. 😃


Chapter 3

wow avantika di...👏👏👏 rosy is just brilliant

pareira is the owner of the regia palms and he offered a job to her...what is his intentions...somethinh fishy.😡...well karan nrosy's acting super impressive...so pareira is in trap now... arjun is also observing ayesha so their is also a silent warning 4 her...well i just loved the scene when u describe that she scared from his cold glare...update soon