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yas23

@yas23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

wow lovelly update...love the story
loved the bigining bet of arjuns past was painfull
liked the character of karan nd rosanna
continue soon

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Sorry 4 the late comment!!
Awesome start!! Loved how you explained everything in detail!!
Loved the characters of karan & rosanna!!
This FF is really different but it is amazing!!
Superb writing!!! loved the BG story of arjun!!
Can't wait 4 u to update!!
Continue soon & thanks 4 the pm!!

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@MriduB

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

'Mysterious update' 😛
But i'm confused! 😕
Hopefully ur next update will clear my confusion! 😊

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: tani23
Sorry avantika di...i know i m late in writing dis

but better late den never is all i cud say 😒

Coming to the story...i just read it n i m feeling so happy

the lines u wrote ...about arjun talking wid inspector

the words of wisdom, the words of knowledge he said were Fantastic👏

Loved d way u have given a brief intro of arjun as a child n how he saw d dream of becoming a police officer

Liked his silent talks to himself n to his baba aftr so many long years
his pledge to punish sikander...awesum

Rosana - karan : i liked dem both

u have chosen Karan Kundra for karan's role rite???...

Rosaana has sumthing in her past..dis was evident from her actions

want to know more about her

Conitnue sooonnn

Purva

Hi dear.. Agli baar res karke bhool mat jaana.. 😉😛😆 Kidding dear..

Thanks.. Arjun's past and his relationship with his foster father is going to be a very crucial part of the story in the future.. I'll delve into the depth of his relationship with Gupte's family in the parts to come..

Yupp.. Karan Kundra as Karan.. And I hope you've seen who's playing Rosanna?? 😳😃
More on Rosanna in the next Chapter, I promise! 😃

Thanks!

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Love_Arnie
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*edited*
Congratulations on your new FanFic!
So, Rosanna is in disguise na...
I mean she is Ayesha's sister... But they can't contact
OMG! Its seriously Mysterious
Rhea..isn't there... 😒
Arjun's parents being snatched away second time means... Umm.. Sikander even killed Sanjay Gupte
There are lots of question in my mind... If I start asking na...it will look like a mini update..lol! So I better wait and watch...
and you're skilled with languages kya...?? Spanish, Sanskrit and that Goa wala language...!!
that was wow! Seriously. You have even captured those small details..like 'tumhara friend...' dialouge, that was so realistic. Kudos to you!
Thanks for the PM.
and please update once in a week or two, atleast, please!

Thank you.. 😃
Yupp, she's an intelligence officer on a mission! Na.. she isn't Aisha's blood relative.. More on their relationship in the chapters to come.. 😊
Nope.. Riya's dead.. But Rosy and Aisha are there.. 😃

Lol.. no.. I'd learnt Spanish back in school.. Sanskrit, thoda bohot aata hai.. All thanks to my grandma.. and Goa wala language, is all thanks to having a Goan best friend.. He actually talks like that!! 😆
And well, Sadrakshanaya Khanaligrahanaya is the motto of the Mumbai Police.. 😃😳 That's where I picked it up from..

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Purva

@Tani2804

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: mohabbatgirl

Hi dear.. Agli baar res karke bhool mat jaana.. 😉😛😆 Kidding dear..

Thanks.. Arjun's past and his relationship with his foster father is going to be a very crucial part of the story in the future.. I'll delve into the depth of his relationship with Gupte's family in the parts to come..

Yupp.. Karan Kundra as Karan.. And I hope you've seen who's playing Rosanna?? 😳😃
More on Rosanna in the next Chapter, I promise! 😃

Thanks!

Mujhe Ghajini waali problem ho gayi hain...😆😆😆

i m actually luking forward to Arjun's relationship wid d family...

it s amazing reading abt such relations ..where dey r based upon Love n affection n such relation , i feel personally, are much stronger den blodd relations ...

Arrey i forgot to see Rosanna ka face ...😉...(wo sana khan ki duplicate hain na???😆😆😆)

Waitin for d next parts

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
WOW...amazing start girl! quite different from the usual writing...
Loved it
mystery...hmmm sounds interesting...
and guess what, ur prologue, then the intro has all given me this ajeeb feeling of suspecting each character...be it rosy, ya Karan...lol
it gives me a feel of reading a book...the details, the locations, everything seems perfect...

and yes...loved the BG story of Arjun...nicely plotted!
anyways...looking forward to it!

Thanks Vidya.. Well, it's the first time I'm attempting something different.. Hope I can do justice to it..
Oh.. and I guess suspecting everyone at this stage is pretty normal.. 😉😆😛
Thanks.. Will try n update as soon as I can.. 😃

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Sia

@satanslove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Its an amazing start !!!

Very different from your other FF's and i am sure u'll nail this one to .

I Liked the background story of Arjun but whats in ayesha mind ...😉But more than any characters i love the lady in Red ... she intriguing ,mysterious and i am sure she can give hell to many

Can i request you to write a story on a female villian in arjun who could literally keep them at there toes , fools them everytime and gives them hell . I really wanted a female arjun type villian character who could give him takkar

Enough of my blabbering , the first part of this FF hits bull eye😊

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: sips_crazy

Its an amazing start !!!

Very different from your other FF's and i am sure u'll nail this one to .

I Liked the background story of Arjun but whats in ayesha mind ...😉But more than any characters i love the lady in Red ... she intriguing ,mysterious and i am sure she can give hell to many

Can i request you to write a story on a female villian in arjun who could literally keep them at there toes , fools them everytime and gives them hell.Ireally wanted a female arjun type villian character who could give him takkar

Enough of my blabbering , the first part of this FF hits bull eye😊

hey dear.. thank u! i'm glad u're liking it! as for ur wish, i echo it too.. in fact, i'd even brought it up with anshul on twitter.. and he'd offered me the role.. :p.. well i've got my hands full at the moment. all i can say, if that is what u want, u've landed at the right place! wait and watch the lady in red in action! :)

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

avantika :

well, let me clarify that i'm more bothered about arjun than rosanna, for obvious reasons you know😉. loved the way you depicted arjun's past .. i mean, kahin toh kuch mila uske past ke baare mein which is NOT just about roshini's death !! and what i can infer from the story is , arjun had been sort of adopted by officer Gupte post his parents' death, who was a father-figure and mentor to him in his journey to become the ACP Arjun that he's today. and not to forget, the famous " Samjhe ya Samjhayu ?", toh unhi se sikha janab ne😊. bdw, Gupte was referring to someone else to whom he had said the same things ealier ..was that Rathore😉 ? and about rosanna, she's indeed one hell of a mysterious yet interesting lady, i'm waiting to read what she does next to move one step closer to success. update soon.😊