ARSHI SS: Heart's A Mess NOTE* PG 146 15/4*

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#451

Amazing and brilliant update, awww I'm loving how the relationship is progressing and they are starting to understand each other so well. Awww poor Arnav got his nose broken by khushi and it was so sad when she explained her reason for why she did it. A beautifully written update, continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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musicfan5

@musicfan5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#452

Awesome Story...Read it in one go and loved it...

Love this strong, independent yet clumsy Khushi...Loving this naughtly...flirty Arnav...

What is Anjali suffering from really?

Eagerly looking forward to read more...Plz update soon...

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archa2810

@archa2810

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Posted: 12 years ago

#453

aww... awesome... but i don't think arnav would have expected a broken nose on his first breakfast date with khushi

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Arshi94

@Arshi94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#454

oh my god...

did she really break his nose ... :O

god that girl has some tough muscles there...

now comin to the entire chapter...

again a marvellous update...

brilliantly executed...

loved all the scenes...

waiting for the next update...

also, waiting for skyfall...[OBVIOUSLY I DO CARE]

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foesb

@foesb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#455

I really like Khushi's character in this ,you have presented a very strong, intelligent and an independent Khushi which is really good. Anjali knows about Khushi am I missing something or was there a convo before between the siblings where they discussed about Khushi😳 anyway now since its established Anjali is also well aware about the brewing relationship between Arshi looking forward to see how the story will unfold.

The phone convo between them was so sweet the way Anjali avoided the question about her health and made sure her brother is happy by using her not so good humour was so cute, says how much both of them care for each other. Other curious part was Khushi thinking that even if their relationship evolves it will end up been not what they wish, that's kind of really confusing, is Khushi hiding something as well? Or I have taken the meaning of that particular monologue in a wrong manner? Khushi using her self defense skills on Arnav and in return giving him a fractured nose, that was the best part! I think over there she kind of opened up so waiting to see when these two will be comfortable with each other to reveal their secrets and share their agony😊