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Posted: 11 years ago

Super duper Awesome update dr.

Phew finally Arjun gained conciousness.

Awww Rathod was too worried for his friend.

Sam somehow felt relieved whn hw knw that Riya is with Sik n alive.

Yayyy atlast thy got a clue to catch Sik coz of Aisha.

The way Riya replied to that b*****d was fab.

Eagerly waiting for the end of Sik.

Thanks for pm dr.

Continue soon.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello friend!!!! I m here with another part .Thank you all for liking this story till now. it's really means a lot to me. & so sorry if I make any mistake. I try my best although can't execute my plan properly on this part for some reason. Still hope, u could enjoy this part.

PART"29C

[sikandar place]

While talking to riya sikandar take his phone from his pocket to make a call. But he can't do it. Cause shree block the communication system of others in this locality apart fron ETF team's by hacking signale. After trying for less than 2 min, sikandar get it that somethings wrong.

Riya sees that he goes to one of the wall of these room & press some password. The still wall open & there are computers. Sikandar check something on it. Then call a man of his to call another boy named ronit. Ronit comes, looks like he is a college student. He ask ronit where was he when someone tracking their signale?? Hearing this, riya get that her team on their way. Cause that is none other than shree who track it.ronit says sikandar that he didn't know anything.sikandar gives him a smile.& just in a moment he take out his gun & shoot that poor boy in two legs.the boy touch the ground with pain.

Sikandar:Ops!! I didn't know there was bullet !!!

Then he ordered his man to shift this wounded boy in one corner of this room.& give a tap on his mouth so that there is no noise.riyas eyes feels with tears by this young boy condition.sikandar could kill him right away.but just give a hard death, he leaves this wounded boy bleed to death.the boy even not look like a professional gang member.may be he just brought him to do Technical work. Inhuman !!!

Sikandar looks at riya & get it what she is thinking by her face.

Sikandar: don't worry! U & ur beloved husband death will be worth to watch more than that!

Riya: time will tell the truth, sikandar. & u r not the one who can control my fate. But , I m very much sure... at the end of the day, u'll b the one standing as a loser. & don't worry, my beloved husband will make sure that!

Sikandar control his anger & start to work in computer. He was keeping an eye on traffic signale camera for safety.& by this he see that ETF team about to enter his area.he goes outside to give his men instruction. Then again he enter the room with gun & sit on a couch & keeping eye on his computer but continue talking to riya. Riya also busy to remove her hand. She start to work like her training period to dodge the rope. & she is very near to do it.

Sikandar[with cruel smile]: u know ur death will be more easier. Cause, at least u know I m gonna kill u!! but his 1st wife didn't even know it!! I just went her house sudden as uninvited guest.

###FlashBack###

Roshni is very happy today. Actually, she is always happy. Cause , arjun never gives her a chance to be unhappy. even He knows very well her silence word... while he refused to take Bappa's blessing at puja.she didn't say anything to him.but, he knows that she is hurt by this action & say sorry to her just that moment. Even the person who didn't believe in God, he takes blessing from him for the sake of her happiness. She is very lucky to hav arjun. & now to increase her happy mood, she gets the world best news for every women that she is pregnant with their 1st child... though she didn't tell it to arjun till now. He called that he'll come earlier today cause his work is about to finish. That also increased her tension. How possibly she could give the news to Arjun! She just reharse many way. But can't like anyway. Then she goes to their house next door tea stall & gives a note to the little boy of the stall who always deliver cutting chay at their house to arjun. & she tell the boy to give this note to Arjun with cutting chay at the evening. The boy agree with a sweet smile.

Then she is just waiting for arjun. It's already night, but he didn't come. Her surprise is about to fade away it's charme. Just then the door bell ring. She open the door with a big & fresh smile to welcoming Arjun. But, Alas! It's sikandar & his men. After a while arjun comes home & ring the bell,but no one open. It's strange. So he open the door with his key. The whole house is dark.suddenly light come & he sees roshni at the gun point.& then a happy family life ruined in some hours. Arjun can't attack them for roshni's safety. Sikandars men beat him very badly. Sikandar is collecting data against him from arjun personal computer. & then just go and finished roshnis life by a knife... cut roshnis name from arjuns hand. Then they all leave. Sikandar think that he killed both arjun& roshni. Cause when he check on them he didn't get pulse.

