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Aanya

@Aanya.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: -Vaish-
stupid net...

varna i wud have got the first spot... 🥺

so loved the update...

somehow i am loving the present more..

don'y know y though...

correct me if am wrong... pata nhi kyun i have a feeling that armaan didn't like spanish clients and was amzaed that ridz handled it so good... pata nhi kyun aisa mereko lag rha hai...

haan the update was a complete blissful reading...

i am toh waiting for the football match... and the stay over after that...

it was so good how u included all the details of the job and all.. how do u this???😲

i mean such finesse with details is so good..., gorgeous update..

The Spanish clients were disliked in the previous version of LI. Not so much in this one :)

The football match is far away, it's a slow build till there but the story should pick up pace after that :)

As for the details of the job, I actually asked my dad (he's not an architect, he's a doctor but we got our hospital completely remade so) and he told me that architects consult with clients, come up with the designs, consult again, make appropriate changes and then supervise the plumbers etc while everyone does their job. Oh and they do the interiors :)

Thank you so much 😳

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Aanya

@Aanya.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: ..Maitree..
Hey Aanya <3
Just popped to read it all in one go. And Boy, I'm Stunned. Seriously...From the title of the story, to the characters, the histories and the emotions, to the text messages and happenings. Everything...Is like a whole picture. Its like I can see them- smiling, remembering their past, crying, feeling awkward, talking, thinking...Every character is so well- etched, that you feel that this story belongs to that each character of the story...and not only to AR. Your writing style...I just am speechless about that. Maybe I'd say I've fallen in love with it if I already wasn't. Maybe I'll say its WOW, its amazing, its spell bounding...But all of these would fail to describe how immensely your writing has matured. It just shows.

The bonds you portrayed in these 5 parts, is something that many can't do in 30 parts. Kudos to you for that. Especially the part when you mention Ishaan and Riddhima's relationship...there's something that tugs at your heart. I mean, its all so Real. Like somebody's told you a story, and you pen flowed on the paper ( here the case is the your hands flowed over the keyboard 😆) I love this Riddhima- she's a mixture of everything real. Maturity and immaturity, humour, pain, strength and weakness. I adore these Rahul and Muskaan...who love each other, and respect each other, who make their names not only as Riddhima's friends but two very distinct people with a past. And that part with Muskaan pouring out her worries to Riddhima? Somehow I loved it.

Although Armaan hasn't made quite a impact till now, I still Love him LOL. Can't wait to see how the story unfolds. You're going like a Rockstar, and I mean it <3
I know I don't comment/like much, but I swear its just because I don't come on much. Whenever I read, I'll drop a like atleast, if not a comment, I promise.
Love You <3
-Maitree.

P.S. All the best for boards!😊

Hey Maitree 🤗

It's so good to see you here, finally! :)

Thank you so much I'm so glad you loved this version! I love this Riddhima too :D Oh and thank you for noticing Riddhima-Ishaan 😆 And I'm happy you think it sounds real, it's what I wanted. Armaan's character might take time to sink in, I think because a) he has less chapters b) his character is disturbingly ordinary. He doesn't have a past like Riddhima's so he's kind of like you and me, a regular person and maybe in the face of Riddhima's powerful character and her bonds with everyone else, the way they run so deep, kind of lessens the impact of Armaan's character.

I hope that changes for you in the coming updates :)

As for the lack of comments, don't apologize, I know how taxing 11th and 12th is, I've been pretty inactive too. I hope things are going well for you <3

Love you too :)

xoxo

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Aanya

@Aanya.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: Munchkin.
OMG, stop updating. Isn't it enough I have 4 bloody chapters to get on with? Hate you.

P.S. Makes quiet a novelty nai, when someone tells you not to update? LOL.

Don't worry, I'm like, 85% sure this is my last update before boards are over on March 30th. You have plenty of time to give me long detailed comments :]

Yes it does 😆

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SleepingBeauty.

@SleepingBeauty.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Okay so i edited. 🤔

Go read :$

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Aanya

@Aanya.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: SleepingBeauty.
Okay, so i dont know if i ever mentioned how i love the way you chose your titles for each and every update!! Nd then never fail to mention about the neaning, coz i know, hard t accept, i dont think i would have gone back to a dictionary to check up the meanng of the words i dont know of!

You wouldn't find them in a dictionary, they're made up words. I get them from a tumblr blog LOL. And I don't think anyone would get the meaning if I didn't put it up 🤣

Originally posted by: SleepingBeauty.
Aanyaa, with every update that you make, i can never thank my luck enough of coming across Love is at the first place and then you for rewriting this all over again, coz believe me this ff is no less than a proper Novel and you should actually publish this if you ever think of doing that << dont know if anyone has mentioned that to you before but i truly believe that! You can keep writing as your second option to take up as a profession!! Coz you surely deserve it. Even without having a cheesy or romance in the ff still you are so amazing at it!

Adaksfgjfkj thank you so much babe 😳 Um I don't think of writing as a profession but lots of people have told me I should've studied Eng Lit in Oxford or something so who knows 😆 I'm glad you like the story even without the cheesiness :)

Originally posted by: SleepingBeauty.
Okay, no enough of all that and lemme come to your update.. That was really amazing!! I really really love all the Rahul-Muskaan-Riddhima moments. They are so adorable and always makes me go Awww
I love their friendship between each other. Its really rare to see and find!

