SwaRon OS- Happy New Year Swayam! :D

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

this was really a sweet and a pleasant OS...

thanks for the pm..

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_bellaSwan_

@_bellaSwan_

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

It was awesome one dear . I loved it

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Sunil

@Suni1986

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

awesome os
swayam affected with viral fever nd no one with him
sharon woke up swayam with beautiful peck on his chick
they missed each other so much nd there bond unbreakable
there convo cute, innocent nd enjoyable
finally on new year eve they confess each other there pure, divine n endless
sharon affected with viral flu bt she don't want stay away from him
i love d update

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

This was on of the most sweetest OS's I ever read. Just loved the way it was penned. What made t even more awesome was it was in the sync with the story from the shwo and character were as close to the one which we see in the show. So fab work on that front. COnfession was really sweetly done. One of the most emjoyable OS ever for me. Loved it.

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Suhaima Kazi

@.wanderlust.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Hey ! This is Amaazing x
Seriously! Its beautifully written ! :)

Happy New Year To You As well :D

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Happy new year Mihika... 😊

The OS was downright brilliant...hope u keep giving us many more such thru the year...luvd ur style of narration and the swaron part was a dream cum true really...the last part i saw it cuming and u didnt dissapoint there...well done 👏

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Binuja(binju)

@Anomic_loner

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

aww that was indeed a treat to read for this new year...😊
sick swayam and caring sharon is deadly combo...

I loved the way u started with the irritated swayam who was cursing for his present state...😛
sweet of his friends to come and suggest enjoying the new year's eve at his place...and loved the bro-sis bond btw swayam and taani, though swayam was not sure whether he can handle himself still he did not allow Taani to be stuck with him instead of partying...
and finally my fav part where sharon came as a surprise...she feeding him khichdi, he making her blush, she confessing her love and finally she too fell ill...😆

"I know this was not the most perfect new year's eve. But whatever it was, it was special because she was with me and I was with her. Our impeccable bond needed no one else and we were fine with the fact that both of us were alone then." 👍🏼

all in all i loved it...keep writing more...

ps: HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!