After this terrible murder of roshni, arjun goes to that house for the last time when he get discharge from hospital. & the little boy in teary eyes come with cutting chay & the note of roshni to give it to arjun.

The paper is folded. " From Roshni with love" it's written upper side of the page. Then inside...

"World best Cutting chay only for the world best husband...as well as soon to be world best papa... :) "

& that just enough to make arjuns pain worst more...

###

Present time:

ETF team on their way & everyone communicating with one another in every second.

[Rathore - Ayesha]

They r taking a rough road. So rathore can't control the car properly. He can't also decrease the speed. Ayesha was loading bullet on her extra gun but can't able to load it for bad driving.

Ayesha: hey.. drive properly!!!

Rathore: I m trying my best in this worst road!

Just a little big rock trouble the car which irritate rathore more.

Rathore: damn it!!

Ayesha[in very low voice to herself]: always show the anger with wrong people... 1 st with me, now with the road!!! Poor road!! What can it do!!?? It can't repair itself! He should shout at responsible person who didn't repair the road!

Rathore[indicating Ayesha]: everyone should talk in proper voice so that another person can be sure that no one is cursing him.

Ayesha: I wish I could curse my Ex-boss from ETF! But unfortunately I can't.

[Arjun,Chotu & shree also hearing their conversation. They aren't actually sure what's that all means! The two r behaving like fighting couple.]

Rathore: Ex-boss!! Huh! Seems like someone get every news very quickly!! Great communication!!

Ayesha: it's not a big deal! When someone sweeped me out from a team without telling me... just give the letter to commissioner sir for approve someone's one sided decision... that's a big deal!

Rathore: it's protocol. I can suspend anyone if there is a reason.

Arjun; what??!! Sam , u suspend Ayesha???

Shree; is it true sir!!

Chotu: what is this sir??

Rathore: stop talking u three at the same time!!it's hurting my ear!! Yeah I suspend her, so what??!! Now stop talking & follow the plan.

Chotu, I m about to enter the place, what's ur position??

Chotu: sir.. we are also closed to the bridge.

Rathore: alright. rawte... I m calling for back up now.

Arjun: as u wish. But, the truth is no matter what, I m not allowing sikandar to breath for one more day.

Just then arjun, rathore, Ayesha hear of gun shot & hand grenade.

Sikandar people attack shree & chotu. They also shoting at them. Chotu is driving & shoting. They are more people in number. But shree & chotu trying their best.at last they succeed here. Unfortunately , chotu lost the control of texi. It meet with an accident. Broke the bridge& about to fall in the big stone full river. Just lightly stuck. Shrees hand cut badly by glass. & chotu is already out of the car(cause he removes his seat belt while shooting). Still shree just holding him . Chotu look at wounded shree & then to the river.it's not too deep but full of stone. Shree have a chance to escape from there. Cause if he fall, he'll die not for water but for stone. At the same time shree will never let Chotu go. But chotu can't afford his friends death.

Chotu; shree...

Shree: yes chotu. Bro, just hold some more second. I m pulling u in this side.

Chotu: don't do it yar! The car will fall with both of us.

Shree: no! it won't. trust me.

Chotu(teray eyes): yes.. I trust u always buddy. (with smile) but, u know, I eat too much! That's why it's difficult for u, brother.

Shree: shut up!! U never eat much!!

Chotu: shree... teams need u, yar!!

Shree get tensed after hearing this & he know that chotu is up to very bad things. Chotu start to remove his hand slowly from shree while talking. But shree hold it more tightly.

Shree: don't ever dare to do anything to me like that , Chotiya!! Don't u dare!!! Please!!!!

