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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

WOW...amazing start girl! quite different from the usual writing...

Loved it

mystery...hmmm sounds interesting...

and guess what, ur prologue, then the intro has all given me this ajeeb feeling of suspecting each character...be it rosy, ya Karan...lol

it gives me a feel of reading a book...the details, the locations, everything seems perfect...

and yes...loved the BG story of Arjun...nicely plotted!

anyways...looking forward to it!

Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

oh girl!! you are doing great with your mystery works!!

loved the beginning of background info abt Arjun..

now Aisha.. and the new lady.. Karan...

intersting plot yaar!! carry on... waiting for her first target!!

come soon...

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sana

@Luna92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

wow wow wow...amazing👏
arjun ka past...😭
rosy ka attitude..😎
ayesha kya karna chahti hai...🤔
abhi zyada kuch samaj toh nahin aya hai case k baray mein but i m loving it...
wanna read more...
update soon and thanx for the PM.

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846182

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Hey fabulous update... i loved ur story line... Aisha is kind to Arjun.. I really like the way u showed Arjun's past...

and rosana secret...???

This seems to have confused me...!!

is rosana the main lead..??

Oh God i m so confused and only one thing can remove this confusio... UR NEXT UPDATE..!!!

Please come with it fast!!

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

First happy to see sana as rosanna, the lady in red...
Second it was an awesome chap:) arjun's childhood nd the determination part touched my heart...
Third will be w8ing for the next part so update soon... :d
Loved it di:)

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Great update! I loved it! So mysterious! Can't wait to read more!

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Rosy i like her
Hmmm... Target is set, lots of mysterious, i like to read mysterious story
Update was superb dear
Thanx 4 d pm
Waiting 4 ur next part... Update Soon

Edited by jannat89 - 12 years ago