You know today, while reading this update, i had this that came in my mind that i wanted to ask.. The feelings that you put in out here, is it the same that comes to you in a similar situation! Coz i can actually see how real they look! Like how you would react and act if ever a guy like Armaan comes in front of you. Or how you would react if ever someone says thank you to you 🤔

I agree, that kind of friendship is pretty amazing <3 As for the second part, um yes. This Riddhima is mostly me except the whole shitty past thing and a few other quirks. But yeah, she's me. And I don't say this much because everyone's always like "this Riddhima is so awesome" so if I say she's me it basically sounds really vain but yeah I react like that 😆

Originally posted by: SleepingBeauty.
And hahahaha i loved how you mentioned 50 shades of Gray! LMFAOO i was like OMGG, you did not mention it there! LMAOO And ohh that reminds me, i started reading that and yes, the first part was not as good as the second part << where i am right now! LOLL have you read the second part or the first part was enough for you 🤣

Dude no. I read like 50 pages of the first book before I gave up. And it's not the sex that bothered me. I'm cool with that but the writing sucked man. Like REALLY SUCKED.

Originally posted by: SleepingBeauty.
Coming to the meeting ARmaan and Riddhima had. That was really adorable.. I dont know why you say that they arent falling for each other when i get a completely different feeling reading your updates like this :-

And she has to mentally remind herself not to flush, or smile like she's crazy because what the hell she's a grown woman not a teenager with a crush. Not that she has a crush on Armaan or anything. Oh no, she isn't touching that line of thought with a ten foot pole, thank you very much.

Doesnt that clearly say how she isnt a teenager with a crush. << means she does accept how she is started to feel that small liking towards him. ^ Just clear that for me once! :)

Because they're not. Falling for each other, that is. They barely know each other it's mostly physical attraction and a tiny crush. I mean don't you ever just meet a person who's cute and likes the same things as you do (superficially, at least) and you kind of crush on them? Hell you can kind-of-crush on multiple people at the same time so it's not even exclusive or anything. Idk if I cleared anything up but yeah they're not falling for each other, yet.

Originally posted by: SleepingBeauty.
OMGGG that flashback! That touched me. I loved how Riddhima and Ishaan has a value for their friendship but how after being in a relationship can you still try to remain friends << How much i ever want that to happen if i ever have a BF and then we break up. I have seen people trying to remain friends after that but it gets tough to move on. Hopefully this give me an insight on how you plan to keep them friends and that would help in real as well 😳 But reading the present, i can see how Riddhima has moved on which gets really tough in reality when you are in contact with your ex. I know she is trying to work it out coz she doesnt want to lose a friend like Ishaan and that is something i completely love about her. See if you could fit in somewhere about how she could handle all that in one of your future updates wherever possible!! coz thats something il be waiting for! 😳

So this update is the last till your boards end? Good luck then! ANd let us know when is your next. Will be waiting for that! Lots of love xx

I think it's entirely possible to remain friends after a relationship, especially if the relationship was ended mutually with no harsh feelings or big fights, you know? Sometimes a relationship ends simply because it's run it's course, doesn't always have to be a big reason. I do plan on including the rebuilding of their friendship in the later chapters.

Around last year, I had this friends with benefits (no sex though :P) thing with a friend which lasted for like a week? It only happened because we were bored so. But yeah I'm still friends with the guy and we're just as close if not closer so yeah I think it depends on the kind of person you are :)

This is probably my last update before boards end, yes. There may be another one but no promises!

Thank you so much 🤗

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abditory.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

OK i m way too busyy with my idiotic ejammms 🤢 to analyse and read ur story so uhmm will do it laters 😃

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vaishali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

aanya if u still there then can u please tell me how to use tumblr to get title of the fic... u once mentioned that u use it...

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Maitree

@..Maitree..

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: Aanya.

Hey Maitree 🤗

It's so good to see you here, finally! :)

Thank you so much I'm so glad you loved this version! I love this Riddhima too :D Oh and thank you for noticing Riddhima-Ishaan 😆 And I'm happy you think it sounds real, it's what I wanted. Armaan's character might take time to sink in, I think because a) he has less chapters b) his character is disturbingly ordinary. He doesn't have a past like Riddhima's so he's kind of like you and me, a regular person and maybe in the face of Riddhima's powerful character and her bonds with everyone else, the way they run so deep, kind of lessens the impact of Armaan's character.
I hope that changes for you in the coming updates :)

As for the lack of comments, don't apologize, I know how taxing 11th and 12th is, I've been pretty inactive too. I hope things are going well for you <3

Love you too :)

xoxo

@Bold- why do I have a feeling that I know why you're laughing at this bit 😳

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SleepingBeauty.

@SleepingBeauty.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#289

Okay so yeah that pretty much cleared everything up for me!

And OMG those are self made words? :O Scrap me the link to that tumblr blog if you can.. Lemme have look at these words :D

AND MY DEAR, I agree with those few people who asked you Why you didn't take up English literature! You would have been really good at it! :)

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SleepingBeauty.

@SleepingBeauty.

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#290

Ohh you didn't like the writing in that book! I thought it was all that kinky sex that you had a problem with! Coz that actually was a lot to digest!

And okay now i get it when you said they aren't falling in Love. So Its that first small infatuation you have with a guy that is cute! Okay yeah that happens! That kinda crush happens for every 3rd guy a lot of times lol

And that relationship thing, mutual break up happens really rare.. Like out of 10 only 1 or 2 would have been that way! But then of course you do try to maintain your friendship with that person if that person ever meant anything to you before! But then this is also true that of course when you are in a relationship, you do start feeling for the other person! Coz you've been talking to that person the whole day! You know about what the other is doing the whole day! And when suddenly you feel that Its not working and go apart, you do miss those times which would always come in between your friendship! The one which has gone on for like so many months and later you realise how Its not working and frequency isn't matching, you always tend to miss the other. And that's how it gets hard to move on.
I can't say much about this coz i have never been into a relation! But losing a friend has always been the main reason of not getting one! Coz this reason has always scared me away from relationships!

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