Chotu: tell my shooping mall queen that I really loved her. & take care of my Ruby if I can't make it today.

Shree(with cry):shut up!!!

Chotu: I m sorry yar... please forgive me if u can.

Then he remove hand from shree in one jerky.& fall.

Shree cried out with chotu's name loudly.

[Arjun, Ayesha, rathore also hearing the conversation]

Rathore: what the hell is going on there guys???

Rathore stop the car. He& Ayesha come out from the car with gun.& start to running towards shree & chotu's location. They also faced sikandars man.arjun also reached there & covering rathore while rathore run for shree chotu. He helps a crying shree to come out from the car. & hug tightly. But their pain of loss interrupt by the gunshot of enemys.shree & rathore start to fight with gun as well as hand.ayesha & arjun dealing the goon of outside the house.so, Ayesha tell arjun that she gonna taking care here & arjun should go for riya. Arjun enter the house & of course get a huge reception by sikandars men with heavy gunshots. He save himself from the bullet. & shoot them. He search for riya. & finaly enter the room where sikandar hold her like previous... at the gun point.

Sikandar: welcome ACP Arjun!!! After so many years... isn't it? U didn't change a bit at all!!!

Arjun: just like u didn't change, coward. Same strategy !! at least u should fight like a man once.

Sikandar(evil smile): well said. But, unfortunately , I m not gonna change even after ur taunt.

Arjun: of course u r not.

Riya: sorry to interrupt Arjun sir...(with smile) but statistically speaking,there is a huge difference in between ETF member and others.

Just by telling this riya who already removes her hands unarmed the person who is pointing a gun on her& shoot him. Arjun also start to shoot & fight right away. Riya take the gun of dead goon , hide herself by a pillar. Arjun & sikandar also hide themselves & starting to shoot one another. & after sometimes arjun & riya's bullet finished. Sikandar also don't have more than one bullet.

Arjun look at riya & riya get his plan. So, arjun start to leave the hiding place & sikandar about to shoot him. But riya come out too & through her gun to sikandar's hand very hardly so that he drop his gun. Arjun use this opurtunity & start to beat sikandar by hand. Sikandar also fight back.

[Ayesha-Sameer-Shree]

They also fighting very hard. Just then they heard a big sound. It's a helicopter of police. That means back up about to reach in the place. But just then some sikandar's men shoot the helicopter. & unfortunately the pilot get hurt. Still he landed it very carefully. Ayesha kill them who shoot the pilot. Just them a goon of sikandar try to shoot Ayesha, rathore see it. To save her he jump on the way & shoot the goon. Ayesha get tense.

Ayesha: are u alright??

Rathore: yes, of course. U ok??

Ayesha hug rathore tightly.start to cry.

Ayesha: why the hell u always risk urself, stupid!

Rathore: u know.. I am a big stupid. So how could I ever can live without this clever lady??

Just then a goon about to shoot them. So Ayesha jump to the ground with rathore & pull the trigger to the goon after just turning around the ground.

Ayesha; let's go Mr. ACP . we have lot to do. & seems like sikandar running a huge army here. I didn't get it. People didn't show interest to joining police but here a bad people already built a big army by people!! Riddiculas .

Rathore: here is no common people left Ayesha.. they choose wrong way. So they hav to pay for their sin, sooner or latter.

Ayesha: yeah..

Ayesha was about to leave the side from rathore but just then turn & go to rathore... unexpectedly she gives a small kiss to rathore's cheek & run away from this place to fight leaving a shocked rathore behind.

Shree's bullet finished. & a goon attack him from back side. But before he hit shree, two big arm stop him & beat him badly to unconscious . shree truned & look at the person .

Chotu: hey, shree... I always get ur back buddy. So no one gonna hurt u while I m still alive.

Shree gives a quick hug to Chotu, whose left leg is very much injured .

Shree(teary eyes): I was going to kill u after this!!

Chotu(with smile & teary eyes): yeah, I know! That's why I m here... to say sorry to u! with this broken leg!

