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pm2rose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#951

ch 13

my worst fears coming true ..its arnav who is sick ..even though my heart will break if something happens to him in the end still i will not pester you to change how you have planned this story

btw the last part confused me ..why is parker after arnav ????

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

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Posted: 12 years ago

#952

That was an outstanding chapter. I loved it...and in some ways, it's my favourite chapter to date!

It dealt with two important meetings so simply, the bare, essential thoughts and emotions were there. I get the feeling Khushi's going to shut down for a little while once she finds out...that's the only way to stop the hurt...though she can't do that for long.

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neha

@neag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#953

why two months later...???? confuse
he is dieing...yes and somewhere he is having a hope that he will get a heart for transplant,,,,,,so when will he's gonna tell her...will she feel like betrayed...??? thanx for an update...love it

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trisasak

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Posted: 12 years ago

#954

Dear Readers,

First of all I would like to extended a humble thank you. I could not have imagined EVER that this story would receive SO MUCH love. We are on to THREAD TWO soon! What the? Trying to reply to all you readers is becoming a Herculean effort for an essentially lazy person such as myself. Also I believe it is better for me NOT to reply because I am itching to answer your questions...But it will only give away the story, something that I don't want to do.

I also can't believe people are so invested in the characters and the story. I never thought people would actually say that they would cry reading my work. I am speechless. There are so many of you I have to thank. I think I will end up doing a BIG thank you post once the story is finished.

All I can say is that there is still quite a bit to come. The story will be between 25-30 chapters long. So it's not over yet. Not my any stretch of imagination.

Sit back, RELAX...and enjoy the ride.

Love Sasak

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Amanram

@Amanram

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Posted: 12 years ago

#955

Arnav - you have got yourself in a pretty big mess here with Khushiji - but she deserves the truth and khushi how will she feel with Matt / Arnav and even Anjali having withheld that truth from her - will her heart be in a such a mess that she won't even bother and her doctor instinct kick in that she will want to do all she can to save Arnav - i really think it's time for Arnav to be completely honest with khushi!!!

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Saima

@naj84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#956

what a twist...!!!!
agarly waiting 4 Khushi's reaction.
TC

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#957

and now even after reading your note I feel like bursting into tears... I don't think I'll ever get over this chapter. You can do whatever you wish with the story, its yours after all, and dont answer the questions, that's okay too, but please, please, can you somehow make it a little less painful? please sasak. O don't know how I'll read further if his condition deteriorated further, not because I'm crazy about arnav, but because your writing is so honest, it takes me back to painful times.

love
sonia

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foesb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#958

Finally the much awaited truth is out... So Arnav has been procrastinating getting himself admitted since he was in denial about his illness. Anajali and Khushi's conversation disclosed how Khushi is falling for Arnav, can't even imagine what her status will be when she gets to know the truth. Even though there are so many things to enjoy rather than thinking about the impending doom still can't get over the fact that Arnav is sick😒 and your note after the update made me think twice about the story's closure, anyway lets see how you're gonna explore this plot I'm sure it's gonna be an emotional journey filled with love and sweet moments between the couple. Totally trust your writing skills so waiting to see how you are gonna carry forward the story.

Edited by foesb - 12 years ago

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Archana M H

@archana.mh17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#959

Another brilliantly written chapter! Its an unfair situation for Khushi to be in! Its for her that one feels sorry for the most!

Waiting to find out what else you have in store for the readers!

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Deepti

@deepti1906

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Posted: 12 years ago

#960

i knew it.. it is arnav who is sick..😭
few days back i read a story in which the guy was ill and he died at the end... and god only know how much i cried after that...😭 so i was really worried...but after reading your note i am totally releived that it gonna be a happy ending...😃

i just feel bad for khushi...😔
and how will khushi react to the news is the question now...

wonderful update... and loved the way you wrote it...❤️❤️

do update soon...😊😊

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