Shree: I was never gonna forgive u. even I was about to curse u for what u did all my life. If u... if u .. by any chance can't make it today here, I was never gonna forgive u.

Chotu: I know...

Just then rathore is about to enter the house, he look at shree & chotu... he can't even tell himself how much happy he is right now to see chotu again. He just give a smile to chotu & indicate shree to enter the house.

[Arjun-riya-sikandar]

Arjun & sikandar fighting equally. Sikandar give a kick to arjun which fall him in the ground. His head start to bleed from previous injury. But he ignore it.& stand up very quickly & give a flying kick at sikandar's face. Blood comes out from sikandars mouth.

Meanwhile, riya collecting the proves against sikandar from his personal protected computer. It's usefull. Cause, most of the police department think that there is no one called sikandar.

Arjun beat sikandar mercilessly . he hold an iron stick & hurt sikandar's legs & hands.he kicked him numerous time.Arjun also badly injured but still he fight with his life towards sikandar. Sikandar try to fight back but can't.

Suddenly sikandar find a small sharp iron part that could take easily man's life for sure. He hold it & hide it from arjun. Arjun again come to beat him & just then sikandar try to stab arjun. But, fortunately arjun sees that coming & hold it midway. He turned sikandar hand.then he(sikandar) stabbed himself for this action. Sikandar fall down at the ground. Blood is coming from his wound as well as mouth. He couldn't make it more than 10 min. arjun just looking at him... his revenge come to an end. Although it can't replace his lost love but still... at least he can give justice to his late wife. Riya come to him, & hug him by one side.

Sikandar: well... at last u find me to kill ACP Arjun. Par kya faida?! U already lost many things... & gonna lost more things.

Sikandar take out a gun & target arjun( which actually his, that was droped by him after getting hit by riya at the begining of fight, unfortunately where he drop after getting stab, it was lie in there)

Riya come forword to save him. & after seeing this sikandar start to laugh even though he is bleeding very badly.

Arjun try to remove riya from his way.

Sikandar: wow!! U r too damn lucky arjun!! All of ur wife want to secrifise their life only for u!!!?? unbelievable man!! I remember... ur 1st wife also want me to take her llife & spare u... unfortunately I did it.though I had no intention to spare u that night. Still u survive. & it's killing me till now. But, don't worry... I m not gonna die alone today. I can accept anything but my defeat.

Then he moves his target to them to door & shoot it's lock. It's broke & that close the door!

Sikandar( with last evil smile): enjoy ur journey towards the cold heaven!!!

Sikandar died there. As well as Ariya Stuck in that room. The temperature turning cold. & the upper side open place at the cilling start to close very slowly. It's the trap where sikandar used to kill people by freezing them.

Ayesha, rathore, shree & chotu reached the house where already sikandars men dead body lie in. but they can't find arjun riya. But they all were hearing sikandar's talk through hearing device of arjun's.

Shree located arjun's position but when they reach there, the door was already closed... for for ever.

[to be continue]

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Posted: 11 years ago
oh no who will save them now
sam??
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yay...
Sikki dead...
OMG...
Who will save Ariya now?
Please please update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sper awesome amez update
Loveit
Cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
finally sikki is dead
but what ll happen to ariya now?
cont soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi prohelika🤗... awesome chapter😃👏👏👏...i was almost lost while reading ... so sikander died but ariya😲😲😲😲😲...i want update nowww
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awwssmmm part
supperbbb
loved it
plzzz cont sooon
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
my dear
i m speechless 😭
i can visualise d whole update
well sik 🤬
how disgusting he is
omg choree scene was best
one of d best scene of choree i ever read in any fic
raesha were too lovely
fb waas
painful
sik dead yay
wats going to happen to ariya
jaldi update sys
u r one of d best writer ⭐️
ps. pls send me hyperlink of updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waooo beautifuly written..
every think is written perfectly...
finaly sik is dead..
omggg ariya stuck now what gonna happened..
update soon,cant wait to read more...

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